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Well I am loving the past few episodes, finally CVs deeming themselves, Jasmine and Sidhant are rocking this week. And we must love Bebe for supporting Twinkle with her mission. Bebe isn't married but as a woman she understands and trusts Twinkle's instincts.
This is my version of what should have happened with the Tu Chaiye ...

Tu Chaiye

Bebe was safe thanks to Chinki's help, Twinkle was then able to free Kunj from jail. Anita and Yuvraj had really crossed all limits today. They had framed Kunj for attempted murder against Bebe and then tried to have Kunj killed in jail.

Twinkle had refused to marry Yuvraj no matter what happened between her and Kunj. He has betrayed her for years. He had tried to kill Kunj and molest her numerous times. How could she have doubted Kunj all those months ago. Kunj had always come to her rescue before and after that incident.

For Twinkle, the slap from her husband made her realize how immaturely she had acted. In that moment she had been punished for a crime she did not commit, however later she realized that slap actually was part of her punishment for all her past mistakes.

She fingered her swollen cheek.

The click of the door behind her made her snap out of the trance.

She turned around to see Kunj locking the door.

" Yeh tum kya kare ho?," she asked.

She knew he wouldn't refuse Yuvraj coming over to their room later. However today she really hoped they could have their room to themselves.

" Tumhe pasand nahinjab Yuvi aah jata humare room mein," he stated softly.

She smiled slightly.

Kunj came close to her.

" Tuhme kuch chaiye?," she stammered.

" Tu Chaiye," he mumbled.

She couldn't believe her ears.

" I mean do you want ice cream?," he asked.

She frowned.

" I mean barf, for the swelling on your face," he said remorsefully.

She softened to hear his words.

" I should have never slapped you. Bebe mere bauth kareeb hai. Lekin I shouldn't have hurt you no matter what. I am so sorry Twinkle," he whispered.

Twinkle tried not to cry in relief.

" Despite what I did to you, you still stood up for me and Bebe. You brought me home from jail. You saved us both," he stated.

Kunj caressed her cheek softly.

" Kunj jo maine kiya woh toh humare parivaar ke liye kiya. There is no need for thanks," she replied.

When he stepped back she noticed a small wound on his arm. It was probably from when the goons had attacked him. She fingered it briefly.

Kunj watched her grab the first aid kit.

He couldn't keep his eyes away as she cleaned his wound and then dressed it.

She looked adorable blowing on his cut. He was stunned with the concern she showed him. When they first met, she couldn't care less for him. All she wanted was time to prove to her mother how much she loved Yuvraj.

However they both knew the truth now. Yuvraj had never loved her. He just wanted her to claim her like some object of his desire.

They got ready for bed.

" Kunj aaj tum bed sojao. I will take the couch," Twinkle suggested.

"Nahin hum dono adults hain. We can share the bed," he stated.

" Are you sure?," she asked.

" Tune aaj kamal kar diya Mrs. Kunj Sarna. Hum dono ko aaj rat ho acchi neend chaiye hai. Come let's sleep," he said warmly.

Twinkle smiled. She took the left side and Kunj took the right side.

Later when Twinkle seemed to have fallen asleep, Kunj opened his eyes and gazed at her lovingly.

" Kaise tumhe batoon ki mujhe iss zindagi tumara saath chaiye Twinkle," he said.

He spooned her and soon fell asleep.

Twinkle felt his touch on her back. She stirred slightly.

" Muhje bhi tumara saath chaiye Kunj," she thought to herself before warmth of his body against her back lulled her to sleep.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS AG
loved it
grt job
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amazing os dear
loved it very much😃
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Nice os 😊 very amazing 😳
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Wonderful os😊
Do write more


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS.Loved It.

Would Love To See Twinkj Sharing The Bed In Show Also.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You killed it.. Amazing os.. Loved each and every thing about it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful os.
I wish it comes true it's high time this happens on show too.
Loved it plz do write more amazing stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is a lovely OS.
Please do write more .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hiii😊
I m a fan of this Couple...and this is the first OS which i read on this couple...and i must say...Amazing OS😳
You portrayed twinj's emotion very well
Do write more😃

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