VENGEANCE IS THE NAME OF A FICKLE BUTTERFLY- SwaSan-3S/Ch1-Pg1\ 20 Dec

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting...

Thank u!😃

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Dear All,

Posted Character sketch below Prologue on PG1.

-Luv Niki

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Sushma Yadav

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Prolong and intro is amazing dear

I m not so expressive but I like your idea

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

I feel for Swara! Poor girl, always craved for love.. but all she has in future is betrayal.. that would shake her up to the core. Even after Sanskar repents,she would have hard time to keep faith in anyone, let alone Sanskar.

Nice Sketch.Waitin for next part.If possible pm me.

Dyuti

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Sushma98999
Prolong and intro is amazing dear
I m not so expressive but I like your idea

Thank u dear! Will put up the chapter 1 tomorrow, hope u will like it.😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: iamreader
I feel for Swara! Poor girl, always craved for love.. but all she has in future is betrayal.. that would shake her up to the core. Even after Sanskar repents,she would have hard time to keep faith in anyone, let alone Sanskar.

Nice Sketch.Waitin for next part.If possible pm me.

Dyuti

Thank Dyuti.

N Hmm true, Swara is gonna suffer but she will come out of it, she is a brave gal...😃

And yeah so sorry dear, wanted to PM the next day and was caught up in few things...😕 But will surely PM u wen I update nxt chapy, wch wilbe most probably 2mrw...😳

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting character sketch...

Thank u😃 Will updt 2mrw.

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: sneharay
Nice CS.. 👍🏼

Thank u dear. Wil updt 2mrw.😃

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Dearest Saku (can I call u that?😳),

This is the scariest review I have got till now!😆 N nw Im afraid to post the next chapter!😆Srsly gal, there is nothing more scary than u expecting this to be something really great! 😕 Lemme assure u before u plunge into disappointment that it is a very simple fic with some really basic story with nothing evn remotely to what u r expecting and evn further from ur std of writing! And trust me coz I'm saying this with utmost sincerity.😳

this is the second time I frightened someone with my dil ki baat 😆 let me assure you its very easy to impress me and your prologue already did that. I'm a die hard fan of anything in gray...and gray Sanskar is all you need to lure me in.

I'm running to read the CS will be back after that. And yeah, you can call me Saku.😃

Waiting for the next update.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#20

Okay...so the two people comes from two different universes. Can anything be more interesting? What's Sanskar's deal? What did Mr. SG do that marked him in Sanskar's list? I'm more interested in knowing this guy's past than his obvious , glorious present. And chairmen at 32? What happened to his dad?

Then Swara, waters are clearer there. The girl is in for a heartbreak but her persona is charming enough that she would in turn damage the heartbreaker's heart with her pain too.

So we'll be having angles falling for demon, agenda? Looking forward for Sanskar's journey from dark to light...just a guess.

For some reason the CS gave me strong vibes of the huntsman planning to kill Snow White ultimately to let her go. There is a very good quote for this, "I want to know everything about my enemy to destroy him, the moment I do that I no longer hate him, and the moment I love him...I destroy him."

Chilling but in a good way.

Waiting to read more.

Love,

Sakura

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