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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone. This is my my first os and it will be a short one as it is my first os and i hope everyone likes it 😊 Everyone went to their rooms after the playing session got over but kunj brought twinkle to the room taking her hand in his and making sure that no one should notice them. After coming to the room kunj started tickling twinkle on her waist She started laughing loudly he said look i made you smile she said
T:Agar tum har baar mujhe aise manaoge toh main ruthne ke liye tayaar rahungi
K:Main tumhe khud se ruthne nhi de sakta mujhe bikul pasand nhi ki tu mujhse ya neri wajah se ruth jaye tera hasta hua chera mere liye meri saason ka kaam karta h isliye kabhi bhi apne chere se ye hasi jane mat dio samjhi
T:kyu kunj kyu meri ek smile tumhare liye itne matter karti ha kunj kyu me itni important tunhare life me batao mujhe
Plzz kunj aaj bol do taki me bhi apne pyar ka izzhar kar saku tum se, she said to herself in her mind
K:kya mujhe tumhe jawab dene ke liye shabdo ki zarut h kya twinkle tu khud hi samjh le na
T:nhi kunj tumhe mujhe samjhana hoga tumhe btana hoga ki kyu tum mere aankhon me aaso nhi dekh sakte kyu meri ek smile ke liye tum kuch bhi kar sakte ho kyu me tumare liye itni matter karti hu ha kunj bolo btao mujhe plzz kunj aise chup mat raho tumari chupi mujhe achi nhi laga rahi h plzz kunj
K:kya tum sach me janna chati ho ki mai ye sab kyu karta hu
T: ha kunj aaj bta hi do apni dil ki baat
K:toh thik h 'he closes his eyes takes a deep breath and says' twinkle main tumse bahut pyaar karta hu tumhare bina nhi jee sakta tujhe samne dekhta hu toh dil ko sukun milta h aur nhi dekhta toh dil bechen hojata h ye pyar nhi yoh aur kya h twinkle I LOVE SOO MUCH I LOVE YOU
T:kunj tum sach me mujhse itna pyar karte ho?
K:ha twinkle ptanhi kab kaise hua par hogaya aur aap tujhse ek pal ki bhi duri nhi seh sakta
T:kunj i love you too
Pyar toh maine pehle bhi kiya tha kunj lekin jo me dhoka khane ke baad socha nhi tha ki phir kabhi kisi se pyar kar bhi paungi ya nhi par ab aisa nhi h jo pyar maine pehle kiya woh meri life ki sab de badi galti thi kunj aur jo pyar maine tumse kiya h kunj woh mere life ka sabse sahi cheez h jo maine ki h
K:twinkle tu yuvi ke dhoke ke wajah se apne ko doshi kyu man rahi h maine bhi toh galati ki thi alisha se pyar karke lekin dekh ab hum dono ek dusre ke kitna pyar karte h trust karte tu purani biti bato ko bhul ja aur ek nayi life start karte h ek saath
T:kunj tum sahi keh rahe ho kunj agar tum na hote toh mera kya hota pta nhi main kis kone me pade ro rahi hoti
K:phir se tune rone ki baat ki toh mujse bura koi nhi hoga
T:kunj tumse acha bhi toh koi nhi h na kunj
And she hugged kunj very tightly he reapprociated the hug and kissed her on her hairs saying "me humesha tere saath rahunga twinkle tere paas tujhe mujhse koi dur nhi kar sakta"
T:thanku kunj humesha mera saath dene ke liye mere ache bure me mere saath khade rehne ke liye i love you kunj i love sooomuch and she kissed him on his cheeks
N the one who was named as loser yuvraj luthra was burning and fuming in anger listening to them

This was a short os as compared to other os which have already been written for twinj but as i said it was my first attempt to write an os i hope everyone likes it n yes sorry for the mistakes if done any
Thanku soo much n plzz do tell how it was

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Dinky28 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plzz tell how it is i would not mind anything tell me if it is boring or what i will try go improve myself but please give a review of it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was lovely!
I loved it❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing OS
loved it <3
pls write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Was it boring? I asking becoz i am not able to figure it out as it was my first attempt to write something n whatever came in my mind i just wrote so plzz do read n tell
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh dear it's super duper awesome lovely brilliant 👍🏼
I can't believe it's ua 1st attempt 😲
You should write more often 😳
Plz do continue 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its not boring dear.
Dont worry its your frst attempt na thats y uh r getting nervous.
But it was nyc.
Good attempt.
Write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice os dear
it is not at all boring
loved it very much
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanku so much n also thanku for encouraging will try to write more 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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VEry cute and sweet...
Keep writing. ..

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