Punishment - Swasan SS - Chapter:6 updated pg:3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Swara walking aimless on the road. It is dark night and she getting the flash back of Sanskar Announcing his marriage with Kavita. She thinks why destiny always Cruel with her and her break down and thinks Sanskar words after Laksh return she will have sleepless night.

Where As in MM Sujata is not all happy with Sanskar Decision as everyone Tries to Explain Sanskar that his Decision is Wrong but He did not listen and Went up to his Room.

So this is the story after Six month Separation of Swasan and Laksh Return back to mm.

Chapter: 1

Swara is in Baadi lying lifeless on Bed locking the door of her room. Thinking about the moment she spend with Sanskar, Six month Separation and handing over her Divorce papers

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After Laksh Filled Sindoor in Ragini Forehead , As Sujata Asked Sanskar To filled , Sanskar Came to the hall and Call Someone on the Phone Asked her to bring her. Constable brought Kavita and Sanskar Hug Kavita Tight, Everyone Shocked Swara Says What is all this.

Sanskar Smiles Evilly Punishment Remember I told you that after Laksh Return You will get your Huge Punishment. Swara Says I thought you have forgotten it. Sanskar Says Oh! Please Ms. Bose how I can forget the pain you have given to me, the ditches and everything, because of you I have become alcoholic just because of you. Kavita is much better than you she has trust on me, on my love she did not want to leave me. Swara beg down forgiveness but Kavita Says Sanskar always love me that way he calls me back here so we can get married. Ragini and everyone try hard to Explain but Nothing happen. Everything went in Vain. Sanskar hand over Divorce papers to Swara and Says I will send someone to get it and one more thing before you go I want you to plan my Wedding as my wedding gift.

Swara walks away and came out from mansion walking aimlessly.

Precap: Swara decided to sign Divorce papers and She Started preparing for Sanskar and Kavita Marriage. And Some Revelations, Sanskar Shocked.

p.s i hope you all like it 😃 Comment it if you like...

Chapter:1 updated pg:1 - Up

Chapter :2 updated pg:1 - down after chapter:1

Chapter :3 updated pg:1 - After Chapter :2

Chapter :4 updated pg:2

Chapter :5 updated pg:2

Chapter : 6 Updated pg:3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear yasmin...
Interesting update...sanky in revenge mode..though I hated this track in serial...I'm hoping u will give some interesting twist to it...FINGers crossed..

Swasan will be together in end na???hoping
..I'm wondering whose punishment it will be??sanky or swara

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER: 2

Swara recollects the words ... of Sanskar how he was Ashamed to love her Swara gets up with a start n walks out..! Swara Sees the Divorce papers and Remember their wedding vows and Bas ek hi mera sahara tha mahi ..woh bhi chuta hai majdhar me...
Dushman ko bhi aisi... saza na de rabba... jo woh ..kabhi pyaar me plays in bg. Ragini Consoles Swara and Says no Swara You can't be Broken like this you have to fight for your love. Swara Says No I lost today today I came to know what big mistake I have committed for leaving Sanskar alone for Six months. This is my punishment and my punishment will go with my End of my life. Ragini Says No you won't sign the Papers Sanskar Can't Finish Everything So Soon. I will talk to Sanskar and I am sure everything will be better. Swara Says No Ragini You won't do anything Please Ragini This Punishment is for me I will handle it and after Sanskar Kavita marriage I will go to Singapore As I am suffering from Blood Cancer my treatment will happen there and I will settled down there. But Please Don't Ever Let Sanskar Know about my Diseases Otherwise he won't get married. Ragini Says but Swara how long you will suffer like this? And Sanskar should also know about this. No Ragini I don't want Sanskar to fall anymore trouble because of me already he is great Trouble. So please Don't Tell him anything regarding my Diseases. Swaragini hug Each other.

Precap: Sanskar and Kavita Comes to Baadi for discussing Some plans for their marriage and he started to taunt Swara and Swara Kept her Silence.

P.s Hopefully you will love it . Please Comment it 😳

Edited by Swasain - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear yasmin...
Lovely concept and a beautiful start to a awesome story. ...poor swara hope she gets well soon. ...I love the twist shown with kavita entry a day wonder how he will handle her illness...

Just one request...Please upset punar viva too...I missue that story...

As for this bring on the twist I say...

Waiting as always

Razia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter: 3

Sanskar in his Room and Looking at Swara Picture and Thinking That No Swara I can't forgive you that easily. I know you have done all this for Ragini but What about me you never think about me You Always took my love for Granted. And Threw Swara Picture on the Floor. Just then Kavita Arrive in Sanskar Room.

Kavita POV:

You are not all alone suffering yourself but Swara is suffering more than you. When you will know that Your Swara is suffering from Blood Cancer You will be more Breaks down enough. But how I wish to tell you Whole Truth about Swara illness but Due to Swara Promise I can't able to tell you.

Sanskar Says Thanks Kavita for Supporting in this Plan. Kavita Says I am just doing like a Good Friend. But I think you should give one more Chance to Swara I don't know what happen to between you in those 6 months but I think You Should give One Chance. Sanskar Says No Kavita Swara always took my love, respect everything for Granted. But No more by marrying you I will make her Realized How much pain it cause when someone beloved left you and blame you for no Reason. Before Kavita could Say anything He Ask to leave him alone.

At Baadi:-

Swara is working on Laptop Regularly throughout Night Sumi and Ragini Tells Swara to Rest for Some time but Swara Says No I am fine Ragini in jerk closed the Laptop and Says Enough Swara you are not That Brave who is not handling any injustice or Torturing. Swara Says Life and my love already gave me huge Punishment and what injustice in this. And Ragini I am doing for Sanskar Happiness only. Just Then Kavita and Sanskar Arrive and Sanskar Says Look Kavita Ms. Bose are Already Daydreaming about His another Boyfriend and He Taunt, Taunt but Swara Kept Her Silence. Ragini and Sumi wanted to tell Sanskar about Swara illness but Swara stop them. Swara Just Simple Says Sir after two days you won't able to see my Face anymore. And No more Trouble will come Near You. In the form of me. She also handover Honeymoon Tickets to Kavita as Gift She Hug Kavita and Says Wishing You Happy married life.

Precap: Engagement of Kavita and Sanskar and Sanskar comes to know whole Truth about Swara illness. Sanskar Rushed to Airport after hearing the Audio Tape of Swara. Will Sanskar able to Stop Swara Before it's too late.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read The 3 chapters in 1go...
Loved it loadzzz...
Its awesome...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yasmin...dear
Chapter 2 and 3 were awesome...

Shocking twist swara got blood cancer...and kavi also knows...kavi turned over a new leaf and helping both swasan...swara by keep her illness as secret and sanky by marrying him and in his plan to punish swara...how hard it is for her to keep mum...recap shows sanky will know truth...but will he ever going to find swara...swara is ill..will she get treatment and proper love..or will she die alone...curious

Waiting for next
Talia


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter: 4

Sujata , Annapurna and all are very upset with Sanskar Decision as they think whatever happens in those Six months it is a Fault of a Circumstances and unnecessarily Sanskar is hurting himself and Swara Too.

Sujata Says Don't knows Why Sanskar is doing all those things I felt so sorry for Swara Poor She is fighting for her love and life too. Just then Sanskar arrive and says why no preparation of my engagement is going on. Laksh Says how can you so Stubborn and Tough you are punishing Swara So hard. Sanskar Said Enough Laksh I don't want to hear her name in this house anymore. When you got married to Kavya that time did I tries to Explain You. But did you listen. No Na! Then why you are not allowing me to do what I want. Ram Stood Up in Anger! And Slap Sanskar Tight and Says:

Ram: Enough Sanskar Just Enough you are Adult and big enough at that don't mean you will talk Rubbish we will Listen.

Sanskar: Papa you know Swara left me and everyone blames me because of her, but still you Care for Swara! How could you all.

Ram: That's because she is Our Same Swara who can give everything She Return US back you. But you can't change because for you Ego is much bigger than your Relationship. Do you know how much she is suffering now?

Sanskar: Papa she is already Dreaming about Next marriage and all what will She Suffer!

Sujata: Slap Sanskar Hard! And Says She is suffering from Blood Cancer and she did not allow anyone to tell to you so that you can live peaceful life. So that you don't face any more Trouble because her. If god ever asks me in next birth I would prefer Swara as my Daughter who is much better than you. And she cries bitterly.

Ragini: Swara has This Audio for you Just Listen at once and she also told me That She will always Love you forever.

Ragini plays the Tape:

Swara Says: Hi I know Sanskar you would never like to see my face after what happen in those Six months but Sanskar whatever has happened it is mistake of Circumstances. I know you still Love me and also have Special place for me in your Heart. But Sanskar I don't want to See Your Sad Face while I Die I wanted you to be Same Sanskar as Happy like Always. I don't know how much time I have but till I breath my last I will always love and will have hope in my heart that you will come and take my in your Arms. Say Swara I love you So much.

Sanskar Break Down and Says I have lost her Totally She give me So much happiness and Struggled went through So much pain and I only give her Pain I am so much in my Ego that I could see her Pain. I will have to stop her. I will bring her back at any cost.

Precap: Swara at Check IN Counter and Sanskar looking for here and There At airport and Screams Swaraaa!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update yasmin..
finally sanky knows the whole truth...we will be having a dramatic airport scene..or swara will be gone forever?? Waiting

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter: 5

Sanskar Rush to the Airport and Thinking about the moment He Spent with Swara, and also how He Hurt Swara and Reached the Airport Rushed inside the Airport Where as Swara Just Check IN Counter and Hit miss With Sanskar.

Sanskar Came Near Counter But Their Don't Know Anything. He Search for Swara Here and There. Swara Reaches Near Gate and Sit There Sadly.

Sanskar Break Down and Feels That He Loose Swara and Screams Swara. Swara Felt Rest less and Ran Aimless and Thinking Sanskar Must be In Trouble. She Saw Sanskar Unconscious On the Ground. She Rushed To Sanskar and Wake Him Up by Sprinkle on Water on His Face. Sanskar Wake Up and Hug Swara and Says Forgive Me Swara!

Every One Looks On So Swara Take Sanskar to the Airport Lounge. Before Swara Could Say Anything.

Sanskar Pin Swara to the Wall and Says How Dare You? How could you ever hide Things from me about your Diseases? You Know Na How much I love you. And you are my life. Swara Says you know everything my illness. I don't want to feel more Trouble. Because of me.

Sanskar Says You are Coming with Me to Our Home and Family and He Fill Swara Maang. Swara Feels Blessed and Hug Sanskar.

Precap: Swara Treatment Start and Doctor Says If Their can cooperate like this And Swara Gets Proper love from her husband more. Then she will Recover Rapidly.

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