Untamed - A Swasan Story-EPILOGUE (PG-30)

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Nupur 🤗

Yes I did .. YayOh God ! I cant believe myself I did this feat😆.Will look forward to know your thoughts.

Yeah Lucky, I can't believe either 😲😆

You can pat your back 😛

Before going to sleep, thought to give a quick comment as I don't want to Res in a fear of never unresing ever 🥱

So Sahil is not someone good & quite possessive - no wonder!

And his partners are also not good!

I so want to ask this SHE, the debt-gaining-lady that how she will feel when Swara's life will be destroyed by these people who are very reputed in the society?

Btw Laksh showed the mirror to Ragini, even though unknowingly! She can't imagine her life without Laksh whom she known & loved for 4 months Bt she didn't give a thought for Swara & Sanskaar who are together for more than 12/13 years and love each other so very much for god knows since when! Just bcoz she was jealous!!!

I think I got Ragini's role in this fiasco! And I have this feeling that it's Ragini who called Swara when she was writing the letter to Sanskaar! Maybe Ragini came to tell Swara the truth? And why Sanskaar gave up & why he is behaving the way she is? If so, it will be quite a repentance for Ragini!

And I'm so waiting for The UNTAMED Sanskaar! Specially his reaction to Sahil! He already did a great job on enraging Sanskaar!

Okay I think I blabbered too much and don't know did I made any sense or not! Too sleepy anyway!

Hope you will update the next part soon as well...

Love,

~ Nupur

P.S: Saku's lines are beautiful 😳

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Sushma Yadav

@Limerence

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#132

Heyy dear

To awesome to say that

How helpless people become through their emotion and ofcouse emotions is greatest thing.

I like sujoy and laksh character not becoz they positive its just becoz the way of concern they show towards their loved once. Taking right decision not affecting any status etc. Just straight forward. If something is right then right and wrong is wrong.

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#133

Unres for chapter 6

Dear Lucky,
Lately I've been reading your updates more than once. Today I got 5 mins late for my office, as I couldn't wait to read! 😊
Last time I think I wrongly guessed the person as Shekhar. Now I think it's Parvati... or a result of Ragini's ploy.

Sahil was truly an unwanted element who only got entry just because Sanskar had left his position of a guard from Swara's life. He doesn't know by doing this he was letting his precious Shona to be caged in vicious Sengupta den. As usual Sujoy is the darling. He tried his best to knock some sense. Sahil unknowingly played his part to let him know what was the extent of loss and agony his sacrifice would really mean. Ragini, out of jealousy pulled strings to tear the bond between two souls intertwined so much. Laksh made her realise if that bond is torn, both souls will bleed to death. I guess she'll try to help to mend the broken hearts.

I loved Sanskar's love letter. Who knew an ode to love written in the dreamy phase will give them wings of hope when They were drifting apart!

Well, I kind of feel your situation, huffing and puffing to juggle between two stories... Believe me I'm exactly in the similar shoes. Write action packed epi for one, next emotional updates (it's way more tough for me as I'm not half as good as you folks in any of those genres ,no natural talent or experience). So take your time for your as usual amazing heart touching update.

Love,
Dyuti

Edited by iamreader - 8 years ago

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Nishap499

@Nishap499

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#134

Untimely update is the best update!! It was such a wonderful feeling reading it. Now seriously waiting for the UNTAMED Sanskar. I can already imagine him beating the crap out of Sahil, claiming Swara as his most priced possession in front of all. The coming chapters are gonna be super entertaing!! Now we dont have to wait for the coming chapters for long. Update soon!!

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Rumadiv

@Rumadiv

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#135

Dear lucky,
Wow what a update. Wat a surprise din expect such a twist. Sanskar owing sekar for bringing him up. Sanskar din expert it to be giving his life tat is swara. Swara and sanskar are in helpless condition. But the twist came in letter. The letter which sanskar wrote was extraordinary which explains sanskars love for swara.

Here also sahil is of pshyco character. Adamant n dominated character. Waiting for the tine were sanskar will give him his place.Its different to see laksh in different perspective. So Ragini was the person who was watching swara and sanskar during the holi moment. It was her who had informed her father about swara and forced to arrange marriage with sahil.

Eagerly waiting for the context written in swaras letter which made sanskar to go to swara. Am happiee that all witnessed the scene. Ya swara had married sanskar but how is the question. Let's see surely sujoy and swara should have planned something . waiting for story to unfold soon. Please update asap.

With love,
Divya.

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#136

Unres for chapter 6 on the page 19

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: iamreader
Unres for chapter 6

Dear Lucky,

Dyuti🤗😳

Lately I've been reading your updates more than once. Today I got 5 mins late for my office, as I couldn't wait to read! 😊

😳😛 I am all aww😳 Thank you .Its good to know there are re readable😉

Last time I think I wrongly guessed the person as Shekhar. Now I think it's Parvati... or a result of Ragini's ploy.

Keep them coming .. Answers in next part all of them😉

Sahil was truly an unwanted element who only got entry just because Sanskar had left his position of a guard from Swara's life. He doesn't know by doing this he was letting his precious Shona to be caged in vicious Sengupta den. As usual Sujoy is the darling. He tried his best to knock some sense. Sahil unknowingly played his part to let him know what was the extent of loss and agony his sacrifice would really mean. Ragini, out of jealousy pulled strings to tear the bond between two souls intertwined so much. Laksh made her realise if that bond is torn, both souls will bleed to death. I guess she'll try to help to mend the broken hearts.

Gadodia's are not aware of vicious plans of Guptas, hence they reacted that way of being happy their daughter could get a good match .Sujoy is gonna continue to be a darlin till the end😳.its feels good to know when characters other than Swasan get noticed too

I loved Sanskar's love letter. Who knew an ode to love written in the dreamy phase will give them wings of hope when They were drifting apart!

All credit to Saku ,,Its her words which lifted that part a many levels up and @ bold you have put it beautifully ..yes that letter was key holder and one of game changers ..both of them infact

Well, I kind of feel your situation, huffing and puffing to juggle between two stories... Believe me I'm exactly in the similar shoes. Write action packed epi for one, next emotional updates (it's way more tough for me as I'm not half as good as you folks in any of those genres ,no natural talent or experience). So take your time for your as usual amazing heart touching update.

Give me a hi5 on that..Juggling is becoming tough ..hence had taken this call😊
@ bold .. Dont say that ..you write very well esp managing a thriller and action ff ..not my cup of tea and I know the ground work and research that goes into it ⭐️you are doing it so beautifully( ((Wish I could take some time out to read updates) 👏 and I am no good ..😆 and I know it ..you should read my early ones .. they are pathetic ..now its got a bit better and long way to go .
Love,
Dyuti

Dear Dyuti

Sorry for delay in revert .Replied above in colour .thanks for such a lovely comment like always

Love

'LuckY

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Anahita_Leve

@Anahita_Leve

Navigator

Posted: 8 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Dear Dyuti

Sorry for delay in revert .Replied above in colour .thanks for such a lovely comment like always

Love

'LuckY

Lucky,
I feel like shooting you! A BIT BETTER! I'm literally chasing the girls who by chance liked my story and were too nice with their words . I was like "Ok I'm floored! But just read Lucky's too if you haven't! I'm sure you'll love me more than you do now as I've recommended you that FF." Why are you hell bent on giving me inferiority complex? I love your so called "PATHETIC" stories too!

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#139

Lucky dear..unres for chapter 5 @ 15...

Coming to chapter 6...it was painfull...why swasan has to suffer...sanky do not have any family..it is not his fault...imnot sure if shomi or dadi forced him to forget swara...ofcourse ragini would be the only reason they got to know about swasan being in love...whole update was fantasticly penned...it made me hate sahil n his family...only hope was sujoy...but it seem he could not help either...i wish ragini must be that person who helped swasan...though whole barat witnessed them together...im scared what will happen now???the words in letter was heart warmingly beautiful...loved it yarr...

Muahhh for this update...

Love u loads

Talia