HUMSAFER THA VO part 2 updated pg:4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello everyone its my first story on twinj
its little different but good
hope u guys like this😛
this is a short prologue

Twinwkle was busy with babey talking when the door bell rang :

b: ruk main janti hoon
t: nahi babye main chali jati hoon(she went and opens the door she sees a girl)
a: nameste mera naam add hai . yahaan kunj sarna kyun hai?
t: hi mera naam twinkle hai mein kunj ki biwi hoon.apko koi jaruri kaam tha kya unse?
a:nahi ,bas mein yuvraj lootra ko dhood rahi thi par yahan leela taneja ko ap janti hogi?
t: vo meri maa hai.
a: toh unhone mujhe yahaan bheja hai.
b: ohay! putar andhar aa baise tu yuvi ko kese janti hai?
a: autully main uski behan hoon
an: oho ,so sweet of u add tu yahaan?
a: hi ankita aunty
an: mujhe toh lagatha ki tuh mujhe bhul jayegi
a: nahi kabhini ana main tujhe tera kamra dekhti hoon

promo: twinkle saw add saying "hum twinkle aur kunj ko allg nahi kar sakte " to ankita


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello. Wow, the banner looks great. Can't wait to start reading it 😊
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ayu iam really excited
plzz do continue soon nah
and do pm me baba😃
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nice tittle exited 4 it
but Adda Khan kya kar rahi hai ..Kunj ke side main 😕
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hey guys add khan is sis of yuvi but she is side of twinj yaar😊
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Originally posted by: ashleshapriya1

hey guys add khan is sis of yuvi but she is side of twinj yaar😊

so she wonn't seperate twinj nah
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I really liked it.. Do continue soon.. Really excited to see what happens next
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Wow very nice 😊 continue soon 😳
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Thank you for your comments ❤️
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So guys here is the part 1
Anita and add were talking to together. Then ankita thought to make add aware of her revenge but add refused to help her as she knows that sarnas family looks good and she thinks that in love every thing is there

an:kya hua add aj tak tumne mera bat kabhi nahi tali par aj tum kah rahi ki tum mera saath nahi dogi?
a: kismat meherban ho toh bhi hum nahi kar sakte kyun ki bhagvan ne twinkle aur kunj ki jodi banaya hai hum unhe nahi allag kar sakte(just then twinkle listed these words )
an: acha toh yeh bat hai dekh add main tujhe 50 lakhs dongi agar tu mera kam karegi
a: jo peso ke liye lalchiho unmesa hum nahi hai
an: toh ban jana isme kya burai hai?
a: burai hain agar hum asise karenge toh bhagvan hume kabhi maf nahi karenge aur hain hum apse akhiry bar kehde rahe hai(saying these words she left the place)
an: add sun meri bat toh sun...

Then twinkle goes and says every thing to kunj and babey .kunj was shocked to listen these words .and then:


k: pagal ho gaye hai kya twinkle ?
t: main kyun pagal hoon? areh main khud add or anita aunty ko bate karte hua suna.
b: ladai mat karo abhi. baise main add ke saath bat karungi
main chalti hoon.
K: babey ap kahan ja rahi hai?
b: putar vo anita ko kam dene
t: kam dene? are you sure babye woh kam karengi?
b: areh kyun nahi karenge tajmahal hai kya jo raniyo ki tarah sojaegi!
t: thik hai

t : kunj main bhi clati hoon
k: tu kahaan ja rahi hai? (he holds twinkle's shoulders)
sanjanaaa veee
ajave sanjna ruh main shamil tujhe kar loon
jindadi betake hashil tujhe kar loon

t: kunj yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?
k: wahi jo mujhe dekhna chahiye
t: kya???
k: yehi ki tu kitini badi jasoos hai!
t:(she pushes him into the bed)
k: thank u tune mujhe aur mere bed ko mila diya!
t: accha toh tum apni bed se shaadi kar lete
k: waise sahi kaha tune mujhe bed se shaadi karni chahiye tujh jaise jal cucudi ke saath nahi!
t:ohay! ek toh main jal cucudi nahi hoon and ya mujhe abhi jana hai bye Mrs. Akhudu sarna!


THE END
Hope u guys liked the part😛
bye i will be back with next part

Edited by ashleshapriya1 - 9 years ago

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