TwiNj FF |$ecret Admirer| (part 6 pg 13) 11/6 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
it's just amazing I read it in one go 😊
really its just amazing lovely 👍🏼 👏
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Loved the update .
Waiting for them to talk to each other .
Kunj loves her already.
Waiting for what's going to happen next.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Diy0

it's just amazing I read it in one go 😊
really its just amazing lovely 👍🏼 👏
update soon


Ohh.. thnk u so much.. i completely forgot abt this ff..lol..
Will start working on its further parts.. yaad dilane k lie thnk u..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Thnk u so much jerry..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Duumps

Loved the update .

Waiting for them to talk to each other .
Kunj loves her already.
Waiting for what's going to happen next.


Ur wish my command..
Dw.. they are gonna talk soon..
Thnk u soo much..
Keep anticipating and following..
Will update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Hello lovely people..!! Hope u all r doing well.. Without wasting much on intro i would like to continue the story..

PART 4


Next day

Kunj came early for lect with pretext of talking to Parinay and mending things with him but it was this small part of his heart which was not in his control and wanted to see HER and talk to her..

Kunj hurriedly heading towards lect hall.."common kunj jaldi chal aaj kaise be Parinay se baat karni hogi..usko smjhana padega..".. He mentally cursed himself for bringing Richa's topic again hurting his beloved friend..

Just as he reach near lect hall he was rooted to the spot coz of the sight presented to his eyes..though it was pleasant sight..
He saw Parinay standing with chinky and twinkle outside hall.. He was smiling and talking to them very friendly.. "Gosh..!! When dat happened..??.. Parinay is friends with twinkle..?? Really.." He exclaimed in his mind..
To add further to his amusement there he saw Parinay HiFi vin and giggling with chinky..twinkle was also smiling and enjoying his talks.. "What..?? This can't be true.. Kal tk to ye twinkle ka naam b in sunna chahta tha n now see..!." His mind was being sarcastic.. Suddenly a new undefinable emotion ran down through his body which urged him to go and punch Parinay.. "How dare he trying to flirt with my twinkle..??.. And she is also enjoying.. How can someone else be the reason for her priceless smile.." His mind asked.. And his fists clenched with cheeks flushed in anger..

Wait..!! What did I just say..
Firstly.. My twinkle.. When that even happened..??
Secondly.. Hw can I even think of punching my bestie..??

And third And most imp thing.. " Was I being jealous..?? That indefinable feeling was jealousy .. That too from my best friend who can give his life for me.. For a girl I hvnt shared a word.."
His heart counter questioned .. No.. No.. Kunj sarna u HV lost ur brain..

"KUNJ".. Parinay screamed waving him..
His trails of thoughts were broken and he was brought back to reality.. He waved him back managing a smile on his face and was feeling guilty for his thoughts.. Parinay motioned his hand in air gesturing him to come and join them.. Kunj headed towards them..
"He is my best and oldest friend kunj.." Parinay kept his hand on kunj's shoulder and proudly introduced him to the girls..
"Hi m chinky and she is my cousin Twinkle.." Chinky replied..
"Hi nice to meet u.." Kunj waved his hand looking towards twinkle with the best smile on his face..
"..and he's our star..pretty famous u no.." Parinay added
"Ha or isse meri tang khichne k Siva kch ni aata..!.." Kunj added elbowing parinay..
This made both gals laugh.. Kunj was content seeing HER smile and more than that knowing he was the reason of that smile..

"Chinky tumhari cousine ka aaj moun vrat h kya..?" Kunj asked mischeiviously as he was eager to listen HER voice..
" aesa kch ni h..vo kya h na Kabi kabi mere hisse ki sari baate b chinky kar Leti h.." Twinkle replied grinning and winking to chinky.. This remark of her made everybody burst out in laughter..

After sometime they entered lect hall together.. Kunj was so desperately wanted to sit with twinkle but to his disappointment twinkle pulled chinky away towards other seats..

Later lect started but kunj was lost in some other part of world..HIS own world..HIS TWINKLE's world..everything was fading away xcep HER smile.. Parinay jerked him through his elbow to bring him back.. He made odd faces and mentally cursed him..which was well understood by parinay.. Kunj hastily flipped to last page of his notebook and wrote..

"Ye chamatkar kaise hua..??" Kunj elbowed parinay and pointed towards his questn..

"Kaunsa chamatkar..?" Parinay wrote just below his questn..
"Kal tk to tujhe twinkle acchi ni lagti thi..? Kunj wrote and they began communicating through writing as always..

"Ha qki kal tk mai usko janta ni tha.. Maine usse baat ni ki thi.."
"To ab tu usko jaan gya..?? Srf ek baar baat karne se..?
"Haa at least itna to jaan gya ki go Richa jaisi ni h.. Tu sahi key rha tha kunj.."
"Kal k lie m sry parinay.."
"Sry to mujhe kehna chahie mere dost.. Sry for being judgemental .. Bht acchi Ladki h vo.. I'll help u in any way I can.."
"THANK U mere Bhai.." Writing this kunj took a long sigh of relief as his best friend was with him now..
"Ur welcome.. But dude u need to do something as i cant be ur permanent cupid..!!" Writing this parinay smirked..
Both bit their lips looking at each other trying hard not to laugh out loud and thrown out of lect hall..


Later that night..
Twinkle was lying in bed holding her teddy bear..
"Hey Mr. Bruno" she said while shaking his teddy bear's hand..or better supposed to be his hand..
"U no what aaj humara intro hua..n aaj maine usse baat ki..not actually..but something like that..gosh y m so confused.. But he seems to be a nyc guy.. Unlike others he didnt avoid me thinking me to be a nerd..infact on the contrary he was xtra sweet to us..he himself chose us to talk..to be friends with.. Wait a minute..!! We are still not friends..then y such thought is tresspassing my mind..?..may be we can in future..!!" Saying this she blushed and hide her face behind mr bruno..

"Hmm so what u think mr bruno..kya vo or mai kabi friends ban sakte h..??."

" No.no.no..he's a happening person and famous too..y he'l be frnds with u jhalli..nobody even bothered whether u exist.." Her mind questioned..
"Dat doesnt matter..he now know u..jus go and ask him to be frnds..thats it..he'l definately give positive response.." Her heart replied..

"Mr bruno ab tum hi batao mujhe kya karna chahie.?? " She looked towards teddy being confused hoping him to blurt out something to clear her confusion..
"What if vo image conscious nikla to..what if vo cassanova hua to..what if he is jus being sweet to use me.. No.no.no.. I cant let him destroy me.." She was trying out all possibilities and this made her heart sink..
" ohkay so there are lots of what if's and not a single ans..so i'l jus go with the flow.. Agar usse friendship karni hogi to vo khud aake bolega..m not gonna initiate frm my side.." she decided and wanted to stick to this plan not very sure for how long she will be able to..
" What..!! M actually wanting him to offer his friendship..hw stupid..ugghh.. Y the hell m thinking abt him so much..he's jus another boy.." She registered in her mind..
She shoved off his thoughts and dozed off not before wishing Mr Bruno "good night"



Some days went by just like this passing some awkward smiles and hi hellos..though chinky and parinay became good friends and even kunj and chinky's bond also grew BT his equation with twinkle was still the same.. He was unable to gather courage and talk to her properly..he either stammers or jus go blank in front of her.. Twinkle's condition was nothing better.. Though she was one genius freak at practically everything but in this subject she was struggling even to get passing marks.. This yes no tension was high between them and was building more over each passing day..

"Common yr kunj aesa kab tak chalega..??" Parinay yelled over phone obviously being concerned for him..
"I don't no dude.. Jab b vo samne aati h mai blank hojata hu.. Words hi ni nikalte mere muh se.. I can talk comfortably with any girl on thousand topics for several hours but man there is something different abt this girl.." Kunj tried to explain his situation..
"I can understand..but u need to do something pretty soon.." Parinay replied
"Hmm.. Chal kal milte fir..gn c ya.." Both hung up..

Kunj thought " parinay was right I HV to do something very soon..but kya..??"
He submerged into deep thinking for long.. Suddenly his eyes lit up face sparkled and lost smile was back..

"I hv a plan..now I no mujhe kya karna h.." He smirked raising his single eyebrow..
"Woohooo" whistling he drooped down on bed with his arms stretched out and gone into deep slumber..


To be continued..

Hope I didn't bore u guys.. Drop down ur comments below to lemme no ur responses..m all set for the critics..

Love u all..
Riya..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update.
Loved jealous Kunj .
Kunj hesitant to approach Twinkle aww so sweet .
Twinkle ko bhi Kuch Kuch ho raha hai?

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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
awesome ff yaar very nice plzzz pm whnevr u update nalxt plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Very Nyv Doc...
I love Reading College Romance...
Sorry For Coming In So Late.. But i read All 4 chaps
Loved the Way Kunj Is behaving.. Indeed He had fallen Hard at love AT first Sight...
Twinkle Typical Nerd...but sweett.. Over Analytical
Its Funnn..Prainay naf chinky playing Cupid..
Loving It.😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
yayyy!!! I so love this story ...I wish yeh aspect had also been included ...but awesome update and it may be a little to soon for it ,...but update soon buddy ...it's one of those stories that holds you up to the end ...and I am so in love with it ...please give us a reallly long and cute update
it was an amazing update ..I know I've said it but it just cheered me up so saying it again
sakshi

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