twinj os::surprises::

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Posted: 9 years ago
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yo folks
guess whos back !!!
yup its meee
and I have another of my os's back in line.
I know I have promised people that something is on the way, so here is one of them, and another I will post soon enough.
this one is for mehwish di !!!!
you know why ? no, I know you don't
and I wont tell you !!!!

well, devils mind works all the time, and the queen works when its night.
here you gooo

SURPRISES
a queen imagination


twinkle tucked in a strand of her hair behind her ear, as she slowly walked into their bedroom, the small muffin in the little plate she was holding in one hand, and the other hand switched on the lights, only to see a sleeping kunj groping the mattress on twinkle's side. she kept the plate on the bedside table, and slipped into the bed, grabbing her husband's hand. the movement instantly relazing kunj's face, as he moved his hand to her waist and pulled her closer, into the cuddling postion that was his favourite.
twinkle glanced at teh big alarm clock on the table, 11:56. she turned her face up and placed a soft kiss on his cheek, as a smile adorned his face. she grinned slightly, and the sat up slowly, craddling his face in her lap. she showered kisses on his face, and then murmured"kunj, get up na, please"
"hmmm-hmmm" kunj snuggled more in her lap, as she tightened her hold around his sleeping frame, "kunj, baby, jaldi se utho na, please" kunj dindt reply, his closed eyes, ans slightly open mouth told twinkle that she had to do something now. she thought for a moment before leaning down to kiss him on the lips. that action woke him, but he responded slowly and softly, his head still in her lap, as they were kissing up side down. one can always trust twinj to do something different. they kissed for a long time, which seemed short enough. when both pulled back for air, twinkle glanced at the clock beside her, it was a minute past twelve. brilliant. they had just started off with his birthday by kissing, the year was going to be a nice one. she beamed as she pecked him again"happy birthday kunj" she grinned wider as she saw realisation hit kunj, and his face lighting up"we just started my new year my kissing !!" he leaped with joy and smiled, "yeh hui na baat" as he sat up in a better postition, grabbing his wife gently to make her sit in his lap as she continued laughing at teh evidnet joy of kissing her on his brithday.
he pressed a kiss to her cheek, as she leaned to the bedside table to grab the muffine, lighting the candle on top and bringing it to him, he smiled as her wife, with her innocent happiness asked her in her childish voice to make a wish. twinkle smiled at her hubby, who had now closed his eyes to make a wish, he made one and blew the candle, gently bringing the muffin to twinkle's mouth only to be left with the half muffin in his mouth, as she sat laughing at his face again. he broke the rest of teh muffin and pushed it into her mouth as she looked at him, suddenly rubbing his cheeks hard. a confused kunj and a yet again laughing twinkle"please stay like this, please do minute na," twinkle grabbed her phone that lay beside her and switched on the front camera, abrubtly stopping"pehle promise karo gussa nahi karoge" she spoke in her baby voice, something kunj could NEVER refuse, "nahi karuga, promise" the grin on twinkle's face was worth it and her excitement of taking a selfie was even cuter. she adjusted herself on the right side of his lap, and threw her left hand over his shoulder,"you had promised okay ?" as she brought up the camera, and glanced at him"twinkle kunj sarna" he whispered,"maine promise kiya tha ki mai gussa nahi karunga, and mughe gussa aa bhi nahi raha hai," twinkle beamed at his face, that looked really adorable, with one side of his face covered in vanialla cream, and teh other side in chocolate cream. she pecked his chocolate side, licking some chocolate for herself, clicking a selfie, as he resumed speaking,"but maine yeh promise nahi kiya that ki mai badla nahi lunga" he whispered as she made her way out of his lap, before he could make a move.
"nahi, yeh fair nahi hai kunj" she whined as she say kunj getting off the bed "please na kunj, sorry na" as kunj advanced towards her and she moved to teh otehr side,"kuuunnnjjj please na,pleaseee" kunj smirked at her as he caught her"aaagh" she shrieked laughingly as kunj ticked-jostled her . she was now in his arms, as she leaned as far as she could, still giggling. kunj moved forward gently and rubbed his cheek against hers, and then retreating, "birthday boy ko koi bhi mana nahi kar sakta hai," as twinkle giggled at his face, as he slightly lowered her to the ground, "aur tumhara woh cute sa almost dara hua face is worth it" he earned a mock smack on his arm, as twinkle giggled, and he ran, around the room.
she stopped abrubtly and looked at kunj, who replied with a confused look on his face"kyaa hua? ruk kyu gayi?"
"tum mughe andhere mein gumne mat dena, and girne mat dena, and haath bhi mat chodna, and darane ki koshish bhi mat karna. thik hai?" she spoke in a single breadth as she watched kunj take in her words, "ha thik hai, but tu yeh sab achanak se kyu puch rahi hai?" as he caught a hoodie she threw his way, "kyuki, " she adjusted her pink bunny pj's and kunj wore the hoodie"hum neeche jaa rahe hai."
****
"kunj woh kya tha?"
"twinkle mai hu na tere saath, itna mat dar, tughe kuch nahi hone dunga"
"kunj, seedi se neeche gir gayi toh bohot dard hoga kya? "
"twinkle, yeh raat mein nikalne wala kaam tera hai, mera nahi, mughe kaise pata hoga?"
"kunj, aaa- mai tapakne wali hu na?"
"twinkle, meri siyappa queen, tughe mughpe bharosa hai na?"
"puchne wali baat hai?"
"toh fir tension mat le"
"thik hai, try karti hu"
"kunj? yaar, hum ab na, ghar ki light on karke soyenge, okay?"
"ha meri maa, but pehle bata hum neeche kyu jaa rahe hai?"
"shhh"
"kya hua?"
"arre, tension mat lo, its just the surprise"
"oh okaahhh"
"zorr se mat bolo sab jag jayenge"
"ha thik hai"
finally the couple desecended teh stairs and were out of the house. they stood in the moon light shining down upon them, faces cleaned of all cream, kunj in a baby blue hoodie and navy blue tracks, and twinkle in pink bunny pjs with a small backback swong lightly on one arm. she beamed at him and he beamed back.
"tum mughpe bharosa karte ho na?" she asked softly, as kunj frowned at the question, tucking a hair strand behind her ear he moved closer ad said"twinkle, yeh toh obvious si baat hai na, tughpe toh mai sabse zyada bharosa karta hu, kyu tughe is baat pe koi doubt hai?" twinkle shook her head, "i know mai yeh second time bol rahi hu" she she pulled him inside the gates of taneja mansion"but please gussa mat karna."
****
moments later they stood infront of a black ad gold encosse FE TI XX, kunj's mouth literally hanging open and twinkle grinning at the bike, as she stroked its seat, "yeh hai mera pehla pyar, meri pehli and akhri bike, which bhai gifted me on my 18th birthday,"she smiled at teh memory, as kunj stared at her, his mouth still hanging open, "and maine us din tumhe is bike ke baare mein apne kisi friend se baat karte hue suna, and you seemed pretty impressed with these ones" she continued, as she held his hand, his mouth STILL hanging open,"and mai mere birthday gift kisi ko nahi deti hu, its a twinkel rule, but tum mere husband ho, toh jo mera woh tumhara, toh yeh possession bhi ab hum DONO ka hua na?" she grinned slightly.
kunj looked at her ,and then at the bike, he repeated this quite a number of times, and then he swallowed. "encosse" he squeaked, "encosse FE TI XX" twinkle replied,"you have an ecosse" he squeaked again, "correction, WE have an encosse" she replied again, "its one of the most expensive ones even today," he swallowed again, "correction, its the fifth most expensive one in the world" she smiled as she replied. "you know about bikes" he spoke, still not over the fact that he was just made teh co-owner of one of the best bikes in teh world.
"yes i do," twinkle whispered back, "i loved biked since i was 12, deewani hu mai bikes ki, matlab, god, mughe bas bikes dikhti thi road par, ma joke karti thi ki mai galti se ladki hu, kyuki as per her the knowledge i had about bikes and all of these was something that none of teh boys she knew had.i was - correction- am, the person to consult when bikes come into picture."
kunj still stared as she continued"pura khandaan janta tha is baat ko, and then on my birthday" she beamed"bhai just brought me out here and ta-da" she looked dazed"love at first sight, us birthday par, i traeted my folks with a road ride picnic," she looked up at him.
he swallowed again"tu and bikes? mai imagine bhi nahi kar sakta tha, " he spoke with a surprised tone, "seriously twinkle, its the best surprise ever" he hugged her as she smiled, "another is yet to come, " she whispered. "and what might that be?" he pulled back slightly to look at her face, but she pulled apart more, as she held his and and walked over to the bike. swinging her leg across the bike and sitting on it, she whispered"kunj sarna, meet your one and only sautan, " she laughed motioning to her bike and asking him to sit behind.
"wait, bike meri sautan samajh aata hai, but tu samne kya kar rahi hai?" he gave her a confused look, "no hold up" he swallowed again,"dont tell me you know how to ride bikes?"
twinkle just laughed.
****
they say bikers talk with the wind, but twinkle sang, danced and partied with the wind. twinkle had warned him right, the bike was his sautan. twinkle looked carefree and happy as she rode it. teh speed was fast, and the night was long, she smiled and laughed more than she generally did. at moments she lifted both her hand into the wind and gulped in air, and moments when she would lean back into kunj;s body to enjoy all of the scene.
"waise yeh tune sachi mein surprise kara tha mughe" kunj spoke, as teh couple stood on the ground, leaning against the bike,as twinkle opened her backpack adn took out a box to reveal garlic cheese breads, handing one to him as she replies"i know, yeh baat sarna family mein kisi ko nahi pata hai."
"matlab i know ki tere dimag mein kuch problem hai, and tu normal ladkio jaise kaam nahi karti but din bhar salwar suit pehen ke rehene wali, itni achi biker hogi, pure time baatein karne wali, bikes ke baare mein itna janti hogi, who would have thought?" kunj gave her a surprised look, as he laughed. "leking ab toh tumhe pata hai na, toh ab decided, har saturday and wednesday mai akele meri baby ke saat hoti thi, ab tum bhi aaoge? okah?"she gave her my-decision-is-final-so-dont-argue look as kunj nodded laughingly, "this is turning out to be the best birthday ever" he smiled as twinkle pressed a kiss to his cheek, "par ek baat sahi nahi hai" kunj spoke with mock fear,"meri ek sautan hai, pata nahi kab se hai, and mughe aaj pata chal raha hai?" twinkle giggled as she leaned into him, turning around to half hug him, as one of his hands rested on the bike as the leaned on it, and one hand around his wife, as they looked on to the moon.
they say birthdays are special, i cant help but agree.
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.Anjum. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww me gosh 😳
It was such a sweet beautiful n pleasant surprise 😃😳
You are such a gr8 writer 😳
Plz do write more 😊
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Oh my god Sakshi,beautiful OS 👏 It was indeed very nice.loved the cute romance between twinj and the interest of twinkle in bike please write more like these 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jambread3

Oh my god Sakshi,beautiful OS 👏 It was indeed very nice.loved the cute romance between twinj and the interest of twinkle in bike please write more like these 😳


aww thank you
hehe, im more interested in bikes than anyone
well, koi nhi,i will write more like these now
love you loads
sakshi
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Originally posted by: .Anjum.

Awww me gosh😳

It was such a sweet beautiful n pleasant surprise😃😳
You are such a gr8 writer😳
Plz do write more😊


hehe thank you so much
im glad you think so
sure will
love you loads
sakshi
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Awesome Sakshu,
Just loved it 😊 <3
Very Well Written

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That was so cute and adorable
loved it!
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Sakshi yaar cnt explain how amazing it was...
Superbbb...
U rocked it ...
Lve u
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Wowww sakshi
Its sooo wonderful..
U always write something different..
Plz do.write more..
Its sooo nice to read..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Cani say I am beyond flattered to have this wonderful wonderful piece dedicated to me!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!😳😳😳
🤗

Everything about this was beautiful!
Loved their upside down Kiss
Loved their selfie! VERY MUCH!
Loved how Twinkle knew how to ride a bike and know so much about it!!
And I ABSOLUTELY LOVED...how Twinkle shared this significant part of her-her most valuable gift with him!!

BEAUTIFUL!!!
AND THANK YOU!!
❤️❤️
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