FALLING FR HER- (updated) chap4 pg 12 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update, loved it do continue soon please.



thanx yaar...😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Just read it
Awesome updates loved them
But waiting for twinkle (hope its not natasha lol)
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: lovelysweet

Just read it

Awesome updates loved them
But waiting for twinkle (hope its not natasha lol)
Update soon



thanx yaar...😳
will give an update today...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Update kab milega? 🤗



today itself di...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
I can barely wait...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
chapter 3

flashback...😃

kunj heaved a sigh of relief when he spoke to karan...he still felt the cool breeze on his face...he turned n looked at the clock...5:30 it showed...its better to hv sm sleep he thought...karan will cm by 9:30...he pulled the curtains n set the alarm fr 8:30...n drifted off to sleep...😃


Karan n kunj reached the park by 9:00...karan was sweating like a marathon runner...😆kunj cudn't help but jst smile at his frnd...it was a bright sunny day...kunj thought abt getting sm thing to drink fr him n his buddy...he informed karan n strolled away to a nearby stall...he was having a strange sensation...mr over an unknown feeling...this was smthin really new to him...😉😉

he barely reached the stall that ...thud...a ball fell straight to his head...it was paining very badly...he jst wanted to rip off that person's head who threw it...😆😆...he turned his head to find the source frm where it came...😆😆

he was abt to shout he thought...but barely anything came out frm his mouth...did he became mute...😆no said his heart...but replied to his query..."u r fr time being mesmerized or hypnotized maybe😆😆"

his heart was right...hw can anyone nt be mesmerized by her...😉😉
yes her...😉😉
he didn't knew who she was...he jst knew that she was the one responsible fr the origin of an unknown feeling in him...she was taking few steps towards him...


Her hair was shoulder length of a rich shade of mahagony. It flowed in waves to adorn her glowing, cream coloured skin. Her eyes, framed by long lashes, were liquid brown and seemed to brighten the world. A straight nose, full lips - she seemed the picture of perfection. Had she smiled, the world would sigh with contentment. Had she laughed, the world would laugh with her. And had she wept, the whole world would want to comfort her.😳😳😳😳

she was jst perfect...perfect in every sense...he was still alive he thought...😆😆😆

she came face to face n murmured smthin...he didn't hear a single word...his full attention...on her😳😳

he snapped her fingers...


...trink-tring...

went the alarm...kunj snapped back to reality...he was hazed fr time being...it felt so real he thought...wished it was real...😳(poor thing😆😆)

but fortunately this dream had filled an unknown happiness n energy in him...😉😉


he got ready...karan was on time...

flash back ends...😃😃

karan was speeding up like crazy...
they reached the park by 9:00???
no they reached by 10:20😆😆😆
they were literally running to the place where nitasha will come...finally they saw her...they started walking slowly...nitasha was fuming wid anger...karan went to pacify her...😆😆
then n there came sm1 to help karan in the pacification...n kunj was glued to his spot...😉😉😉

the girl...she was the same girl he saw in his dream...😲😲😳😳

karan- twinkle...pls try to explain her yaar...😆


twinkle...kunj thought n smiled ...her mere presence was filling kunj with an unknown n spl feeling...was it really smthin spl...😉😉




dn...😆😆😆
SHRUTI😃






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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Oh my god! Finally an update..
Loved it.. absolutely loved it.. It was so good
Kunj's dream was so cute
Finally they met. I am sure he already fell for her.. Thank u so much for the update
Love u for this..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: .Ragini.

Oh my god! Finally an update..

Loved it.. absolutely loved it.. It was so good
Kunj's dream was so cute
Finally they met. I am sure he already fell for her.. Thank u so much for the update
Love u for this..



THANX A LOT DI...🤗
THIS MEANS A LOT...😃
A LITTLE MR CMING THE WAY BEFORE HE FALLS...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: abshcool



THANX A LOT DI...🤗
THIS MEANS A LOT...😃
A LITTLE MR CMING THE WAY BEFORE HE FALLS...😆

Hayye mera dil.. This was seriously a very nice update da..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
yay an update! ur descriptions are perfect! Hes half way done falling for her 😊😊

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