SWASAN FF: TU HI MERE DIL KI AARZOO part 1 updated pg 1

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canvasrocks786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi,

This is Eba

Its a new story based on the current track with an absolutely new storyline. i dont like this unnessesary destruction of swara's character that they have done in serial. for me once swara was a very strong character and i want to see her the same.

some new characters are also there in my ff other than the rest of maheshwari and bose-gadodia family and swasan are also not what they look like. There are many hidden truths about them as well.

PROLOUGE:

Sanskar- I hate you swara. How could you do this to me. I have always loved you but for you it was never love but just your convinience and your wishes

Swara-Go away sanskar . I don't want to talk to you .

how can you say that sanskar that you hate your princess. cant you even read my eyes now. please believe me,your pricess loves you and trust you. I know its not completely yours mistake but i am helpless.I love you a lot sanskar.

Edited by canvasrocks786 - 8 years ago

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canvasrocks786

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Posted: 8 years ago

hi, I am not new to this forum but always have been a silent reader this time I really wanted to post something Becky this track is extreemly frustrating. hope you all like it. please comment. 😃 as your comments are my biggest inspiration.

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canvasrocks786

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: elsanna
Nice prologue... continue soon
Tani

thanks tani😃

I will post ASAP

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Posted: 8 years ago

Part 1

(In my story there is a leap of 3 months as I don't want to extend the timeline.) (I am not very good at english so I'll be using hindi dialouges as well.)

Story starts after the scene of swasan 1st conversation on phone post leap

After keeping the phone swara turned...

Swara- ma. Aap yahan kya kar rahi ho. Itni raat ho gayi hai abhi tak soye nahih aap.

Shomi- kaise so jaaon swara tumhari harkaton ne to waise bhi raaton ki neend cheen li hai.

Swara- (Avoiding eye contact) Ma aap yeh sab kya keh rahi ho. Bahut raat ho gayi hai maa. So jayiye.Good night.

Shomi- Tu yeh sab kyun kar rahi hai swara

Swara- Kya kar rahi hoon main maa

Shomi-Yahi sab. Tu bhi jaanti hai jo kuch bhi hua hai usmein saari galti sanskar ki nahin hai.Phir bhi to sirf use saza kyun de rahi hai. Yeh jaante hue bhi ki who bechara pehle se hi itna duki tha tune uska aur dil dukhaya aur aaj bhi tu usse sidhe munh baat tak nahin karti. Usse maafi maangne ke bajaye tu usi ko suna rahi hai.

Swara- Sidhe munh unse baat ki jaati hai jo hosh mein hoon. Nashe mein dhut hai. Usse kya baat karoon mein aur rahi baat maafi maangne ki to mujhe nahin lagta ki maine kuch bhi galat kiya hai.

Shomi- Swara tu..

Swara- ma please ,please aur nahin.

Shomi turned to leave then,,,

Swara- Ma, pichle teen mahino se aapne mujhse thik se baat tak nahin kari aur yeh swara kya hai ma mein to aapki shona thi na.

Shomi- Shonaa (laughs painfully). Yeh naam meri us beti ka tha jis par aur jiske faislon par mujhe garv hua karta tha. Aap ka is naam se koi lena dena nahin hai MISS SWARA GADODIA. Kya hua yahi hai na tumhari nayi pehchan aur haan ek baat ko hamesha yaad rakhna, Yeh jo kuch bhi tumne kiya hai na uska anjaam bahut bura hoga. Pachtaaogi tum swara pachtaogi.

Goes from there.

Swara-(teary eyes) Good night ma.

Back in her room swara is all alone and is sitting on floor burying her head in between her legs and crying hardly.

(Swara pov)

Ma kam se kam aap to samjho, kam se kam aap to mujhpe bharosa karo mein majboor hoon maa, mere paas aur koi rasta nahin hai. Agar maine yeh nahin kiya to sab barbaad ho jayega sab khatam ho jayega aur wo main kisi kimat par nahin hone dungi. Phir chahe mujhe uski koi bhi kimat kyun na chukani pade.

(To sanskar's pic) Dekho sanskar tumhari princess aaj kitni akeli ho gayi hai, tumne to hamesha mere saath rehne ka wada kiya tha na phir aaj kyun nahin aate. Kya aaj tumhara gussa tumhari swara ke aansoun se bhi badhkar ho gaya hai. Nahin reh sakti main tumhare bina. Please aa jao na sanskar please...

(Pov ends)

In mm,

Sanskar wakes up from sleep -SWARAAA...and starts sobbing.

At an unknown place,

An Unknown person is sitting infront of a screen and he/she can watch each and every happening of gadodia house and mm

(Laughs evilly)

Aur ro Mrs.Swara Sanskar Maheshwari aur tum bhi Sanskar Maheshwari. Tum dono ke aansuon se mujhe kitna sukoon milta hai yeh main tumhein bata nahin sakta. Bahut garv se kaha tha na tumne swara ki tumhein aur tumhare sanskar ko koi alag nahin kar sakta. Dekho swara Maheshwari aaj kis tarah maine tumhare ideal couple wale rishte ka naamo nishan tak mita diya hai. Bas kuch din aur phir mera badla poora.ha ha ha

Scene ends on swara sanskar crying face and the unknown person evil laugh

So how is it. Please comment.