TwiNj OS 'UNSPOKEN GRIEF..!!' For KOMAL.. - Page 2

Originally posted by: Dibs.on.Sid

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You have god gifted talent! Yet another brilliant piece!

How you hold us on the edge with with such deep emotions is beyond me.

Two grief stricken people moaning their loss, healing each others pain. Made me bawl my eyes out.😭

No one can possibly understand a mothers love for her child whether born or unborn.

Such a strong connection they have with their children and that bond was depicted beautifully in this. And yet another wonderful message through this, HOPE. To never let go of it.

Keep these beautiful stories coming our way Riya. Love you lots❤️

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

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Riya,after your hyper post I thought I will play hide and seek with you.

Buttt...

Your story is paralyzed me right now.

I seriously don't know how would I give words to my feelings.

Really this piece left me completely shaken.

This is the one of those pains which shouldn't feel by anyone.

God's Grace to all would be parents.

About the story I just put on light into two matter-

Your plot twist is simply great.

Yes,It's definitely not a good one but for your writing I certainly praise you.This is actually first jerking to the readers.

& I adore TWINJ.U know why?

For their soo amazing bonding or relation whatever you say.

Reality is that,the worst time in anybody's life proves the metal of their so called relations.

Love them for this.

In between this thought strikes in my mind that thee original one did not focus in this matter at all.

They only decide to pass on...idiots.

And also are our Kunj was at all like this which is showed by the OO??

Nah!This is definitely not the old one.I do not find any resemblance neither physically nor mentally.

Ok!I am back now on the story only.

Buddy you told about 13 weeks na?

I exactly don't know the whole details but I want to share little about a incident.I know one of my past colleague who went through miscarriage in her 7-8 month.And I can say this it's disaster not only mentally by mother or family also for would be mother's health.Her body gained all things which would be delivered to unborn child.You know all circumstance or process are there,but whose for these;only he or she is nowhere.

Uff!Horrible it was.

Just think each and every moments reminds you what is happened with you.If u want to forget it;the situation will be not helpful at all.

Phew!!!

At last thanks dah you finished it in hopeful mood else I definitely kill you.

Understand!you better understand.

Gosh!I forget that the dialogue is from which movie??

Ok,I go to search.😆

That's it for now.

Love u🤗

Aditi

Originally posted by: tikit

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Riya this shook me to the core.

Brilliant concept.

I liked the twinj and baby scene.

Loved kunj making funny faces for baby.

Twinkle babys bond aww she was able to make the baby slerp within 5 minutes👏

The alarm clock nd reality strikes.

Aww heart wrenching thing twinj lost their baby.

Its the biggest shock for a mother to lose her baby.

I cannot imagine what twinkle must have gone through when she had miscarriage.

Even though its a month its difficult to forget what happened.

Its really difficult for women to cope in this situation.

I can understand how difficult it must have been for kunj to give twinkle some hope when he himself must not be feeling better.

U know riya they say that when woman has a miscarriage its a very big loss for her but people forget that their husbands the would be fathers would also be in pain s he too lost the child.

I m glad it was kunj who tried to ease twinkle pain by saying ki those whi r special r the first ones to be called by god.

Their angel baby😭

I m glad u just not only wrote abt twinkle but kunjs emotions too.

The letter which twinkle wrote was very emotional.

This is the reason i say riya u r an amazing writer who is not only brilliant in writing happy stories but also sad ones.

I m sure u must have cried while writing it.

This is really nice.

Love u and want to hug🤗u for writing this.

Riya now i want a happy or atleast a hopeful twinj story.

No rona dhona.

Update ur ff riya.

Originally posted by: crazyfan9_sanju

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">riya...i love u for making me cry...</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i'm sure all the ppl who resssed will also cry!😭</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i loved it...esp the lettter part...</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">gosh...its sooo hard...</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">the way he hugs her !!!...😭</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">yup it is easy to say move on...but no...it's not...</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">i'm so happy u ending with this sentence...But she knew She isalready A MOTHERto an unborn little life and she felt blessed to be the One.</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">one day everything will b fine...but never in life she'll forget it...😭</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">riya pure<font color="#333333">brilliance...u did a really good job with this piece of work!...</font></font>

Originally posted by: piu22

Well written.. Played very well with the depth of the unspoken grief of TWINJ

Do write these kind heart touching stories..

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Well Riya. you success knows no bounds!

Cuz you definitely made me cry! And I want to thank you for it!

This was absolutely brilliant, the words, the emotions...EVERYTHING WAS SO REAL AND RAW AND FANTASTIC!

I particularly loved Twinkle's letter. That was splendid!

Well done buddy!👏👏👏

Loved Kunj's words of comfort at the end too.

And the last line!😭

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING!!👏

Originally posted by: Komal1298

Its superb amazing awesome great..

I cried nd i cried a lot.. tq souch doctor.. for dis amazing piece.. love u fr dis😭👏😊

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

so beautiful loved it