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dmgomg

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

So glad you updated! Can't wait to see how it goes ;)

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Amazing
Twinkle chinki convo was awesome
Chinki is a true friend..

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

awesome update.
Cant wait for next part
pls continue soon

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Aalina.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

How sweet..he gifted her 10kg butter 🤣🤣OMG Kunj, u r too sweet..I love every dialogues of this fiction..u have penned down so naturally.

Love that enemy vala dialogue.. She is ur enemy n u can't love ur enemy.😆😆😆. And then butter part is just awesome.. Nail paint butter yellow😆😆..heart problem😆..how sweetly u have penned down what they feel for each other.

Just love to read the next part..so waiting for that.plz update soon.and if u pm anybody then plz pm me also..don't want to miss the update.

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-Abhiya-

@-Abhiya-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

too awesome

lol allergic to Kunj heard that for the first time

update soon

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Starwalkers

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

That was really good. To be honest it was more than good. I love the way you handled Twinkle and Kunj. Waiting for part 3.

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Iansomer1

@Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Firstly i am so happy u updated

secondly i love how there is always a mention to 10 kg butter in ur update.lol

thirdly it was amazingly awesome.

now that both think they are in one sided love with the other.

its gonna be so much fun.

and the banana yellow and butter yellow lol

i love how you have handled it all with humor

only twinkle can think this foolishness. she is allergic to kunj rofl.

bubbly kunj k saath i am loving twinkle chinky pair too.

wish your chinky was in the show too.

Twinkle thought butter was romantic lol

both of them r perfect for eachother i thought kunj ko romance nahi ata gifting butter but twinkle found it romantic just like he intended lol

made for each other

Now one request plz do update soon. u have made me so anxious to know what happens next.

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

I loved this. I was happy to read about Twinkle standing upto Yuvi and have I mentioned how much I hate Anita?

Your Usha is a million times better than the one in the show. I have no hopes on her changing at all!

Felt sorry for Kunj when everything seemed to overwhelm him and his only escape was to run away! It was very TwiNj for Twinkle to call Kunj an idiot while confessing to him. In the show when they confess, I hope that they show something that is as amazing as this confession is.

Please continue this to show Kunj actually getting the credit or his project!

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
I loved this. I was happy to read about Twinkle standing upto Yuvi and have I mentioned how much I hate Anita?
Your Usha is a million times better than the one in the show. I have no hopes on her changing at all!
Felt sorry for Kunj when everything seemed to overwhelm him and his only escape was to run away! It was very TwiNj for Twinkle to call Kunj an idiot while confessing to him. In the show when they confess, I hope that they show something that is as amazing as this confession is.
Please continue this to show Kunj actually getting the credit or his project!

hi dear u posted ur comment on wrong 3 shot.

this comment suits the other 3 shot rain on our parade by gunjhun.

this ff didnt have confession yet.

abhi to butter wali game chal rahi hai lol

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DarkPhoenix93

@DarkPhoenix93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

I am so glad that you updated this story! Loved it and it was awesome!

Twinkle is all kinds of adorable. Loved how she thought she was allergic to Kunj and how fast she switched to jealous mode! I agree with Chinki - our Twinkle has got it bad for her husband!

Is Twinkle really going to seduce Kunj in the next update? I can't wait to read it. Update soon, please.