Twinj OS: Making Mom Laugh

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"Ok... quick breaths, ready? One, two, three Puuussshhh" Kunj demanded.

"Hmmphh...".

"Twinkle, your not doing it hard enough. Again!", he demanded again with the frustration evident in his voice.

"I'm trying here😡. Why don't you try pushing it out yourself- stupid. I'm ready now. Arrggghhh", Twinkle screamed.

This time it was much much more louder, making it way through every crevice and corner and subsequently throughout the entire house.

-Heavy breathing-

"What's going on here?", Manohar asked.

Then the realization sets in. Twinkle and Kunj became aware of their surroundings, aware of the fact that they weren't in the house all by themselves. Infact, they became aware of their current physical position.

Twinkle was lying on her back with a pillow tightly tucked under her dress. Her legs were sprawled out wide with Kunj strategically placed in between them and his palms on her knees. Every Sarna/Luthra member of the household was in their room looking at them with suspicion, confusion and curiousity. Oh...how embarrassed they felt as silence spread across the room.

"Well, um, well. Twi...Twinkle", he was cut off short.

" Well papaji, I was just imagining how it would feel to go into larbour, so I decided to enact the actual thing. With Kunj of course". Twinkle uttered every single word with ease, but the look that everyone gave her made her wish she had kept her mouth shut.

"Twinkle puttar", Bebe interjected breaking the silence. "Atleast wait until you're actually pregnant, ok?". With this said dhe quickly ushered everyone out to give the young couple some privacy.

- Kunj starts laughing-

"Ouch, why did you do that?", Twinkle shouted after a slap landed in her thigh.

"Don't you see Twinkle? You've finally made Mom laugh".



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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww that was real cute!
i really liked this OS
was super super cute adn fun ❤️
and finally twinkle made usha laugh 🤣
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Originally posted by: ...Shakti...

aww that was real cute!

i really liked this OS
was super super cute adn fun ❤️
and finally twinkle made usha laugh 🤣

Thanks. This was one of the few stories I have in my head so I just decided to post
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Inkheart

Thanks. This was one of the few stories I have in my head so I just decided to post


i really loved it!! keep posting!! your writing is so much fun to read!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lol this was too funny.
Very sweet OS.
Do write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was adorable! Twinkle is so cute. Such a kid herself.
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Originally posted by: ...Shakti...


i really loved it!! keep posting!! your writing is so much fun to read!

Ok, if you say so😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahah that was funny 🤣
finally she made Usha laugh
enjoyed reading it dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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He he he
I read it from phone at around 3 am India

I thought she was really in labor when I began to read and the title told me maybe Mamma Twinkle sad and daddy n baby will make her laugh but ye toh

Siyappa queen bhi na with such ease she told her FIL what they were doing

Kunj was right in the last nights ep
She is so cute calm adn innocent like a child when she is sleeping but when she opens her mouth siyappa karti hai khud phansti hai aur Kunj ko bhi fasati hai

Loved it

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