FF-Kismat Ka Khel [Ch1-pg5] 20/9

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: KriyaanshManan

Yup do send if possible😃

That would be a gr8 help to know about the updates

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Jamina96
Interesting

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Chapter-1 If love can be the biggest strength of a person and it might can be its biggest weakness also... Heart is the very delicate part of a human body...as delicate as paper,if it is caressed with love and affection by our loved ones then it can bloom,make us very strong,can give us life long happiness and the strength to fight from all the problems but if someone very close to our heart,breaks it then it can also gives us a life long never ending pain,so how sooth twinkle's heart and how will give her pain between yuvi and kunj... let's find out in this story... Twinkle,today she was not at right mood as its the 50th guy whom her mother had called to their house for her alliance,she wants to tell her mother that she loves yuvi and wants to spend her entire life with him but she can't as yuvi had taken a promise from her that she won't ever tell anyone about their love so she decides to use her never ending formulas to call off the alliance,totally unaware that this time destiny had stored something else for her which would change her completely and for forever,in evening a boy name sid comes to their house with his family to see twinkle and as a sweet,simple and obedient child twinkle comes to meet them with a tray of tea and snacks and one by one greets the every member of their family as it is joint family so their are many members who had come to see her then twinkle insists her mom to let her talk with sid in alone but her denies as she knows twinkle very well that she just only wants a chance but boy's family insists so unwilling leela agrees and twinkle takes sid to her room where yuvi is already waiting for them,in room yuvi threatens sid to go away with his family otherwise he would kill her and he takes out a knife and place it on sid's neck which scares him and within a second he runs from their,in hall he informs everyone that he doesn't want to marry twinkle and everyone ask him the reason but he left from their without giving any answer and with him,his family too left and leela understands everything when she notice twinkle standing at stairs and smiling so she calls her down and scolds her for doing this and vows that within two days no matter what happens she will anyhow will fix her marriage which makes twinkle hell worried as she very well knows that once her mother decides anything,she won't sit quite until she fulfill that and that very moment manohar sarna with his family comes from London to Punjab to settle down here for forever and he too were looking for a girl,for his younger son kunj...

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Sherni_Jerry

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

fab update
loved it
awesome begining
pls continue soon
thnx

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jiya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Nice start..
Loved it..

Thanks,glad that you love the update

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Iansomer1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Nice start just one request please increase the font size and spacing so its easy to read. sorry for asking. i loved ur banner its awesome and seems perfect for ur story.