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Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

OMG! this is just amazing

The idea is just mind blowing cant wait for the next chapter

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Piyali

@PiyaKaira

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Oh my god this brilliant!

The concept is so unique.

I loved it!

I feel terrible for Kunj.

Amazing update and cont. soon!

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996203

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

I have one thing to tell u both!...

..I love u...srsly...

this is just... amazing...amazing ..amazing...!!...

Please..continue soon!

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_AppyFizz_

@_AppyFizz_

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

This was amazing!

Kunj's disbelief and frustration at the thought that he was responsible for Twinkle's disappearance was also beautifully portrayed❤️

Can't wait to read more!😳

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Blame it on my my habit of watching chick flicks and rom-coms but I figured out the plot as soon as I read the third line and I cant explain how much I squealed at that point in time 😆

I love the story line! Serves Kunj right tbh but please dont torture my poor baby so much, I cant handle his heartbreak 😳

I was going to place bets on the fact that it was a dream but obviously not(?) Waiting to see what you two have in store for us. Great collab guys, loving this. Update soon!

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Chaaru

@chaaru26

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

This is just mind blowing!!!!!!

Very unique concept.

Kunj's emotions were beautifully written.

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floral

@floral

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

omg it was just amazing infact mindblowing

i just loved it

so was twinkle a part of kunjs life or was she a part of his dream

why everyone is acting strange like they donn't know the person named twinkle

did something bad happend to twinkle

plzzz do continue soon

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: Sdea
omg this was mind blowing. Such an amazing concept.Loved how kunj was not ready to believe that his wish was granted.you guys are epic. plsss continue soon.

Aww...Thank you!!😃

Glad you liked it!