TwiNj SS:Through The Darkness Ch2[A] Pg3 10/2/2016 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
oh no, hope Kunj can help her get strong again
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
interesting...amazing...new concept...do continue...love to read it...and pm me if possibe
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Posted: 9 years ago
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bhaiyya...ur every concept is just sooo unimaginable...soo remarkable...perfectly..perfectly awsm👏👏

shaitaaan😡😡...itni giri hui harkat😡😡...chi uv...i will kill him...how could he do this to twinkle ...i cant believe this...😡
how did she reach to uv btw..she was with kunj right???😕😕
i just have one request...if possible make that uv rot in jail... in one full update just show us his suffering behind the bars😡😡😡 or by kunjs hands...
ohh twinkle...my bubbly ,sweet twink...i hope shes all fine😭😭
do cont sooon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Update ?? Soon plz 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SS:Through The Darkness

Chapter 2-Part A

It has been two days sinve twinkle has returned back home and that dreadfull incident happened.
Twinkle is not the same after that day,she keep quite,dosent talk much to anyone not even her mother,she just responds to kunj and wants him near her 24*7,twinkle has lost herself somewhere,the glow on her face,the smile has just dissapeared and everything felt so plain and bland kunj was not able to see her like this,quite and silent he wanted his siyyapa queen back,he was trying his best to make her come back and that is when twinkle said something that showed how broken she is and the damage is far more greater more than he thought,twinkle's soul has been damaged beyond repair and it is going to be difficult to get her back to her real self,But he will never loose hope and will keep trying.
Kunj brought dinner for twinkle and placed the tray infron of her,from oast 2 days twinkle and kunj eats in thier room toghther,most of the time kunj bieng the feeder for twinkle,he was making her eat some rice when she said.

Twinkle:Kunj leave me,find someone else for you,Who is worthy of you,because I am not.
Kunj placed the tray aside and went near her.
Kunj:Why are you saying this twinkle,No one can ever be more worthy than you to be my wife,Infact I feel that I am lucky to get you as my wife.
Twinkle:Kunj you are not understanding,I am not good for you I am not pure,I am impure,I do not deserve you.
Kunj:Shup up twinkle,what made you think like that,whatever happened few days back does not matter to me,What matters is you,You bieng with me twinkle,And stop thinking like that,I am never gonna leave you no matter what,Shadi ki hai tujhse,har kadam oar tera sath dene ki kasam khayi hai,har mushkil se tujhe bachana farz hai mera,janta hun mai tujhe uss yuvi se nahi bacha paya twinkle lekin ab tere par ek abhi anch nahi anna dunga yeh vada hai mera,apni zindagi se zada khayal rakhunga tera aur ajj ke baad kabhi dubara bola na ki mai tujhe chod dun toh mujhse bura koi bhi nahi hoga twinkle yaad rakhna and sayin this he embraced her into a bone crashing hug,so tightly conveying her that he will not let her go away from hin no matter what.
Twinkle hugged back and started crying ,she was happy that kunj still wants to accept her after what happened with her and considered herself lucky to have him in her life.

Kunj:Bas twinkle ab aur nahi,mai tujhe aur aise nahi dekh skta hum yahan se bahut dur chalenge,ek nayi jagah,ek naya start karenge hamari life ka jismai sirf tu hogi aur mai honga,Kunj aur Twinkle ki duniya,Full of happiness away from any kind of negetivity,aut haan twinkle ek aur baat,I love you alot and Dont every say that you want me to leave you or else even I dont know what will I do samjhi tum.
Twinkle noded her head and smiled at kunj,he was happy that atleast she was smiling for the first time after that incident.
Kunj placed a kiss on her forhead and resumed feeding her the remaining food,after making her finish her food,he also ate his part and went to bring something that twinkle will surely like.
He went to the kitchen and took out choco crunch ice cream from the freezer and took put scoops in two bowls and took them to twinkle.
Kunj:Twinkle see what I got for you,your favourite choco crunch ice cream,chalo lets eat it toghether.

The ice cream surely lighted up her mood and she enjoyed eating it with kunj,after having the ice cream kunj made her lie down on the bed and settled himself beside her,twinkle hugged and placed her head on his chest,twinkle has always slept like this after that incident,Kunj cannot leave her alone at night because she gets nightmares and it becomes difficult to handle her.
To be continued.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Amazing update, loved it.
Poor Twinkle felt bad for her but i am happy to see an understanding and caring Kunj.
Continue soon plz.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update, loved it.
Poor Twinkle felt bad for her but i am happy to see an understanding and caring Kunj.
Continue soon plz.

Thank you very much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
superb update. Loved it. Loved all the dialogues by Kunj. and the hug, kiss assurance and all was perfect. very well done. loved it. looking forward to part B
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
It was a gr8 update 😳
Continue soon plz 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
How sweet. Waiting for the next part already :)
Sorry but I was thinking about your other story mistake , guilt and forgiveness while reading this. What a contrast.
It shows how brilliant you are as a writer :)

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