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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: neverlandspirit
Ohhh...this is sooo interesting!!!!
I am so hooked on this story, it's absolutely brilliant!!
👏
Eagerly looking forward to more soon😃

Thank you so much.. I am really glad u liked it.. 😳

Its goin to get more interesting ...ahead trust me...

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

gogo babes i am so sorry about being this late

exam time

anyhow i loved this!

the whole concept is too good. idk why but reading this made me super happy

kunj is our very own angry young man lol

i loved how the whole encounter was written and the op was excellent

his meeting with twinkle gave me the feels

Mr Sarna is clearly affected by this dame for sure

and he scared the girl for sure

i am excited to see this love story develop

do continue soon

signing off now

still have teds' and NVL's stories to catch up on

love ya tho

Edited by .Ragini. - 9 years ago

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kardooks

@kardooks

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I an totally intrigued with this story, you really write so well, all the emotions are captured perfectly. Can't wait for you to update I'm officially a huge fan of your work!!

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: .Ragini.
gogo babes i am so sorry about being this late
exam time
anyhow i loved this!
the whole concept is too good. idk why but reading this made me super happy
kunj is our very own angry young man lol
i loved how the whole encounter was written and the op was excellent
his meeting with twinkle gave me the feels
Mr Sarna is clearly affected by this dame for sure
and he scared the girl for sure
i am excited to see this love story develop
do continue soon
signing off now
still have teds' and NVL's stories to catch up on
love ya tho

Aww Raghuu rulayegi kya Sorry bolke... Pagli i knw exms tym hai...isiliye maine b disturb nai kiya...nai toh pata hai ne .Me kaise piche padhti hu tere..

Hehehe.. I am soo happy tht u liked thia concept ..

Yes Kunj is A Angry Young man... .

I bet U'll love this story.. I am kinda trying to bring in the feeling of movie...

I love u baby..

Pls Reads Teddys and NVL...thy have done an incredible job.. 😳

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: kardooks
I an totally intrigued with this story, you really write so well, all the emotions are captured perfectly. Can't wait for you to update I'm officially a huge fan of your work!!

Thank u soo much dear.. I am glad u liked it.. 😳

Sty Tuned its goin to b very interesting .

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

I'm late I know but I love this concept! I'm such a sucker for such storylines.

I was going to ask if Twinkle would be one the girls that gets smuggled but then I dont think that'll happen now. Unless I just gave you the idea 😳

Whatever lol I really enjoyed this, please update soon! Cant wait to see how Kunj softens towards Twinkle. And poor Twinkle thinks she's a wh**e. I'm already getting giddy thinking about the amount of times protective Kunj comes out to defend her honour

P.S. I know this is minor but can you please make the font colours slightly darker? The light versions really play with my vision 😆 Thank you!

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: kusiya
loved it...pm please 😃

Thanks Dear.. Yup sure..😳

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Tranquility123
I'm late I know but I love this concept! I'm such a sucker for such storylines.

I was going to ask if Twinkle would be one the girls that gets smuggled but then I dont think that'll happen now. Unless I just gave you the idea 😳

Whatever lol I really enjoyed this, please update soon! Cant wait to see how Kunj softens towards Twinkle. And poor Twinkle thinks she's a wh**e. I'm already getting giddy thinking about the amount of times protective Kunj comes out to defend her honour

P.S. I know this is minor but can you please make the font colours slightly darker? The light versions really play with my vision 😆 Thank you!

Thanks so much dear.. I am glad u liked it...

Nope no Twinkle won't get smuggled... Hehehe.. I liked the Idea.. Though.

Sty tuned to knw wat happens next.. Its kinda filmy story..

I'll surely make the Font Darker...

Sorry for tht.. 😳

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Cloudy_Noon

@Cloudy_Noon

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Sona dearly it is so heart aching and both Kunj's and Twinkle's characters have been wonderfully portrayed. The plot is different and so are the characters. The dashing and angry young man Kunj and lovey-dovey and down to earth Twinkle are just complete opposite of each other yet something is there which is magical between them. You just created the magic. Please do update soon. 🤗

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17.sonal

@17.sonal

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Cloudy_Noon
Sona dearly it is so heart aching and both Kunj's and Twinkle's characters have been wonderfully portrayed. The plot is different and so are the characters. The dashing and angry young man Kunj and lovey-dovey and down to earth Twinkle are just complete opposite of each other yet something is there which is magical between them. You just created the magic. Please do update soon. 🤗

Thank you so much dear... I am glad u liked it,,,

This concept is vry different. .. dunno hw many will accept it...

Fingers crossed