TwiNj FF: The Storm in our Soul (Chp11 Pg22) 03/09

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princessjoey25

@princessjoey25

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

God U R back!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I so missed ur post...😊

This part was just awesome...

And their 'confession' stole my heart...😳😳😳

Pls continue soon... Can't wait long...

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sherin

@sherin..

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Loved it

The confession was perfect loved it

Hppy to see u back !!!!

Plz update soon

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: 3dancelover
Ahh I missed you🤗
Amazing Chap i loved it
loving the new twinkle
and they confessed yay!

And I missed you right back

🤗

And Thank you for liking this chappie!😊

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: .FlightOfEagle.
This was so amazing and sk very well written!
It was soo long,I loved the chatty twinkle and she was amazing!
And and I loved the sudden confession but it was soo amazing and intense!
I just love this story!
Update soon!

Aww...thank you!😳

I know it was long but trust me I thought of making it longer but just didn't have the energy to😆

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: princessjoey25
God U R back!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I so missed ur post...😊
This part was just awesome...
And their 'confession' stole my heart...😳😳😳
Pls continue soon... Can't wait long...

Yes!!! I am back!😃

I missed you all too...

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: iluvtwinj
Loved it
The confession was perfect loved it
Hppy to see u back !!!!
Plz update soon

Thank you!😃

Glad you liked it and happy to be back!😊

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Ragini

@.Ragini.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

A really high pitched unearthly squeal/yell/scream (at a shattering-the-ear-drums-of-human-beings frequency) is emitted by a shimmery silvery being (rather good looking even though decidedly not human) on reading this post...😆😆😆 All humans in the vicinity (radius of 2 kms at the very least, drop down dead (with no hopes of miraculous revivals), their ear drums crumpled into dust around them, their limbs in various stages of shock...Unfortunately one human (the shimmery being's brother who really ought to remain unnamed) is further away and so escapes unscathed...(Shucks! says the shimmery being, stamping her gossamer foot, must check these things next time and time actions perfectly to achieve maximum damage!!!!!) Ragini looks around the damage she has inflicted and shrugs..."What is a Ghost to do?" she asks around batting her eyelashes...Expectedly, no one replies... 😆😆😆

The confession! My heart stopped! Again! And just like that...I died again...Just like that...(At the moment, I'm alternating between ghost and human...depending on whether Kunj revives me or not!!!!)

Although it might be super boring for you to read of my frequent deaths, I'm having the time of my life...😆😆
It's really exhilarating dying like this (reading wonderful dreamy fic's I mean)...For here I am, grinning from ear to ear, having a visual feast as you explained it all so beautifully. Its like i was actually there...*note to self: strike off italy from your bucket list lol* 😆

If you're still reading this (and have not given up after the first two lines...) then you know that apart from being a medical marvel, I am also the looniest character in the Bin...And, so I assume, you would forgive my theatrics*A ghost may hope, right?????* 😆

Oh!:) I'm a blubbering, blithering, bubbling, blot of unstable goop right now...
*can't get a sane word out* am just staring at this page wondering whether I am, in reality, reading this...or whether my mind has just desperately conjured up...what my heart wants to read...(make that, see happening!!!!*wicked smile*)

Loved the update and love you

A truckload of hugs... Some are spilling over😳

*Apologises for the super long comment*

Edited by .Ragini. - 9 years ago

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Tranquility123

@Tranquility123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

I had to read the title twice just to make sure I was seeing clearly. I'm so glad you updated! I have been dying to know what happens for ages. Quite honestly, this was one of my favourite ffs when I was a silent reader of the forum. I absolutely love your concept, it's so deep and mature and you really are a fantastic writer. This update was great! And long! Bonus points. The confession was adorable and so real. Not all confessions are grand gestures. Please do continue soon. Can't wait to see what occurs between them now that the confession is done

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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

welcome back dear. you are back with bang. excellent update. absolutely loved it <3 thank i so much

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neverlandspirit

@neverlandspirit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: .Ragini.
A really high pitched unearthly squeal/yell/scream (at a shattering-the-ear-drums-of-human-beings frequency) is emitted by a shimmery silvery being (rather good looking even though decidedly not human) on reading this post...😆😆😆 All humans in the vicinity (radius of 2 kms at the very least, drop down dead (with no hopes of miraculous revivals), their ear drums crumpled into dust around them, their limbs in various stages of shock...Unfortunately one human (the shimmery being's brother who really ought to remain unnamed) is further away and so escapes unscathed...(Shucks! says the shimmery being, stamping her gossamer foot, must check these things next time and time actions perfectly to achieve maximum damage!!!!!) Ragini looks around the damage she has inflicted and shrugs..."What is a Ghost to do?" she asks around batting her eyelashes...Expectedly, no one replies... 😆😆😆

The confession! My heart stopped! Again! And just like that...I died again...Just like that...(At the moment, I'm alternating between ghost and human...depending on whether Kunj revives me or not!!!!)

Although it might be super boring for you to read of my frequent deaths, I'm having the time of my life...😆😆
It's really exhilarating dying like this (reading wonderful dreamy fic's I mean)...For here I am, grinning from ear to ear, having a visual feast as you explained it all so beautifully. Its like i was actually there...*note to self: strike off italy from your bucket list lol* 😆

If you're still reading this (and have not given up after the first two lines...) then you know that apart from being a medical marvel, I am also the looniest character in the Bin...And, so I assume, you would forgive my theatrics*A ghost may hope, right?????* 😆

Oh!:) I'm a blubbering, blithering, bubbling, blot of unstable goop right now...
*can't get a sane word out* am just staring at this page wondering whether I am, in reality, reading this...or whether my mind has just desperately conjured up...what my heart wants to read...(make that, see happening!!!!*wicked smile*)
Loved the update and love you
A truckload of hugs... Some are spilling over😳
*Apologises for the super long comment*

Babes..i can totally imagine the scenario perfectly. But darling don't die on me yet...there are more chapters to come. And plus I love you a lot to let you die😆

Glad I could evoke such emotions and more glad you liked this

🤗

PS: Sending a trailer full of hugs topped with chocolate cake too!