Polar oposite mahi-yuv FF chapter 1

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Summary: after the chemical incident mahi goes through drastic change, how will the family react to this change, what will yuv do? Will he fall for the new mahi or want out of the marriage.

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Prologue


Few days past after the surgery, mahi ws getting better. The doctor told them it wont be long before they can remove her wrap. Twinkle had yell at yuv for harming her Sister, mahi told her not to blame yuv because he wouldnt harm her. She told her sister maybe they gave him the wrong bottle, which twinkle denied. Her dad told her to stop because mahi is in pain, and that we shouldnt aggravate her.

Yuv agrees and kiss her forehead. He told her he will see her later, before leaving. Soon everyone starts to leave, well except twinkle and kunj. After the little fight with yuv, kunj and twinkle tried to convince her one last time, but she refuse. " you leave us no choice mahi" she says before nodding to kunj.

Kunj nod and took out his phone. He played the tape record so she could see the truth. Mahi listening kept denying it, she told them yuv isnt like that, he wouldnt use her. Twinkle became angry " listen to yourself mahi, the proof is right infront of you. Yuv i just playing you to get to me. " she finished

Mahi cover her ears" no, your wrong. Not everything is about you, he wouldnt do this. What made you think your not the one obsess with my husband " she replies taking twinkle back

"What nonsense, i dont love yuv, i love ku-" she quickly stop, realizing what she was about to say, kunj raised an eyebrow. He look at her teling her to repeat what she just said "you love ku? " he says looking at her smirking

"N-nothing"

" twinkle, dont tell me" he says acting surprise. Twinkle blush hiding her face " you love m-" as soon as he was about to say it she quickly denies it and ran out the room, follow by kunj running after her.

Later that night, Mahi got up and decides to go see yuv. She didbt care that the doctor told her to stay there, she wanted to confirm the truth. She snuck away and call a taxi, just when she was about to get in, she heard yuv voice. Happy she walk closer to see him talking with Anita. She was about to call for him, when she heard her name.

"Everything went according to plan. Now twinkle will feel how i feel. I will hurt mahi until twinkle leave kunj. No one can have my twinkle, NO ONE! " he says

Anita frown " how will you get rid of mahi, your forgetting your married "

Yuv laugh "married? I wouldnt dream of it. That unattractive girl would believe anyone thats nice to her. See we're not really married, the priest was fake. I just told her it was real so she would accept it. " he finished

Mahi frown, her heart break after listening. She felt like dying for trusting yuv. Didi was right, yuv was just using me, she thought. She went back to the room, and hung herself but the rope cut. Breathing she cried out of pity. " everyone use me because I'm nice, fine, i will show them what a nice girl can do" she says crying some more.

To be continued...
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Chapter 1


Few days later mahi face was healed, when the family found out they were relieved. Yuv walk to her acting concern whild touchi g her. Twinkle frown, leela asks her if she needs her glasses she says no. This surprise her dad, he complain saying she always wear glasses, why change now. "Papa, after the accident my eye sight for some reason got better"
Yuv laugh saying its a miracle, anita said the same complementing her.

Twinkle asks if she was really ok, and if she wants her to get her anything. Mahi snap, she told her she was fine, and that she needs no ones help. "MAHI! " leela says firm, she told her not to raise her voice at her sister, which she apologized

She told them shes just tierd, and that the hospital is suffocating her. Her dad told her he will get her out right away, which she nod. Yuv told her if shes uncomfortable he will get her home no matter what. She asks if he would do that, he says yes, she asks if he would pick her up and take her home. He says yes, she pretends to be shy and told him literally, she wants him to pick her up and walk all the way home.

This surprise the family " what are you saying sweety" he whispers

"You love me dont you" she says

Yuv still acting says yes " if my mahi wants me to carry her i will" he told her he will be back, and walk away. His mom stops him "yuv, are you seriously going to do what she says" she asks

Yuv sigh " if i want my plan to work, i cant let her doubt me. I will have to show her how much i love her" he says before cuting his hand, anita surprise a
Asks what he was doing, he told her he will replace the sindoor with his blood so everyone will know she belongs to him, this will earn my trust with mahi.

He walk back in the room purposely puting blood on the floor. Everyone was surprise to see the blood. Mahi a little worried refraim from doing anything. She watch as yuv walk to her expecting her to be concern, but she wasnt. He puts the blood on her forehead while looking at twinkle. He smirk before looking at mahi. He told her he didnt want anyone doubting his love for her and since he didnt have a sindoor, he will use blood to show everyone.

Twinkle told him that his stunt wont change anything or the fact that he tried to kill her sister. Her dad told her to be quiet and that he doesnt want to hear any other words coming from her. Twinkle tried to say so. Something but kunj shush her, and took her out. Anita taunt saying she needs to learn some manners, she asks if this is how they raise their kid's.

Leela ignores her and told mahi they will see her at home, yuv told her he will take good care of her, which leela didnt believe. Mahi pretends to shiver, she told him she wants to leave now. Yuv nod and left the room, he went to the doctor to chat before coming back happily. He told her she could leave and grab her stuff than he pick her up and carried her home.

Mahi smirk to herself, she knew his had must be swollen since he didnt get his hands treated. It wont be long before it become ugly. This is just the first step yuv, what was fake will become a reality, your spoiling days will be over. Just wait, after all i am twinkle sister, she thought smiling when he lift her back up when slipping.

To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow great start
plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good to see people here trying different genres...twinj pe nahi hua to kya!!!!
I'm sure you'll find your readers who love to read your story.
I'm sure if there are any mahiraj fans...they'll love it!
Honestly I read only the prologue but still good luck and keep shining :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow amazing dear
i loved it
nice concept
iam looking forward how mahi will teach uv a good lesson for his entire life span
plzzz do continue soon😃
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Chapter 2

The next day everyone came down to eat breakfast, the family were in for a big surprised. Anita surprise to see so much food asks if some one was coming. Leela shook her head, " who made all the food than?" Anita says

" I did" , she came in with orange juice breathing them. Everyone was shock to see her new look. " Mahi?" " why are you dressed like a western person?" Twinkle asks, mahi not even staring at her says " what am I not allowed to dress as I please"

"Beta, this is just not you" leela says

"Mam, chillax its not the end of the world" she says before going to her seat. Leela looks at twinkle mouthing chillax to her, twinkle shrug her shoulder. She sat down before blaming yuv, who was just as confuse as they were. He sat down signalling his mom what was going on, and she told him she doesn't know.

While they were talking mahi got up and pour yuv some juice, she told everyone to eat which they did. While eating Anita had a sour expression. She stop eating and spit the food out, yuv on the other hand look at his mom " what's wrong mam?"

" this food is terrible" she says causing a scene, everyone stop to look at her " what's this drama now, Anita"

" she's probably loosing her taste" twinkle replies rolling her eyes. Anita glare at her, she told them the food is to salty, mahi smirk to herself. " you must be confuse, I didn't add a lot of salt. If I did everyone would have reacted the same way"

Anita drinking her juice frown. I'm sure I'm not going crazy, why is it my food is salty. Am I really loosing my taste buds?, she thought. Mahi seeing Anita busy, switch the food without her seeing it. She told her to try again, at first she refuse but yuv persist , " fine, but I'm telling you it won't make a difference" she says while putting it in her mouth. As soon as she did, she was confuse. " what?!"

Yuv ask his mom what's wrong, and she told him its not salty anymore. Twinkle says this was probably one of her drama to insult Mahi, which leela agrees. After dinner while twinkle and kunj were leaving yuv stares at them coming up with a plan to hurt kunj. Meanwhile mahi was in the kitchen, when Anita walks in accusing her of making her food salty. Mahi pretends like she doesn't know and turn her back on her.

Anita not liking it pull her arm making the plate fall on the floor. When she did this mahi jerk her hand away. She could hear yuv and her parents coming to the kitchen. She looks at the plate before falling on the floor. That was how they saw her, on the floor, staring up at Anita. " what is going on here?" Her dad says

Mahi pretends to be sad " I was washing the plates when Anita push me to the floor"

" what I didn't do that" she says

Leela gasp when she saw her daughter hand " mahi your hand is bleeding" when she said this everyone turn to her, leela quickly grab her hand and took her to the sink. Mahi wince, while yuv look worried " why would you hurt my darling like that, mam" he says

" I'm telling you I didn't push her" she says annoyed

Yuv walk closer to his mom before whispering " if anything happen to mahi my plan will be ruin, so I will advice you to leave her alone. You don't want me to turn my back on you right?!" He says, which she nod " than take good care of my wife" he says loud enough for everyone to hear. Anita frown, she turn around and walk away.

Yuv walk to mahi apologizing. He told her he didn't know what came over his mom, but she will understand. Mahi nod, this is just a minor injury compare to the wound you put me through, she thought I can go to the extent to make my plan work. She pause before thinking in order to break yuv I have to start with his mom, I will make sure they will loose trust in each other leaving yuv alone. She finished smirking

To be continue...

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