TWINJ OS - TUJH PAR SIRF MERA HAQ HAI

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey all.

So this is the first time I m trying to write something. I've never done this before so pls spare me if you found its bad.

This is just after all this marriage drama ends.

Twinkle was walking alone on the road with broken heart. All the marriage rituals are keep coming infront of her eyes. She remember the vows she takes with uv, how he put sindur in her maang the mangalsutra thing. And tear started rolling down her eyes. Suddenly one car is coming towards her with fastest speed but twinkle was so involve with her thought that she is not listening the horn voice. The car is coming towards her and just about to hit her when suddenly someone grab her with her hands and she came out of her thought. It was none other than Kunj.

Kunj - tera dhyaan kidhar hain? Tujhe gadi k horn ki aavaj sunai nahi deti kya?

His face filled with full of anger, frustration and eyes filled with all tear,pain & care.

Twinkle just looked at his face and she understood how much he is hurt right now. She just lowered her eyes. And says

Twinkle - I m sorry kunj

Kunj looked at her with confusion.

Twinkle - I m sorry kunj. Sab khatam ho gaya kunj sab khatam ho gaya. Main haar gayi kunj main haar gayi. And she break down crying loudly. Ye sab meri galti hain kunj sab meri galti hain.

Kunj - ye tu kya bol rahi hai

Twinkle - ye sab meri galti hain. Meri vajah se hamara rishta hamari shadi khatam ho gayi. Main janti hu tum mujhse gussa ho,bahot naraj ho mujhse kyunki is bar maine aisa siyappa kiya hai jise tum chaho to bhi thik nahi kar sakte. Par pls kunj trust me maine tumhara trust jarur toda hain but maine hamare rishte ki maryada nadi todi, maine yuvi ko mere karib to aane diya but use mujhe chune nahi diya. Pls kunj tum mere or yuvi ko leke apne dimag me koi sawal ya shaq mat rakhna .

Kunj just grabbed her by her arms and looked in to her eyes with all the love, passion and anger at the same time.

Kunj - nahi twinkle sawal to mere dimag me bahot sare hai tujhe or yuvi ko lekar

Twinkle was now having completely broken expression on her face

Kunj - but un sawalon ka javab mera dil janta hai. Mera dil janta hain ki tune ye sab jo kiya vo sab mere liye kiya, meri jaan bacha k liye kiya, aur tu janti thi agar tu mujhe ye sab batati to main is sab k liye kabhi tayar nahi hota, main mar jaata but tujhe us yuvi k pas jane nahi deta. Main janta hu twinkle tuje and I trust you. Main jaanta hu tu kisi aur k tere paas aane nahi degi.

Twinkle was just listening all this having small smile & full satisfaction on her face. She was just wanted to hug him tightly so she come close to him but by mistake her mangalsutra got stucked in kunjs shirt and she realized that she now married to yuvi and she just take few steps back.

Kunj looked at her & she just started crying again.

Twinkle - kunj yuvi ne mere maang me sindur bhara, mujhe mangalsutra pehnaya, mere sath fere liye iska matlab ab mai uski biwi hu or vo mera pati. Ab mujhe uske paas jana hoga, uski biwi ban k rehna hoga. Nahi kunj pls mujhe usk pas nahi jana,mujhe usk sath nahi rehna kunj. Isse better hain mai mar jau kunj,main uske sath nahi reh sakti, mujhe usk pas nahi jana

Kunj now loose all his patience & control and pull twinkle by her waist. His one hand is around her waist and onether is around her neck. He hold her face very close to him

Kunj - just shut up ok. Kitni selfish hai tu mujhe bachakar khud marne ki baat kar rahi hain. Ye nahi socha k tere bina mera kya hoga. Khabardar agar tune dobara marne ki baat ki to. Aur rahi baat yuvi ki to sirf phere lene se,maang me sindur bharne se ya fir gale me mangalsutra dalne se vo tera pati nahi ban jayega samjhi tu. Nahi manta mai ye sab rasmo ko in rivajo ko.

And he just remove that sindur from her head and discarded the mangalsutra.

Kunj - Twinkle insano k liye rivaj hai, rivajo k liye insaan nahi. Aur ek baat...

He agained grab her by her waist and neck. They both were so close to each other that nose are touching each others nose.

Kunj - tu sirf aur sirf meri biwi hain aur main tera pati. So dubara kabhi mat kehna ki yuvi tera pati hain. Tu sirf meri hain or tujh par sirf mera haq hain. Teri baato par, teri smile par, teri rooh par, tere dil par yaha tak tere body ke har part par sirf or sirf mera haq hain samji tu. Or yuvi ki vajah se ye aasu bahana band kar kyunki tere aansuo pe bhi mera haq hai.

Twinkle eyes filled with tears of happiness after listening all this.

Kunj - Aur tu kab se ye marne ki baat karne lagi meri siyappa queen to aisi nahi thi vo to bahot strong thi. Vo to jangli sherni ki tarah hai.

Twinkle - ha kunj par lagta hain ki vo sherni ab kamjor ho gayi. Usme abhi ladne ki takd nahi hain

Kunj - kamjor kaise ho gayi. Uska ye sher hai na use takad dene k liye. He just cupped her face.

Twinkle just keep staring in his eyes.

Twinkle - kunj agar tum mere sath ho na to mai kisi se bhi lad sakti hu.

Kunj - main hamesha tere sath hu. Yaad hain na hum dono team hain.

They both hugged each other tightly. Both were enjoying their moment thankfully there was no one on the raod as it was very late.

They broke the hug.

Kunj - dekh abhi 11.45 baje hain mera bday abhi khatam nahi hua hain. Aur mujhe abhi tak kisine koi gift nahi diya hai to apne babaji ko bol ki mujhe mere bday gift me meri wife,meri siyappa queen, meri twinkle, meri jaan de de.

Twinkle just smiled at this.

Twinkle - I promise babaji tumhe tumhara ye gift jarur denge.

Twinke come for ward and kissed him on his lips. Sooned kunj joined her and the kiss became passionate and they both share their first kiss.

Twinkle - or ye gift meri taraf se. and she blushes.

Kunj - hey baghwan thank you so much. Mere bday ka pura din itna khatarnak tha ki mai ise bhoolna chahta tha but thankfully meri biwi ne kuch aisa kiya ki ye mera sabse memorable bday rahega.

And they both giggled.

Kunj - chale us yuvi ka band bajane hamari barat leke.

Twinkle - twinkle nodded with a wink and they both started walking to home with hand in hand.

So that's it. Hows it guys. Positive negative feedback welcome.

Hope you like it. This is unedited so pls adjust with all the mistakes.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is just awesome
Just loved it
U know it doesn't seem like this is your first time
Because this is so well written
Do write more because this is just amazing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that was awesome
great dialouges
bohottt acha thaaa yaar
I hope twinj stay together
aaagh, I loved the story
do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey I think we need to change d CVS of d show y don't u apply!!
That would be amazing cuz this storyline really toucvhed me!! I wish a is a hi ho
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the OS 😳 beautifully written
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Posted: 9 years ago
#6
Awww this was soo sweet yaar.
You did an amazing job. It's such a lovely os. Loved each and every bit of it. You did a brilliant job considering it was your first time.
It was written beautifully.
Hope to see more of your work 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...everything was described so beautifully
kunj's emotions twinkle's sadness everything is just perfect...
the gift twinkle gave to kunj was so adorable
and the ending was also so cute
Kunj saying chl us yuvi ki band bajate h ...and twinkle winking on that...m literally imagining the whole scene
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshi2000

This is just awesome
Just loved it
U know it doesn't seem like this is your first time
Because this is so well written
Do write more because this is just amazing


THANKS😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..queen..

that was awesome
great dialouges
bohottt acha thaaa yaar
I hope twinj stay together
aaagh, I loved the story
do write more


THANKS😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NG162

Hey I think we need to change d CVS of d show y don't u apply!!
That would be amazing cuz this storyline really toucvhed me!! I wish a is a hi ho


LOL agar main cvs ki jagah pe hoti to pura episode twinj ka romance me hi chala jata.
anyways thanks😳

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