TwiNj One-Shot::Bharosa 27/2/2016 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Phycho

Wonderful story bhai 😳

Jst loved it to the core ❤️

Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: Perwinkle

That's not fair Hriddey Bhaiyya!

You brought tears to my eyes.
Oh god this was so emtional and you wrote it so perfectly.
I loved, loved, loved it.
It was long and amazing and just perfect.
5 minute ke liye toh main aapka muder plan kar rahi thi.
Thank god you didn't let Kunj die.
Once again brilliant OS!

Dont call me bhaiyya it makes me feel older🤣I am only 18 for god's sake.
and thank you very very much.
It means alot when you guyz appriciate my Work to this extent😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Thankx😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

i loved this! it had a perfect blend of drama and romance! loved it! thanks for the pm!

Thank you shakti😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: _Meena_

aww i almost had tears yaara! well written as always

thank you meena di It means alot😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: teddyyy


Firstly bhai you have awesome taste, that sari is gorgeous! How do you do it every time? A new plot always executed so beautifully. One thing that made me really crack up was "he was looking so cute in it" lmao because I see you think Kunj is a cutie too :PP


Omg I'm actually typing this as I read because I want you to know my reactions and my heart is kinda very sad, he just pushed her out of the car omg. Everything was going so sweetly and in the moment of crisis, it was her life and safety that he cared about, nothing else. OMG he escaped too but he fell and omg.


Twinkle asking for Kunj is actually breaking my heart, I can see it all. The panic and desperation is so vivid and the fact that she goes to Usha, the other woman who loves Kunj so much is heartbreaking. How difficult must it be for all the elders to have to see their young kid die and their other one to go crazy in denial.


OMG Kunj did promise to never leave her ever and now he did but it wasn't in her control. I mean he has to be alive bhai if he's not imma actually cry. "Apne pyaar par pura barosa hai" you're killing me lol. "Meri itni himmat ki mai apni siyyappa queen ko chodkar chala jaon" AWWW DIL KHUSH HO GAYA MERA!!! And this is so beautiful:


Love is not an equation, it is not a contract, and it is not a happy ending. Love is the slate under the chalk, the ground that buildings rise, and the oxygen in the air. It is the place you come back to, no matter where your headed.


You have made me so happy, this was beautiful!


Ohhk So this is the longest comment I have ever gotton for my any story on TwiNj!
I just loved your comment
Many poeple wanted to kill me for this if I would have made kunj dead but I can never do it.
This OS is my fav. Work till date On TwiNj!
And I am glad that you poeple are loving it sooo much,Thank you very very much...
Keep reading and keep commenting!
Edited by .FlightOfEagle. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: --Jenelle--

So beautifully penned. Amazing OS. I felt every emotion Twinkle was feeling. The raw pain she felt when realization hit her and then her firm belief that her man was still alive, so beautifully thought up by you. Outstanding work bhai.⭐️

Thank you very much jenelle😃
It feels good that you guyz have percieved The OS in the same way as I did!😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Rula diya yaar

Heartbreaking story

But masst tha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.


Ohhk So this is the longest comment I have ever gotton for my any story on TwiNj!
I just loved your comment
Many poeple wanted to kill me for this if I would have made kunj dead but I can never do it.
This OS is my fav. Work till date On TwiNj!
And I am glad that you poeple are loving it sooo much,Thank you very very much...
Keep reading and keep commenting!


Aw I'm glad you liked my response because you definitely deserved it! I try to keep it short cause I know you have many responses to rely too LOOL, but I Couldn't help myself, the OS was just too good. I see many people were planning your mirder lmao thank god Twinj won in the end! I have to say it's my favorite piece from you too, from the title to the plot to the characterization, everything was perfect! Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece, will definitely continue reading and commenting :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: teddyyy


Aw I'm glad you liked my response because you definitely deserved it! I try to keep it short cause I know you have many responses to rely too LOOL, but I Couldn't help myself, the OS was just too good. I see many people were planning your mirder lmao thank god Twinj won in the end! I have to say it's my favorite piece from you too, from the title to the plot to the characterization, everything was perfect! Thank you for sharing such a beautiful piece, will definitely continue reading and commenting :D

I am happy that I am still alive🤣

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