TwiNj OS - Yeh Mera Vaada Raha - Page 2

Originally posted by: -sumaiya-

Oh how I would LOVE for this to happen in the show!

Really loved this OS, very well written!😃

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome os...Loved it

Originally posted by: _Meena_

nice os

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

awesome OS, very well written. loved it <3

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Wow! Absolute perfection.

You justified everyone's character.

What amazed me was that Kunj didn't enter the hospital room and preferred to follow her instead.That itself depicts how sorry he was👏

This line,'she was his routine,his everyday,she was his habit...'

I love the way you have framed it.

And the end,Kunj's and Twinkle's determination and committment to fulfill their promises,beautifully written😳

p.s like your username,'Tranquility' so serene and gives such a positive vibe😃😳

p.p.s forgot to mention,you did a commendable job linking all the past events specifically keeping in mind the track of the serial:)

How Kunj figured it out piece by piece,Beautiful👏

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome os. Loved it.
Beautifully written.

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Loved the OS 😳

very well written

Originally posted by: Inkheart

Yayyy amazing👏👏👏

Originally posted by: SweetSau

Wonderful.

Loved it

The first part of the story with Kunj basically putting two and two together: OMG THAT NEEDS TO HAPPEN IN THE SHOW. PLEASE MAKE IT HAPPEN. And I really really really hope Manohar sticks up for Twinkle and that she gains some self respect. Ugh I wouldn't be able to stand it if they show her begging and pleading and being miserable anymore. Anywho, lovely read!