TwiNj FF |$ecret Admirer| (part 6 pg 13) 11/6 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maisarah

Fantabulous... In a wrd


Aww that really mean a lot to me..
A big hug for u..

Thank u so much..
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Hello forum Rockers..!! So m back on janta ki demand with the next continuation part of this FF.. First of all i would really like to thnk u all from the bottom of my heart for the love support and encouragement u guys have given me.. M really overwhelmed and feeling lucky to be a part of this awesome crazy family.. Hope u guys will like the part as its reaching to its high points now..

<font size="4">PART 5 </font>



It was yet another beautiful day with hazy clouds all over the sky trying to block the bright morning light which made the weather little dull..the cold winds blowing haphazardly as if they forgot their way to home and just roaming aimlessly.. The weather has given much hint for what's coming up and that's "RAINS"..

If it would have been old Twinkle she would HV rejoiced and jumped by now as it heralds the beginning of her most fav season that she wait for whole year "The Rainy Season"...but.. Something was changed.. Something was modified in twinkle.. And she was no more old twinkle..She was sitting cluelessly in lect hall with her two little diamond eyes dancing here and there continuously scanning the whole premises..
"Twinkle..thee nerdy twinkle.!!... Clueless in left hall.. Now that was something to be worried about.." Chinky thought closely inspecting her friend..
"On the top of that she didn't even mention abt the change of climate and rains today.." The thought made chinky allover more tense..

Everybody knew that there exist no subject no topic in the whole curriculum that can make nerdy twinkle clueless..so it was beyond studies.. Chinky still couldn't figured out anything.. Twinkle's dancing fatigued eyes failed to take rest and stop..they were still dangling here and there..in search of that one special person who was missing..whom twinkle wanted to see first in morning.. Who adds bright sunshine to her day.. Kunj Sarna.. Without whom everything becomes senseless and uninterested.. So yes there was a topic uncharted for her..sown deep inside her heart..she was compeletly clueless at..and that is KUNJ SARNA.. But yes of curse nobody knew abt it not even HE..

Twinkle is questioning herself.. "Kunj kahi dikhai q ni dera h..? College q no aaya go aaj..?? I hope Sab thk ho..? Kahi go kisi prblm me to ni..??.. But y m thinking soo much.. Is me kaunsi bht badi baat h..". So many thoughts and possiblities popped up in her mind that she can't resist to think abt him.. All the while she was searching allover lect hall just to get a glimpse of him.. She wished to see that smile..that signature smirk of him which flutter her heart making it beat more rapidly..
"ye kya hora h babaji..mai q itna miss krri hu usse..uske bareme sochne se khudko ROK hi ni pari hu.." she thought holding her head..

Later both gals were heading towards library..chinky was busy in blabbering while twinkle was still lost in her own world and not paying even slightest of attention to what chinky was saying.. And suddenly she saw kunj for miliseconds passing by at a considerable distance.. Before she could realise and react he was gone.. She thought was it just her imagination or he was there in real?.. She was shocked and equally surprised..she stood dumbfounded with wide opened mouth for sometime only to be shaken and awaken by chinky and literally pulled by her..
" bas ab yei bacha tha babaji..!! Jagti annkho se sapne dekhne lagi hu mai.." she exclaimed in Her mind..

The rest of the day went less than ordinary for her with 80% of kunj's thoughts and 20% of her being with him wale thoughts which she smartly shoved away on some or other pretext.. She also enquired indirectly from Parinay abt him only to be served with no information that can provide her heart some peace.. She was quite disappointed and saddened and above all she can't figure out the reason for her state or better she pretended not to no the reason.. But her heart knew it all..


Later she bid goodbye to chinky and sat inside her car's backseat where a sweet surprise or u can say a shock was awaiting for her.. She was amazed at what she saw..

A neatly folded pink textured paper with a bunch of yellow roses tied with silver net were present there.. She hold the flower bunch and looked here and there trying to spot someone or even to get a clue of someone who kept it there..

"Ashok Bhaiya koi aaya tha kya yha pe mere lie kch dene..??" She enquired her driver tensedly...
"Ni to Ma'am.. Mai to pura time car me hi tha.. Koi nayi aaya.." He explained cautiously

She still couldn't digest the scenario of those things being placed secretly on backseat without knowledge of her driver.. She gently unfolded the paper still in dilemma whether to read it or not.. It was addressed to her and was wriiten in cute handwriting..

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Dear Twinkle..


Twinkle Twinkle.. My Big star..

Hw I wonder.. What u are..??

Simply beyond the world.. So smart..

Shinning like a diamond.. In my heart...


(Twinkle couldn't control the smile that formed in her face automatically reading those beautiful lines for her..)

Yes bus yei smile dekhna chahta tha tere face pe.. Mai chahta hu k tu issi tarah hamesha smile karti rahe.. Or is smile k lie mai kch b Mar sakta hu..

(She was surprised and happy at the same time.. She again scanned her surroundings shaking her head here and there..but she couldn't get anything)

Idhar udhar kya dekh rhi h.. Mujhe dhund rhi h kya..??

(Haww...!! Was the first word to make its way from Ber mouth..does the guy read my mind.. Isse kaise pata chala..??)

Yei soch rhi h na mujhe kaise pata chala..?? Bus yu samajhle hai koi special connection Jo shayad mai b ni janta..

("First he read my mind now he's repeating it word to word.. Gosh.. And what's this special connection he is talking abt I dnt get it"..twinkle thought shrugging her shoulder..)

kaha na itna mat soch.. Special h isse special hi rhne de.. Smjhne k kosis mat kar..


(And she was clean bowled.. Finally she gave up analysing and read it interestingly..)

Vaise Day 1 se tujhe notice krra hu.. Kabi in person ni keh paya islie letter k through key RHA hu.. Will you be friends with me..??
Ye yellow roses humari dosti ki nayi shuruvat k lie die h.. If u accept them then it means u accepted my friendship.. Or agar tumhe kch b galat lagta h ya mujhse friendship ni karni to just throw them away.. I'll get ur point and won't disturb u again ever..

I no u must be thinking bina Jane bina dekhe kis basis pe tu mujhse friendship kare.. But some relations are like this only na.. Beyond calculations and analysis.. Made from heart and kept through trust.. Just ask ur heart is it ready to trust me...???

Ur Secret Admirer


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Twinkle was in utter shock.. The last line stuck up in her mind that too without glue.. "Secret Admirer.. Wohh bhi mera..!! Twinkle ka.. Jisko koi janta b ni h.. M not clg's Diva to have a secret admirer.. Gosh what's this happening.." She began her analysing things again.. Actualy overanalysing and underestimating..

"Kya mujhe ye friendship accept kar leni chahie..?" She questioned her heart .. Which was paced up a little at the thought of having a secret admirer ..


There stood sneaking behind a car her handsome secret admirer watching in anticipation and tensed.. Wishing not to be rejected.. Wishing the correct desired place for the beautiful roses to be in hands of the beautiful girl..not to be shattered in road with a jerk..and not to shatter his hopes..to be accepted..to be admired... To bring happiness...to bring smiles..



To be continued..
So thats it for this part..

The next part will be up very soon..

A liitle request : as Sid said in his interview.. Everybody needs a kick to do something apart from his daily life.. My kick will be ur responses ur comments ur critics.. It will keep my hopes high for next part and I'll enthusiastically write it up that too very soon.. So don't feel shy to show ur feelings kindly drop down ur comments..

Sry if m asking for too much..

Love
Riya..
Edited by docritu99 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
I m totally in love with ur wrtng ... U penned it dwn so beautifully ... Update a bigggerrr part asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Awesome update. Loved it.
Kunj letter to Twinkle was so adorable.
Eagerly waiting for next part continue soon plz.
Thanks for pm.
Edited by hailly - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Loved the update 😳
Beautifully written as always
Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
This was so cute.
Twinkle distracted and missing Kunj.
Kunj missing ,why is he hiding?
The letter was so sweet.
Is she going to accept the offer of friendship?
Please need next update soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
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dudeee...that was awesome!! I loveeeddd it !! u r a great writer na??
well those lines were cute, it made me smile big too, awww kunj is suchhh a sweetoe na??
hayyee, lemme go read it again, it was *madhuri dixit style* PERFECT 1!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Riya it's beyond awesome 😳But itna chotu sa part 😕
Plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
wow beautiful 😃
u just nailed it
next one soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: maisarah

I m totally in love with ur wrtng ... U penned it dwn so beautifully ... Update a bigggerrr part asap


Aww.. Thank u soo much buddy.. Really means a lot to me..

Yeah promise a bigger update next time..

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