Swasan FF : Zephyr vs Tempest ( Chapter 30; P-71) - Page 12

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Hi dyuti..

Sorry for being so late.. Yet to read you last two updates.. It really not because of wanting but because I am currently working on mine.. I am like let finish it up first.. I appreciate your super fast updates.. When I am struggling to come up with one update for 3 weeks.. Will get back to your as soon as I post mine..

Love

Nita

I completely get you Nita dear! Well my writing is very simple and of elementary level, it can't be compared with the finer piece of works you present us! Quality definitely matters. Also you explored more, so dead end is inevitable.

I update from phone, type in Docs app whenever I get little time, then update it. That's why I never can't give a single pic, the format is crappy and ugly.

Wind up your work, then read when you can. Your opinion really matter a lot for me.

Love,
Dyuti

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Dear Dyuti,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">That was a short and charged chapter - the barriers between Swara and Sanskaar slowly dissipating, Sanskaar revealed to be the man behind the canine attacks and their identity no longer concealed from the Black Wolves.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Though the ending seems to be very different from what a first reading seems to give - Laksh said Betrayers - he could not mean Sanskaar and / or Swara - they never swore their loyalty to the Wolves nor was it expected - that means...Laksh shot someone else?????</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Best,</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Nyna</font>

Nyna dearie,

This chapter was supposed to clear some parts of the mist and create some new ones ... I'm pleased as I suceeded in some extent it seems... Sorry for the sake of the suspense I can't clear your doubts about Laksh... Laksh, though mentioned less, has a poignant part in the tale. Least I can tell, he wouldn't behave as he's supposed to.

Thanks for the analysis. I really look forward to Nita and your detailed review.

Loads of love,
Dyuti

Oh god, they got caught up..

Plz save them

Thanks

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Oh god, they got caught up..

Plz save them

Thanks

Watch out for the next chapter, Veena! I already wrote a para! 😊

Dyuti

Originally posted by: iamreader

I completely get you Nita dear! Well my writing is very simple and of elementary level, it can't be compared with the finer piece of works you present us! Quality definitely matters. Also you explored more, so dead end is inevitable.

I update from phone, type in Docs app whenever I get little time, then update it. That's why I never can't give a single pic, the format is crappy and ugly.

Wind up your work, then read when you can. Your opinion really matter a lot for me.

Love,
Dyuti

hi Dyuti,😊
u have a nice name dear.if you dont mind plz tell me the meaning of ur name
Sorry for the late comment.i read all the 10 chapters together and i loved it👏
i always like thriller/suspense stories and urs is an amazing story.i loved how swara was angry at sanskar😆😆
waiting eagerly for the next update.

Originally posted by: bhymi

hi Dyuti,😊
u have a nice name dear.if you dont mind plz tell me the meaning of ur name
Sorry for the late comment.i read all the 10 chapters together and i loved it👏
i always like thriller/suspense stories and urs is an amazing story.i loved how swara was angry at sanskar😆😆
waiting eagerly for the next update.

Hi bhymi ( is that your name? if not ,let me know)

My name is a Bengali word, means 'ray of light'. I'm really happy to get a new reader. So welcome dear! I'll give regular updates at least for 15 days more, before my exam pressure gets me.

It really means a lot, when someone new join the discussion.


😊


Love,
Dyuti

Dyuti dear...

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Dyuti dear...

Marvellous update...got scared in end...i was wondering someone else is helping swasan...maybe lakshya..im not sure...or ragini...excited for next..sorry im late..i thought i commented already...

Talia

So sorry Talia dear! had to take a class and proof read my mom's lecture presentation. so got a bit caught up. I hope you'll get few answers in the upcoming chapter. will start working on it.

Dyuti

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Oh please..Dont understimate yourself. I love your works.. . And more importantly dont over praise me😆... I dont think i am that good as you making it out to be😳... And yes i agree that i jumped to this FF with too many concepts ...And so i am like when to reveal which that what consists of my dilemma

Update from phone😲.. I cant do that..Nope no way .. I cant type for more than one sentence in phone.. And so typing it from mobile in next to impossible for me.. And you doing it from phone is really commendable dyuti dear..👏

Finished posting the update.. And will read yours asap..

Love

Nita

Hey,
BTM is awesome! It's so intriguing and complex, that your 3 week gap made read some of past chapters as I forgOT some details! Ghajini me!
And in my case, it's my first English writing, first novel, so obviously first of any genre. All I ever wrote were few romantic Bengali poems during early medical college years. Hindi not being my language, Writing Hindi dialogues is another first. My estimation is pretty clear, I couldn't possibly do better than I'm doing now. 😊 so pretty pleased with myself till now.