Ficlet 7/50:We go on Three.. - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Mehwish brilliant piece of writing.
Love twinj.
I love bucket list idea.
Aww kunj completed twinkles bucket list.
Kiss under eiffel tower is so romantic.
So twinkle is afraid of heights and bungee jumping.
Aww loved kunjs idea of twinj going to bungee jump together.
He he kunj laughing on twinkle.
He he twinkle went on count two only.
Kunj shrieking uncharacteristical laughi could imagine sid s kunj.😆
Bechara kunj he was trying to make sense whats happening with him when he went on count two.
I loved how twinkle seemed to be enjoying bungee jumping.
So it was role reversal for twinj.
Too bad kunj was not feeling well s it was one of his wishes in bucketlist.
I loved the end where twinkle was telling everyone abt kunj shrieking like a girl🤣
This was one siyappa which kunj created for himself.
I could imagine after this incident twinkle would continue teasing kunj maybe to their kids too and the kids expression over this incident when kunj shrieked😆🤣
It was too funny.

Mehwish ur ficlets r too much fun to read.
Keep writing such ficlets.
7 days of ficlets completed👏
43 more to go.
Mehwish love u for writing this🤗

Edited by tikit - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
YOU GIRL ARE ONE HELL OF A WRITER.
THIS WAS SOOO AMAZING.

Twinkle itna drama ke baad you jump on 2 really??? And my bae poor guy was so scared. Mehwish this was sooo adorable and cute and funny. And they are completing their bucket list. My babies. I always wanted twinj to do such stuff in the show but like we know what happened to that😕
But i loved this. waiting for the next one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
❤️ this was sooo cute!!
🤣 of course out of all ppl twinkle would be the one to go on two and would end up loving it instead of kunj 😆
this was amazing, can't wait for tomorrow's!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: amlavs

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Firstly hearty Congo on becoming Goldie..
I luved it v much..
It was a rollercoaster for kunj..
Twinkle ready for another round..
Am loving it..
Excited for next..
Plz continue ur amazing job..
God bless..

Thank you, Thank you😆😃
Glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

This was so amazing

Brilliantly written as always
Had a good laugh while reading this
Twinkle went on two and ended up loving it instead of Kunj 😆
Loved the ending
Poor guy would have been so embarrassed 🤣
Waiting for the next one

Lol! Poor Kunj right?😆
But Thank you!
Glad you liked it!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: adi_FMT_ct

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This piece is simply awesome.
I just love the bungee jumping idea.
And what a twist in end.
Kunj scream actually and Twinkle enjoy the jump.
I simply adore your small small interaction between two characters.
Congrats for one week
& more way to go.

I love Bungee jumping and this idea kinda came from watching too many bungee jumping videos for cheap thrills!😆
Yes! One week done!⭐️
Thanks buddy!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: twinjlover9

its amazing Mehwish
I loved every bit of it
first Twinkle was scared and when it comes to reality she enjoyed but Kunj screamed 😃
and he is that much horrified,and when Twinkle told him to do it once again he ...🤣🤣🤣
its really a hilarious one and that employee helping them with the harness is a very good n intelligent person he understands their situation and gave the perfect dialogue 😆
and now 43 more to go
m so excited

Thanks buddy!
Yup 43 more to go..hope you keep liking them all!😃😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

The tables turned super bad on Kunj!! Poor thing didn't expect what happened and Twinkle definitely enjoyed his reaction more then the jump itself.

So brilliantly written! These fillets are bringing so much joy to me!

The tables have turned on him bad! Yes indeed!😆😆
Ahh,,so glad these ficlets bring you so much happiness!
Thank you!😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

Oh God...

MEHWISH...
The Title & the Story...

Loved it...

KUNJ...my baby...😳
Twinkle...

Ur stories r simply Amazing...

I never thought the story would be this about Bunjee jumping...I guessed it as May be something related to twinj baby...🤣

Thanks buddy!
Wait TwiNj as babies ot TwiNj's babies?!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: kardooks

Mehvish I have no words to express how I feel right now except to say how much I love this.

Quite sure Neno will love it as well.
Another brilliantly written piece, getting closer to mines, I'm to excited can't wait😳
Kunj screaming like a girl was just to hilarious, I'm quite sure twinkle took huge pleasure in relating that story, much to Kunj's dismay.😆

Thanks man...yup getting closer and closer to yours!😆😆
Glad you liked this one!
Well Twinkle wishes she had a camera to video record his scream!😆

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