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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: alekhika20
beautiful os

Thank u so much dear..😳

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Aalina.
Jaldi mein itna acha os..why don't u write daily.. Jaldi jaldi an os

Agar os hi likhti rahi toh ff kaun complete karega !😆

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry
omg it was so beautiful and so cute. from start to end you wrote it so cutely. Loved the confession Twinkles reaction and the hug. Just so adorable and tht bracelet moment was just so perfect. i loved it. thank you so much for writing this beautiful OS and dedicating it to me 😳 you are an amazing writer. 👍🏼 pls keep writng more 🤗

Thank u meri sherni for liking it😆

Always dream of watching something like this in the show par kuch hota hi nahi hai toh socha khud hi likh lu

Itni bhi treef mat kar.. Digest nahi kar sakungi..😃

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

it was really good. you wrote so well within such short time. you are really good writer. amazing job

Tum na itni tareef bhi mat kia karo😆😉

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Duumps
It is very good Ragini.
Very very cute.
Loved TwiNJ being lovey dovey.
Now you have left us wanting for more.
Please write more.
All you ladies are trying to kill everyone in this forum with super hot pics and now this.Cant stop hyperventilating.

Thank u so much nats😊 ( i hope u dont mind me calling u that😳)

I wanted to see this im the serial so bad that finally i couldnt wait so ended up writing this... Plus jerry killed me with sid's hot pics so planned this as revenge😉😆 ( i know it sounds diabolical)

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mahadev07
This is sooo good didi👏
Keep up ur good work
Keep making us happy like this

Thank u so much dear 😳

achha laga to see u enjoy it..

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floral

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

wow buudy an awesome os by an awesome writer

loved it to the core

plzzz do write more

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kusharberry
wow buudy an awesome os by an awesome writer
loved it to the core
plzzz do write more

Thank u so much lina..😳

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teddyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Omg that was so beautiful! You portrayed their feelings so well I got cute butterflies LOL. I could literally imagine it all happening and then I died because how hot are they together?! The perfect little confession and the bracelet was a great gift for her since she's so delicate! Hehe I liked the Bebe part too :D great job, thank you for sharing a wonderful piece (:

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Ragini

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: teddyyy
Omg that was so beautiful! You portrayed their feelings so well I got cute butterflies LOL. I could literally imagine it all happening and then I died because how hot are they together?! The perfect little confession and the bracelet was a great gift for her since she's so delicate! Hehe I liked the Bebe part too :D great job, thank you for sharing a wonderful piece (:

Thank u so much... Truly humbled by all this love..

I always wanted such a scene in the show.. But that aint happening anytime soon so i wrote one instead..