||TWINJ FF|| 'YOUR TRUST' chap:5 (29-01-16) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kusharberry

awesome update dear

loved it very much
awww poor twinkle she is really broken
plzzz do continue soon dear

Will update soon... Thanks for the comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Walaikum Asalam😃
Amazing dear ...
feeling sad for twinkle.. poor girl.
continue soon
Edited by Zawra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Zawra

Walaikum Asalam😃
Amazing dear ...
feeling sad for twinkle.. poor girl.
continue soon

Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
amazing update dear
loved it.
pls continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Nice chapter,I want to see how will twinkle react to this truth please update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
loved the update
want to know how twinkle handles the situation
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
poor Twinkle but excellent development of the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Thank you all for your lovely comments.
Will update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Chapter:3
"Lies"
Everyone present in the hall were shocked to see a bewildered Twinkle standing at the door. Tears were rolling down her face and her eyes were deep red. Anger, hurt, betrayal, all these emotions were surrounding her completely. She just wished, she is dreaming or so. Her heart do not want to believe that her family could do such thing, they hide the biggest truth of her life from her.

Twinkle wanted to die right now. She still wasn't able to digest the reality. Her mind was jammed with all these sudden truths and lies. She asked her babaji that what was her fault that she got so much pain in life. Whoever she loved, betrayed her. First she loved YUVI, who was just playing with her emotions. And now her father, whom she have been loving since her birth, he lied to them and left them even when he was alive all the time. Her MAA, who is her life, her trust, her family but she lied her too.

Basically she didn't lied to her but keeping her away from the truth is the biggest lie. And then his husband, KUNJ, he too kept her away from the truth. And now her dad, "THE RANDHIR TANEJA", who left them when they needed him the most. He was alive but still he left them alone, helpless in this world.
But she didn't have any expectations from him as he was not with her for this long time, like her Maa and kunj were. But still they kept her away from this cruel reality which shattered her world within seconds. If any other girl suddenly found her father, Twinkle don't know whether that girl would forgive her father or not, but Twinkle is not able to do anything. Because she believed that she matters to nobody now.

Kunj was giving her divorce and her parents lied to her. Nobody cared about her feelings or emotions. Nobody thought that what would be her condition when she would meet her father and what would be her reaction when she will come to know that her husband and her maa lied to her. They didn't care about her feelings at all.
Kunj and leela were shocked to see her there. They didn't thought that reality will fall on Twinkle like this. They wanted to tell here the truth after she started trusting her father a bit. But destiny wanted something else for them. They knew that their hiding the truth from her was a kind of betrayal to her but they didn't knew what would be the reaction of their step.
Kunj: "twinkle"

Leela: "twinkle puttar listen to me" leela pleaded

Kunj: "twinkle just listen to us once... " before kunj could complete, Twinkle ran from there shocking everyone. Leela was about to go when she felt dizzy and was about to fall when RT hold her.

Kunj: MAA sambhale khud ko. Rt uncle please take care of her. Maa you don't take tension I'll go behind her.

Leela: "kunj, she'll never forgive me."

Kunj: "Maa don't worry. I'll take care of her. And she's your daughter, she'll forgive you. Believe me. "
Saying so, he went behind Twinkle.


Twinkle ran from there. She wanted to stay alone. She wanted to stay away from all those people right now who hurt her the most. She ran to her room and locked the door from inside. She don't want to face anyone right now. This is the worst day of her life. The day when all her dreams shattered in millions of pieces. She didn't feel so much broken in her life before, not even when she faced YUVI's reality. Not even when her mother disowned her, not even when she found out her father. She was crying bitterly. She was crying because kunj and Maa lied to her about her father.


Bebe was shocked to see Twinkle running like a maniac inside the house. She called her but she didn't reply to her. She was very tensed then she saw kunj running inside the house.

Bebe: kunj puttar wait. Why are you running like this? And what happened to Twinkle? Why was she crying so badly? Did you guys fought again?

Kunj: bebe where is Twinkle? I need to get to her!

Bebe: kunj tell me first, what happened between you two?

Kunj: bebe...
And he told her everything about twinkle's dad. Bebe was shocked to hear that. She scolded him for hiding such a big and important reality from Twinkle. She now understands, why was Twinkle in such a drastic condition. Kunj and bebe decided to check Twinkle that whether she's fine!
They went upstairs and saw that the door of his room was locked. Kunj banged the door several times but to no avail. His tension increased, what if she did something wrong with herself? No, what rubbish is he thinking. He'll never let anything happen to her.

Kunj: Twinkle please, look, open the door. We'll talk about this matter please Twinkle.

Kunj tried many times but she didn't opened the door. At last he decided to break the door to see if she is fine or not.

Kunj: Twinkle you are going to open it or not? Look I'll break it if you didn't open it!
He was about to break the door when it creaked open. He saw her standing like a lifeless creature.

Kunj: Have you gone mad? What the hell were you doing?
He shouted at her. But tears started to flow from her eyes again. This broke his heart in thousands of pieces. He gave her a bone crushing hug and asked her to stop crying. Bebe was finally relieved after watching her fine but she knew that Twinkle was broken from inside. She decided to let the couple alone for sometime.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awesome update. Loved it.
Poor twinkle felt bad for her.
Continue soon plz.

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