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Priya

@priyanvs

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#171

aww... such a lovely update dear

i loved it dear

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Oye Hoye!!! Weren't you waiting for my comment 😆

I am basically on Cloud 9...

How did you manage to write what I wanted Shakti!

Sahil was such a kameena, but then just like Yuvi, he was a big TwiNj shipper🤪

That Angry Sarna was so HAWT to imagine (hot with anger☺️)

But then, Angry Sarna was nothing compared to Twinkle Taneja!

Just what I wanted to read! I wanted her to blast like a pressure cooker and she did❤️

That was the best part! How she openly told him, challenged him, didn't let him speak, hit him, pushed him, basically that whole scene was so apt and so lovable! Thinking about it was so satisfying... I so wanted to read an angry Twinkle blasting on Kunj, fed up of him...

And then, the last part was so cute

The dramatic flare, where Twinkle's words echoed in Kunj's ears... How he thought 'Someone like me' (That line was ❤️)

Then his reactions when he realised! Like basically he was laughing on himself... 'Kunj and Twinkle sounds perfect because they are perfect' ❤️ .. You can't get a better replacement for this line, honestly!

Now I am excited about the proposal so much! When your writing will help me imagine Twinkle's face! Because that will be worth watching /imagining! Continue soon Girl!

P.S. Just tell me one thing... I know you are going to be very confused, but I wanted to know your favourite colour combination! (Don't think I am insane 😛 I actually want to know)

Edited by Black_Maniac - 9 years ago

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#173

YES! YES! bloody yES!!

Damnnn I am soo happy Twinkle have Kunj a piece of her mind!

And it was sooo beautiful!! I LOVED IT!

Ok so I love it when guys get jealous but your jealous Kunj is WOW!!!!

So happy to seeKunj finally came to his senses and realized he LOVES Twinkle!!!

I love how you have written and developed this. It is beyond amazing!!

👏👏

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anisha

@Anisha-k.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Shakti Shakti Shakti Di!!!!🤗

U'r amazing!👏

Gosh...u just took my breath away!😛

Idk why i didn't read it earlier?!😕

I'm so pissed off on myself!

But no worries...at least i read it today!😃

And please di...it's a big request...😭😳

UPDATE THE NEXT CHAP SOON!!!😭😭😭

U see i'm crying coz i really want the next chap updated TODAY!!!

Please itna toh karsakte hona mere liye! {U only small sis}😳😳😳

If not for me then for BUNNY?!😲😉

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

😳😳 thanks so much tashu! :) i'm so glad you liked it!
😆😆 angry sarna is always fun to write!
sahil - what a kameena! waise there was a sahil in my life as well 😆😆😆 and A took care of him in a similar fashion 😆😆
and the picture is also an inclusion from real life 😳
sooo glad you liked it! i'm 75% done with the next update, i'll def update that in a few days! 😊
thanks so much tashu 🤗

I hope he gave the creep in your life a good beating to never to that to any other girl!

Aww!the picture part was the sweetest.

75% done!okay for now I'll rejoice in that;)

Love you so muchhh!

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Finally he realised 😆
Loved the update as always Shakthi 😳
Waiting for the next part
Update soon

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livelovelaughh

@livelovelaughh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Amazing update :D please update the last part soon !!!

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Shakti nice update. Kunj is an idiot for not realising his love for twinkle. Now that he has realised his love for her i want to see how he proposes it to her.

Shakti luv u for this ss. A big🤗to u for writing it. Update soon and thanks for the pm.

Edited by tikit - 9 years ago

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FK (Fatima Khan)

@.Anjum.

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Such a lovely beautiful n cute update it was 😳

So lovely bond btw twinj 😳😃

Plz continue soon 😃😳

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...Shakti...

@...Shakti...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: twinjlover9
ohhh so Kunj sarna realized his love
I can't even describe how much I liked this simply saying amazing ,nice etc seems so small
a very lovely portrayal of twinkle
Yr I was just thinking can't this be the new story for Twinj but what can we do CVs doesn't have that much good brain that much you have
I read this whole story two three times today and really this story ever time sounds like a perfect movie every emotion is beyond perfect...
plz do write more stories...
you know m so hungry for your stories
eagerly waiting for the proposal
m imagining what Kunj will do as he said it will be amazing n unique as twinkle is...so it will be much more interesting
thanx a lot for the PM for this mind blowing update
once again m saying plzzz update soon

aww thanks so much hon (sorry i dont know your name 😳😳)

that's so sweet yaar! if only cvs would just hire me! 😆😆 just kidding!

that really means a lot i'm so glad this SS is turning out to be so nice and i'm so happy to hear that you like reading it more than once!

i hope you like the proposal as well and i hope it doesn't disappoint!

thanks so much! so glad you liked it! :) i'll def update the teaser by tonight/tomm! and the chapter will follow shortly 😊