Trapped in the Past and Present TwiNj SS Part 10 PG26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva
Wow dear😃seems a nice concept 😳I am excited 😛
Plz continue soon 😳

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#42

Originally posted by: --Jenelle--
Anam please update soon.. I'm so excited for more...IT'S AMAZING👏

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Thanks Jen🤗
Glad you enjoyed
Next part in a few mins

eagerly awaiting😉

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Anisha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Loved the update Anam 😳

waiting eagerly for the next part

Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

beautiful update Anam. loved it <3

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Anam Di it was a very nice update..
The whole suspense is so well built...
Tbh, Mahi is irritating me 😛
I am so excited, Kunj's last line 😳

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Hmm Chapter 2 was super doooper awesome choco aapi.

Loved the family talk and then everyone forced twinkle but main thing which I liked is prem supporting twinkle.

So there are 4 kids on taneja house Hmm. Prem twinkle ishaan and then mahi. Wow.

Nicely crafted story.. I must say.

Coming to the breakfast scene everything was so sweet.. As everyone got worried for twinkle but one thing I felt bad is for heer bhabhi.. So much work for poor soul. It was good she asked Prem to make his own coffee Hehe. And yup heer works as well omg supergirl lol

Aww that sweetie riya.. It was so awesome lunch scene.. Loved it..

Oh and them comes the promo scene..

They went and met maan Singh khurana.

Uff.. Such a boring name. Lol..

Sorry.. But it was hilarious twinkle making faces. But then read the next part and felt maan was nice man.. Hmm.. Mahi is irritating me now. Huh.. So finally twinkle is forced to accept..

Next comes Kunj chinki and muskaan scenes. Umm.. Something siyappa here. I want to know who is riya? Kunj ki daughter nahi lagti kuch aur mamla hai. Hmm.. So Kunj left twinkle in some circumstances so muskan is angry.. It looks interesting and deep story.

Over all it was superb story. Oopsi sorry for itna bada wala comment but it was truly worth reading.. Keep writing.

And running to read next part Hehe.

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago