aadhe adhure- the incomplete desire chapter 1)

[COLOR=orange] Aadhe Adhure - the incomplete desire[COLOR]


This is my first story hope u guys like me ..


Characters of story ..


Sanskar- A hard-working man... He is 21 year old and loves his wife a lot. His world starts and end on his wife. He always wants his wife to be happy..


Swara - sanskar's wife... She is very confused personality. Loves her hubby .age -20

Sahil - SANSKAR'S best friend. He has a crush on swara. He frequently used to meet swasan ..

Lucky - SANSKAR'S brother.

Ragini- lakshaya wife. Sshe doesn't like swara.

Plot..

Sanskar's POV

So finally after 5 weeks I was returning to my home, to my shona. It was very hard to pass these 5 weeks without her. I was badly missing her and I knew her condition would be same. But this work was also important. I didn't informed Her about my arrival.. I wanted to give her a surprise. She always wanted a sweet home.. And I didn't tell her that I had saved money for our house.. The Construction work also started. I would give her surprise. When our dream house would be completed.


I still remember the first day when, I saw her in school. I just passed out 10th she was new in school .. The Most beautiful girl I have seen. Every boy wanted her to be his girlfriend. I was little bit shy. But thanks to my chemistry teacher who made us partner in project. I started spending time with her... We started falling for each other.. But I got shocked when I found out that sahil, also liked her. On our farewell party , sahil mixed alcohol in her drink. Thanks to him because of this, she kissed me in front of whole school...

Situation became worse after that, when our parents got to know about it. I saw her after a week in the hospital, like me she was badly beaten by her parents.. He swelled Cheeks, marks of belt on her hands... I couldn't able to tolerate it. And we decided to elope. After that we got married.. My bro helped me a lot... But ragini don't know Y she was against our marriage.. Leave her




Finally I reached, it was raining outside... I was fully drenched... I knocked the door.. It was more than 5 minutes. I was getting panicked .." Is she alright.? " I called her she was not attending my calls. I cried out " .. Jaan ".. Finally she opened the gate ..

I immediately hugged her " jaan r u OK .. "

" I'm perfectly alright hubs." She smiled

"Where were u, I was very much scared ". I enquired .

" hubs woh I.. "

" jaan u are fully drenched. U were in the terrace "

" ya hubs... " she placed her head on my chest " I was badly missing u "

"Me too jaan. " I looked towards her Rosy lips... My wife is looking dam hot in wet sari." I touched her cheeks... And placed my other hand on her waist. She closed her eyes I was about to kiss him

" hello guys .. " sahil came towards us with a smiling face.

" what r u doing in my house, at this time? " I noticed he was coming from terrace. He was also fully wet.

"hubs, He came here to meet u " she explained

" ya sanky, it's. too late meet u tomorrow " he left ..


After dinner... We went to our room. She wore a black nighty... She was standing before mirror... Combing her hair.. I hugged her from back... And Slightly removed her hair . " u r looking too hot "

"thanks for the compliment hubs " she smiled ..

I started kissing in her neck.. She was also loosing her control... But she immediately stopped me

" what happened jaan, it's so many days.. We were far from each other.. Today I want to make love with u "

" not now hubs. I'm very much tired... " she said and then laid down to her side..

This was the first time she denied me. But I found something fishy when I saw sahil, in my house his smile was saying that he was also in the terrace...,, no no sanskar how can u think this about swara .. U know for u she left her family. I looked towards her... She was looking like an angel.. I couldn't bear this sahil any more. Only tolerating him because he is the owner of our house... Moreover he helped me in my hard time... But I can't deny the fact that he had a crush on my wife. Although he said now he moved on but I couldn't believe in him. As our dream house would be completed I'll take my jaan with me.

I kissed her cheeks " good night jaan "

I slept hugging her ...


Note:- this is nilu's story.. I'm posting it in behalf of her..


Guys this is my first attempt.. Please encourage me.. If u like this. . only then I'll continue it.. Your lovely friend nilu .. 😊

Hey nilu...

Chapter 2

Sanskar's POV ..

I woke up early in the morning. My jaan was still sleeping. After taking shower, I got ready for my office... I looked towards her... Sun Ray's were falling on her cheeks, disturbing her, she turned and her nighty was slightly shifted to upward exposing her thighs... I move towards her and cares them.. She smiled even in sleep she reminded my touch... I slighty moved my hand upward

"aww baby " she cried...

Baby she never called me that, she always called me hubs...

" jaan r u OK " I asked

She rubbed her eyes. "hubs u r ready, Y don't u wake me up "

"I don't have dare to disturb u, " I smirked" jaan Y u cried..."

"Nothing hubs I'm alright."

I looked towards her thigh. " jaan what is this, this marks here. How it came here ?"

"Hubs I don't know, but it's paining " she hugged me..

These marks were as if someone bit her there, 'sanskar U r again doubting her'. Since the time, I returned back I found some difference in her behavior...

"Hubs , I love u." she kissed on my chest.

These words melts my doubts . " jaan I m getting late bye." I left...

Sanskar's POV ends...

After sanskar left for his office swara went, to take shower.

Swara's POV

Yesterday night my hubs returned back after 5 weeks... Earlier I badly missed him, but later sahil came to give me company. I get fully bored here, there is no one this house is in quite far away from city . I looked towards me through mirror. Oh these marks, hubs wanted to make love with me, but I can't untill I get rid of these marks. Only 3 days more,then I'm all ur hubs... Sorry I lied to u...

It's had been a long time we haven't eat together. Today, I thought to give him surprise. By all his favorite dishes... Then suddenly I felt two hands caressing my belly, dipping index finger on my navel... He nuzzles his nose in my hair. I closed my eyes in pleasure.

" hubs... u came so soon "

" not hubs, I'm baby " he replied

"Sahil u..." I jerked him " how dare u? Get out of my house."

" relax baby, don't forget it's my house and u r tenant of this house... But owner of my heart." He smirked and pulled me closer. And smelled my fragrance

" u r soo tempting... Jaan, let's be together "

I jerked him harder that he fell down. " sahil go, from here and don't call me that, only my hubs call me that."

" I hate him, u had always preferred him over me .. " he showed his anger ..

Before I could say anything, hubs called me

" how's u jaan?"

" hubs u just saw me 2 hour ago. And now ur asking me how am I,Y?" I questioned

" jaan, I feel like ur in trouble, as if someone snatching u from me . " he showed his insecurity

" hubs I love u, today I have surprise for u I'm coming to ur office "

" I'm waiting jaan love u " he cut the call.

Sahil was staring me as if he would. Kill me... I moved towards kitchen he followed me...

" hubs, hubs, only thing u know , after his arrival u r ignoring me..."

" he is my life sahil, I know u helped me, but I can't hear a word against him."

" this all preparation, foods only for him and for me " he looked towards me with hope.

" nothing, I have already told u my first priority is my hubs, now u may leave, because this time if he will see u there I'll not going to save u like last night." I warned him ..

He grab my hand and pulled me towards him." u r so smart shona."

" only my hubs call me shona, now leave I have to do so many preparations... "He left with dissatisfied face...

I reached to my hub's office nearly 2:10pm...

I knocked the door.

"I'm busy, meet me in the evening " he said without looking at me.

"hubs do u really want me to go. " I asked him sweetly...

"jaan, sorry I thought it was someone else, u come na... "

"Hubs enough working, first eat something..." I closed his laptop and removed all the files from the table... I servered him the food ..

"All this for me... " his happiness was clearly seen in his eyes.


We had lunched together. After that he engaged in his work. Seriously I hate his work.. All the time.
Mr mohan sengupta didn't showed mercy on my hubs... I quite felt jealous when he gave more importance to these case files than me. I sat on his lap and placed my head on his chest .

"jaan it's late, u should leave... I'm doing my work. "

"hubs who told u not to do ur work. " I hugged him more tightly " let me like this, I missed this a lot." I closed my eyes rested my head on his heart.

"my condition was also same, but tonight I'll tell u how much I missed u." He showed his desires to me... I was very much tensed that how would deny him tonight.

He was checking out his mails, I just looked at his laptop... I saw a mail... hi sanskar it's a offer to choose one of the girl, she will make ur night beautiful... three pics were seen... I looked towards him, he knew me how I would react.

"Hubs what's this? Whose r these girl? Tell me which one u choosed!!!" Like this I shouted on him.

" jaan it's... It's... nothing like that, they r our... Clients..." he stammered...

I don't know but I thought he was lying. " I can't see my hubs with anyone else. " I kissed on his cheeks " I love u."

" I'll not cheat u." he confirmed

Just then ragini came inside the room without knocking. She was staring me, she didn't liked that I was in his lap.

"I need to talk to u, alone "

"Hubs I think I should leave " I left from there.

In the night, I was looking outside . just then hubs came out from washroom. I was admiring him, only a towel wrapped around his waist. His wet hair from where the water droplets were falling in his body... I couldn't able to control my self, I hugged him from back " hubs... "

"my jaan is loosing her control." He released the hug... His eyes were clearly saying what he wanted... He was moving towards me, and we fell down on the bed. he was on me.

" jaan I love u. " he started kissing on my collar bone. And his hands was searching my body. I current was passing in my whole body. I also want this, but I stopped him.

" don't hubs." I denied.

" r u OK, jaan Y r u denying me? " he asked.

" hubs, I m not well today just wait for three days." I lied.

" OK, only three days... Not more than that but till then how will I pass my night. "

" just remember our first night " I winked...

He kissed on my forehead." good night jaan." and slept on his place.

'Hubs even don't like lying to u, but Y lied me about those girl... I'm not doubting on U, but this heart is not listening to me... I trust u hubs...' I slept on his chest... Please don't leave me hubs, else I'll die...

Done with another part ... If u like this part please comment and for any writing mistake forgive me.. I'm not so good in English.. Your friend nilu 😊