Tapu and sonu os(one shot) friendship or love? Part-2 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok soo soon i will post the next part of os coz i am divinding it in some parts...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya10


Well welcome to TMKOC forum


thanks. please do write more OS's.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@sumaiya10, both creating new OS on new topic or continuing the same sonu and tappu love story topic is good. So can't actually tell you whether to make a new OS on new topic or not. You can continue your Sonu and Tappu Love Story topic. BTW, on which next topic are you planning to make an OS on ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Popatlal : CANCEL ! CANCEL!! TAPPU KI LOVE STORY CANCEL! Yahaa meri shaadi nhi ho rahi aur tum dono khud ka ghar basaana chahte ho. Jab tak meri shadi nhi ho jati main kisi aur ki shadi nhi hone dunga! Dunya hila dunga!!
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Originally posted by: CoerCorash

Popatlal : CANCEL ! CANCEL!! TAPPU KI LOVE STORY CANCEL! Yahaa meri shaadi nhi ho rahi aur tum dono khud ka ghar basaana chahte ho. Jab tak meri shadi nhi ho jati main kisi aur ki shadi nhi hone dunga! Dunya hila dunga!!


Sodhi: Chup Popat, jab dekho bar bar karte rahta hai 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ jack Bhide will kill you😆 Nice one btw
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@ sumaiya10.. continuation is a good idea because I want to knwo what happened next and Tina also deserves some dishum dishum na😆 so go for it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: *KT*~Lakshya*

I'm new as well...i think 😕. Well, i can remember posting on this forum ages ago so no one probably remembers me. Nway, @TM: its a lovely os. I always wondered if the cv's were going to show their teen romance but they're still shown as lil kids so doubt that.

Lol.. its funny.. actually most of the members you see here are new. SO, we consider you new as well. welcome to the forum😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jack4156

@sumaiya10, both creating new OS on new topic or continuing the same sonu and tappu love story topic is good. So can't actually tell you whether to make a new OS on new topic or not. You can continue your Sonu and Tappu Love Story topic. BTW, on which next topic are you planning to make an OS on ?


@ Sumaiya
I am with Jack on this one. You can continue the same topic or make one on a new topic.
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So i am writting part-2 of the os i am divinding it in some parts my friend shenaz has also helped me in this plzzz do read and say how it was

Part-2

Taapu and sonu came back to the club house. Tina was hell angry on the way tapu dragged sonu with him. Sonu entered and she did not even give a damn to Tina and tina was getting jealous looking at her and that rose

Tapu : Toh chalo frnds hum log kuch khelte hai (ok friends we will play now)

Gogi: haan chal Tapu , cricket khelte hain (yes tapu, lets play cricket)

Goli: tina tumhe pata hai na kaise khelte hai? (tina you know na how to play)

Tina : ha ha , pata hain mere papa Mumbai mein hone wali matches mein ek team ke captain hain (yes yes you know my dad was captain of the cricket matches in mumbai)

Goli : Tina tere papa ko cricket aat ho to ye zaroori nahi ki tujhe bhi aata ho (tina your dad knows cricket than its not important that you also knows the cricket)

[everyone laughs]

They all go in the society compound sonu goes to her home and keeps the rose safely and comes down to play

Everyone starts playing cricket Goli is bowling and Tapu is on strike. Goli bowls and Tapu hits a shot , the ball lands near Tina , she acts as if she is catching the ball and purposely pushes Sonu... Sonu falls down and her ankle twists

Sonu : Tumhe sach mein dikhai nahi deta kya Tina? (You really can't see tina?)

Tina : Oh pls , tum toh mujhe dekh sakti thi na .. toh phir hati kyun nahi? (Oh plzz, you can see me na they why did you not move from there?)

Tapu interrupts and hold Sonu's hand and helps her to get up. Tina is still sulking at Sonu .While holding her hand, she again slips and this time a stone hit in her leg

Tina : Oh , poor girl , lag gayi kya , Tapu tum chod do iska haath varna tumhe bhi gira degi (oh poor girl you got hurt tapu leave her otherwise she will you also fall down)

Tapu : Tina pls

And he takes her hand and placing her hand across his shoulder carefully takes her to Dr. Haathi

Dr. Haathi : Are Tappu Sena aaj tumhari savaari yaha kaise , kuch khana leke aye ho kya? (Oh tapu sena today you all are here have you brought some food for me?)

Tapu : [in a worried tone] nahi Haathi uncle , vo Sonu ka ankle twist ho gaya hai aur uske pair mai bhi patthar chala gaya hai (no hathi uncle sonu got her ankle twist and also stone got into her leg)

Hathi: arre isse jaldi yaha lao mai check karta hun (oh bring her here i will check her)

Tapu take sonu and makes her sit on a chair dr. Hathi checks her

Hathi: hmm yeh baat hai mai kuch medicines likta hun aur ek spray bhi woh sonu ko dena abdul ki dukaan se lekar ya medical store se lekar (hmm thats the matter i will write down some medicines and one spray for sonu bring from abdul's shop or medical store)

Tapu: thik hathi mai lata hun (ok hathi uncle i will bring)

But sonu catches tapu's hand

Sonu: tapu tu mat ja mujhe akele chodkar (tapu you don't go leaving me alone)

Tapu: sonu tu ruk mai abhi gaya aur abhi aya aur pinku goli gogi hai na yaha (sonu you wait i will just go and just come and pinku goli gogi is here na)

Sonu: nahi (no)

Tapu: sonu..

Tina: tapu mai jati hun na tum yaha ruko mai jake lati hun (tapu wait i will go you ne here)

Hathi: ok beta ao mere saath (ok beta come with me)

Tina goes from tapu smiles and looks at sonu

Dr. Hathi write some medicines names and gives it to tina she takes it and goes to medical store

Medical shop uncle: are you sure tumhe yehi spray chahiye kyunki isse pair mai aur dar hota hai hadi toot jati hai!!
(Are you sure you need this spray beacuse this spray can make you leg more hurt and the bone can also break!!)

Tina: ha mujhe yehi chahiye aur apse jitna kaha jaye utna hi kijiye (yes i want this only and what i said you just do that and give me this)

Tina takes the and goes to dr. Hathi's house and she see tapu catching sonu's hand and thinks
Yeh sonu toh tapu ke aur kharib arahi hai mujhe kuch karna hoga.. Idea mai ek kaam karti hun iske aai baba ku bulati hun woh yeh dekhenge toh aur gusse mai ajayenge aur goli ne bhi bola tha ki bhide uncle tapu se nafrat karte hai..(this sonu is getting more close to tapu i think i need to do something idea i should call her parents they will see this and get angry and goli also told that bhide uncles hates tapu)

She goes and calls her parents they come bhide gets angery seeing tapu close to sonu

Bhide: tapu dur hato sonu hum agaye hain hum sonu ka dhayan raksakte hai (tapu move away from sonu we came here and we can take care of her)

Tapu moves back they go near sonu

Bhide: sonu beta yeh kaise hua zaroor tapu ne hi shot mara hoga kuch mai tumahre school khul rahe hai (sonu beta how did this happen surely tapu have hit the shot and you school are going to open in some days)

Sonu: sorry baba sorry aai maine app logo ko bataya nahi aur tapu shot nahi mara usne toh meri madad ki (sorry baba sorry aai i did not inform you about this and tapu has not hit the shor he has helped me)

Bhide: sonu tu tapu ki side matle yeh tapu ki wajah sonu bhi sharat kar rahi hai (sonu don't take tapu's side beacuse of tapu you and becoming naughty)

Madhvi: jane dijiye kya app bhi (let it be na)

Tapu: haan bhide uncle aur tina tum spray layi ho na (yes bhide uncle and tina you brought the spray na)

Tina: yes

She gives it to tapu but bhide takes it and opens the cap of bottle to spray tapu looks at the bottle and thinks there is something fishy he stops bhide from spraying and says

Tapu: bhide uncle rukhiye mujhe dijiye mai spray karta hun (bhide uncle wait give me the bottle i will spray)

He take the bottle and hold sonu's leg bhide gets angry seeing this tapu checks the bottle bhid was about to say something then tapu says

Tapu: tina yeh kya hai tumhe pata hai yeh kaunsa spray hai (tina what is this you know which spray is this)

Tina: tapu actually

Tapu: kya tapu tumne yeh janmuch ke kiye tumhe pata tha ki iss spray se sonu ki ankle twist ho sakti thi phir tum yeh layi (what tapu you did this purposly you knew because of this spray sonu's ankle can be twist or break the bone then also you brought it)

Tina: par tapu joh woh uncle ne diya mai woh layi (but tapu what that uncle gave i brought)

Tapu: jhoot mat bolo tina joh tumne unhe dene ke liye kaha woh uncle wohi diye (no don't lie tina what you said to give that uncle gave)

Tina: but tapu

Tapu: tina yaha se chale jao (tina go from here)

Tina: but

Tapu: GO

Tina gives a deadly glare to sonu and thinks i will not leave you sonu and she leave sonu gets happy and catches tapu's both hands and says

Sonu: thank you tapu tumahri wajah se mai baj gayi (thank you tapu because of you i got saved)

Tapu: dosti ka ek wusool hai madam no sorry no thank you (friendship has a rule no sorry no thank you)

Tapu said catching her nose

Bhide saw that and thought

"Iss tapu ka toh kuch karna padega (i need to do something for this tapu)"

Precap: all the tapu sena goes to a school trip...

So how it was chappals justas and andas are welcome and negative an positive both comments are welcome and do say how it was...

Will post the next part in some days

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