P O L I C E S T O R Y ~~ (SYNOPSIS IS UP) ~~

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I N S I G H T


'I'm the police. And I'm here to arrest you. You've broken the law. I did not write the law. I may even disagree with the law. But I will enforce it. No matter how you plead, cajole, beg or attempt to stir my sympathies, nothing you do will stop me from placing you in a steel cage with grey bars. If you run away, I will chase you. If you fight me, I will fight back. If you shoot at me, I will shoot back. By law, I am unable to walk away. I'm a consequence. I am the unpaid bill. I am fate with a badge and a gun. Behind my badge is a heart like yours. I bleed. I think. I love. And yes, I can be killed. And although I'm but one man, I have thousands of brothers and sisters who are the same as me. They will lay down their lives for me. And I them. We stand watch together. A thin blue line. Protecting the prey from the predators. The good from the bad. We are the police.'


________ End Of Watch



DEDICATION ~ TO ALL THE BRAVE PEOPLE WHO SERVING OUR COUNTRY STANDING FRONT AND BRAVE~



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S Y N O P S I S




F E M M E F A T A L E...


This story is about the special division officer dealing with the psycho killer. My first ever Suspense thriller.

Tag line:- It was her beauty, which killed those men.


"Don't touch me " I moved away from his touch, "someone's out there, they will killing everyone... Who touches me." His fingers roughly curled around my chin, pulling it up, I met his eyes blazing eyes burning with what? Love and lust!


"I want that psychotic coward to come out." The minute the last word left his sculptured mouth were over mine, nibbling my lower lip. Throughout his chaste kiss I kept my eyes open, absorbing the intensity which he was pouring into his kiss. Breaking the kiss he looked at me with his unbelievable desire pooled eyes. "Now sleep." Switching off the night lamp, I watched his shadow melted in the darkness as I heard his footsteps leaving me alone in my apprehension.


What did I yearned for? Just to be loved by her, I must be the one to love her hold her, is that too much. Why this society is so adamant to accept my love. I saw her how she laughed for his words, I killed him, just yearned to be the reason of her laughter, when my eyes watched him blew his dirty air into her eyes, I popped his eyes out is that wrong. If anyone comes in between me and her I simply vacated them is that wrong. I don't know why people called my psycho, I loved her. What I did wrong is melted by her beauty, the day I met her. Hearing her footsteps running to other man while I helplessly lying here in my coffin six feet under the ground. It's the love which I had for her... killed me.


Wahaan jahaan tuhi mera libaas hai
Wahaan jahaan teri hi bas talash hai
Wahaan jahaan tujhi pe khatam aas hai
Wahin shuru wahin pe dafan jaan hai...


Yeh jism hai toh kya
Ye rooh ka libaas hai
Yeh dard hai toh kya
Ye ishq ki talash hai
Fanaa kiya mujhe
Ye chahne ki aas ne
Tarah tarah shikast hi hua...

(Just imagine those lyrics were spell out slowly one by one in Ali azmal voice as a piano notes tuning in the background. Nerve chilling right.)


WARNING:- if you can't handle nerve chill, violence, manhandling, humiliation. And intense scenes please avoid this story. May be read at your risk.


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H A M L E T...


Acromedy genre.


A story of a sincere Anti-Terrorist police officer, this story deals his personal and professional life.


Why should this heart remain lonely,
Why should we live in pieces..
Why should my soul bear this..
I've been living alone..
I'm saying this every moment,

That I need you..
That I need you..



"Go... Our nation needs you.!" He averted her request with a shake of his head.


"I served my nation... Enough.." saying he scooted closer to her dragging his wounded knees on the marbled floor. "Let me have an honor to die with you and my child." His hand involuntarily touched her belly.


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Hi guys please help me with, tell me which story you want first.
Femme fatale

Or

Hamlet.
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Hi akka, first of all, big jhappis to you sissy. And I'm extremely sorry for your loss. Death is an inevitable part of a man's journey. I just hope your friend rest in peace and you be bestowed with the strength to cope her loss.
And regarding the story, I feel you can pull off any kind of genre. Is your story of Hamlet anywhere related to the Shakespeare? Oh! I just can't digest his stories, they are kind of..umm...pretty much absurd, I would like to say. Btw, any Shakespeare lover here? I would go with the Femme Fatale, mainly intriguied by the concept and synopsis.
Lots of love, to you as well as children,
Nivi
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome post... Kam di ur wish u can post any one of it at first...
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Dear Kam,

I really do not care which one you post, both are very different and promise to be intriguing (for want of a better word..). I will read but will need time to comment (I find first person POV, especially for mystery stories to be ... a trifle limiting, but that is entirely my inability as you would know, I ramble a lot😆😆😆 - but then you always manage to write beautifully in first person PoV,)

Take time to get over your loss, it is a loss that never goes away, but then you should take your time to grieve - for grief is but a sign of love.

Will wait for your updates.

lots of love,
Nyna

PS - Nivi - Shakespeare was not absurd he was downright boring and a pain in all the wrong places - we hated his plays in school (compulsory for English😡😡 ) but once you are out of school, and no longer forced to read them, you find that they are actually not so bad😉
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Amazing start !! It's Femme fatale for me😃
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can you write both? If not :( then Hamlet (just to see what drives a soldier to fight leaving behind everything back). I have always been intrigued by soldiers and what makes them take and give life. killing someone without any reason and giving your own life for someone you have never met is something extraordinary.

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