SwaSan OS:::Iss Dard E Dil Ki Sifarish

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Location::Award Ceremony For Best Businessman
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In The Award Function Mr & Mrs Sanskaar Maheshwari Enters By Holding Each Others Hands And Smiling Faces, Sanskaar Like A True Gentlemen Helps Swara To Sit Down In The Table Reserved For Them.While Sitting Down Swara Was Just Kept On Looking At Sanskaar And Was Thinking Something In Her Mind.
Sanskaar Wins The Best Businessman Award Of The Year And Goes To Receive The Award On Stage,For His Success He Gave All Credit To Swara His Wife And Love Of His Life. Swara Smiles For A Minute After Hearing Compliments For Her From Him But Than Suddenly Smile Of Her Face Starts To Fade Away, Swara Starts To Feel Suffocated Amongst All The People In Hall.While Sanskaar Was Continuing Giving His Speech,Swara Left The Hall All Alone And Went To The Terrance Of That Hall To Get Some Fresh Air.
Location Swara In Terrance:::
Swara All Alone In Terrance Lost In Her Own World Remembering 9Years Back How Both Swara And Sanskaar Fell In Love With Each Other,They Both Helped Each Other In Completing Their Educations.But When It Was Time To Get Married Swara's Dad Shekhar
Was Not Happy With SwaSan's Marriage As Sanskaar Belonged To A Poor Family Were His Mother Died When He Was Kid Due To Lack Of Money And Proper Treatment.
Swara Was A Pampered Princess Who Was Her Fathers Only Child. Sanskaar Promised Shekhar To Trust Him That He Will Work Day And Night Just To Give Swara All Luxury That She Has Now,Shekhar Notices Honesty In Sanskaar's Eyes And Agrees For Giving Swara's Hand In Sanskaar's Hand,Atlast Finally Both Happily Got Married.
In Initial Years When Sanskaar Was Struggling For Setting His Business That Time Was Golden Time Of Their Marriage According To Swara. In Those Days They Both Used To Spend Almost All Times Together,Used To Talk So Much With Each Other And The Care For Each Other That Even If Swara Gets A Scratch Sanskaar Becomes Restless And Same Vice Versa.Time Flied In Speed, 9 Long Years Passed Since Swara And Sanskaar Got Married.
Although The Love Between Them Is Still Intact But It's Lost Somewhere In This World Of Competition To Get Success In Life,& Also For Fulfilling Promise Given To Shekhar Of Providing Swara All The Comfort And Luxury In Life.
Sanskaar Became So Busy In Business And Conferences That He Didn't Even Get Time To Spend 1Hour With Swara Now A Days.Swara's Flashback Breaks, Swara Cries Like A Helpless Person And Breaks Down. She Says To Herself That Sanskaar I Know You Love Me So Much That Just To Give Me All Happiness Of This World You Are Working Hard Day And Night. But My Happiness Lies With You,Your Presence In My Life,Your Love And Care For Me Is Enough For My Happiness I Don't Need Any Luxury In My Life.Swara Sweeps Off Her Own Tears And Checks Her Mobile Which Shows Time 1 Minute Left To Hit 12.00 A.M And Says To Herself Happy Birthday Swara And Gives A Painful Smile And Says Today On My Birthday I Wanted To Give You The Good News Of Your Life Which I Am Sure Will Be Precious To You Too And You Will Be Overwhelmed To Here This Good News That After 9 Years Finally We Are Soon Going To Be Blessed With A Baby, Swara Is Pregnant.
Suddenly Swara Sees One Shooting Star Falling From Sky,She Smiles And Quickly Ask For A Wish She Says "Dear God I Miss The Old Care And Love From Sanskaar, How He Used To Spend His Whole Days With Me Just To Bring A Smile In My Face,Now-A-Days He Is Too Busy With Work And Business Please Do Some Miracle That Tomorrow Sanskaar Spends His Whole Day With Me And I Get The Opportunity To Share The Good News With Him,This Thought Makes Swara So Happy In Excitement She Accidentally Says If This Happens Than She Will Even Happily Be Ready To Die.Unknown To Swara Her Wish Gets Accepted By God.Swara Happily Returns To Hall And Joins Sanskaar In Function.Sanskaar Comes Near Her Hugs Her And Wishes Her Happy Birthday Swara.
Swara Becomes Too Happy With This Gesture But While Returning Back To Home Sanskaar Receives A Call That There Is An Important Conference In Sri Lanka And He Needs To Attend It And Catch Flight In Morning 6.00A.M.
Sanskaar Becomes Very Upset After Hearing This News But He Is Bounded To Attend It As It's Related To The Tender Of His Dream Project Which He Wants To Open On Swara's Name And Give It As A Gift To Her On Her Birthday,Unwillingly Sanskaar Agrees To Attend The Conference And Also Informs Swara About It.
Both SwaSan Sad Want To Spend Time With Each Other.SwaSan Reaches Maheshwari Mansion And Swara Is Not Talking To Sanskaar She Is Extremely Upset And Quickly Changes Her Cloths And Goes To Sleep.Sanskaar Notices It.Sanskaar Becomes Restless And Couldn't Sleep In Peace,He Decides To Go To His Study Room.
Location:::Sanskaar In Study Room
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Sanskaar Is Upset Thinking Why Always He Tries To Bring The Best Thing Of This World For Swara But Never Saw That Happiness In Her Eyes Which He Used To See When They Were Not This Much Rich And In Swara's Birthday He Gifted Her Only Few Roses But Even Those Roses Used To Brought So Much Brightness In Her Eyes Full Of Happiness,Which Is Missing Now-A-Days When Sanskaar Can Effort To Buy Multiple Flower Shop For Swara.
Sanskaar Thinks Something Went Missing In All These Years Of Their Marriage. Thoughtful And Upset Sanskaar Opens A Locked Drawer. Sanskaar Sees A Old Photo Album Diary,He Takes That In His Hand,And Cleans The Dust On The Cover Of That Album.Sanskaar Also Takes A Beautiful Box From Drawer Which Was Swara's 1st Gift To Him On Their 1st Wedding Anniversary.Sanskaar Sits On Chair And Opens The Photo Album Diary Which Swara Used To Write And Used To Stick Pictures Also Related To That Particular Event And Moments Which She Had Spend With Sanskaar.Swara Has Written About All Beautiful Memories From Their First Meet,How They Became Friends Gradually,How They Fell In Love With Each Other,1st Date Which Sanskaar Planned For Swara It Was Very Special For Swara How Both Sat Beside Seashore And Swara Rested Her Head On Sanskaar's Shoulder And Both Were Holding Each Others Hand And Watched Sunset Together.On Swara's Birthday,Sanskaar Had No Money To Buy Anything For Swara,So To Give Swara Something From His Side On Her Birthday Sanskaar Did Overtime & Part Time Jobs,Than Only He Manages To Give Her A Pair Of Payal.Swara Had Written In Her Album Diary That Those Silver Payal's Are Very Precious To Her,Later Sanskaar Many Times Gifted Her Many Expensive Gifts On Her Birthdays But This Payal's Are Inseparable From Swara Cause This Were The First Gift Of Sanskaar That He Gifted Her,That's Why On Every Birthday Swara Wears Those Payal's.
Sanskar Had Tears In His Eyes While Reading All This Than He Opened That Box Which Has Many CD's Of Swara's Voice Messages.Sanskaar Finds A New CD Amongst Old CD's, Sanskaar Plays That CD And Swara Says About Her Feelings,How Much She Missing Sanskaar,His Lots Of Time For Her And With Her Only,How Much She Misses Their Long Chit-Chats,How Much She Miss Sharing Each &Everything Good&Bad Happenings With Her Daily With Him,How Much She Miss Her First Friend Of Life That Is Sanskaar,How Much She Miss Their Holiday Trips Far Away From All Peoples,Finally Swara Says I Miss You Sanskaar I Miss Your Presence In My Life Like Before.
Sanskaar All Teary Eyed Runs From Study Room Towards SwaSan's Bed Room, He Enters Room While Running And Sees Swara Is Sleeping Like A Doll, Sanskaar Just Kept On Staring Swara As If He Is Seeing Her After A Long Long Time.
Sanskaar Like Little Kid Just Hugged Swara And Started Crying.Swara Slowly Wakes Up And Finds Herself In Sanskaar's Arm,Notices He Is Crying Like A Small Baby,Swara Sweeps Sanskaar's Tears And Says What Happened Sanskaar Why You Are Crying?Sanskaar Puts His Fingers On Swara's Lips & Says Sorry Swara Please Forgive Me While Crying Sanskaar Falls From Bed,Swara Shouts In Fear.Sanskaar Says Don't Panic Swara I Am Fine,Sanskaar While Crying Rests His Head On Swara's Lap And Says I Did So Much Mistakes And Wasted So Many Beautiful Years Of Our Life In Hurry Of Earning Money&Gaining Success For Your Happiness&Comfort I Had Forgotten That Our Happiness Is Hidden In Each Other's Presence,Love,Care&Feelings.Swara Also Starts Crying After Seeing Sanskaar Cry&Caresses His Face With Her Both Hand Makes Him Get Up From Floor,Swara Also Gets Up From Bed.Both SwaSan Hugs Eachother So Intensely As If They Are Meeting With Each Other After A Long Long Time.
Sanskaar Says To Swara He Has Cancelled All His Meetings For Tomorrow As Want To Spend His Whole Day With The Birthday Girl,Swara Smiles With Boundless Happiness.While Breaking The Hug As Were Moving Away From Each Other Swara's Mangalsutra Gets Stuck In Sanskaar's Shirt,While Trying To Pull It Out Accidentally Mangalsutra's One String Gets Little Bit Damaged.
Sanskaar Assures Swara Not To Get Panic He Will Get A New One Tomorrow And Will Tie It Around Her Neck With His Hands,Swara Says Okay But I Am Keeping This Old One With Me, Sanskaar Says No Problem Keep It With You. Swara Picks That Broken Mangalsutra &Keeps It Safe On Her Hand Bag While Thinking Something.
Both SwaSan Sleeping Holding Each Other Tightly. Swara Is Sleeping While Resting Her Head On Sanskaar's Chest,But Something Is Still Making Sanskaar Restless,He Tightly Holds Swara's Hands&Tries To Ensure Himself That Nothing To Fear Everything Will Be Fine.
Sanskaar Thinks To Gift Swara The Best Day Of Her Life Tomorrow On Her Birthday And Goes To Sleep,On The Other Hand Swara Who Is Still Awake Says To Herself Tomorrow I Will Share The Good News Of Our Babies Arrival With You Sanskaar And My Birthday Will Become The Most Memorable Day Of Your Life,I Want To See Your Reaction When You Will Here That "Tum Papa Banne Waale Ho". Swara Smiles & Goes To Sleep
Morning Arrives::::::
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Swara Is Sleeping But Felt Somethings Are Falling On Her, Suddenly She Opens Her Eyes&See's Rose Petal's Are Falling On Her. Swara Tries To Get Up From Bed And Notices Sanskaar Who Is Standing Beside The Bed With All Smiling Face And Throwing Rose Petal's On Her. Sanskaar Stops Swara From Putting Down Her Feet On Floor He Gently Keep's His Hand On Floor. Sanskaar Smiles And Says I Will Try To Make Today's Every Minute Special For You Swara, Then Puts Flower Petal's On Floor Than Tells Swara Now You Can Walk On This Floor.
Sanskaar Gifts Swara A Beautiful White&Red Colored Bengali Style Saree And Asks Swara To Get Ready As Today He Is Taking Her Out For A Surprise. Sanskaar Is Waiting For Swara While Sitting In Hall&Hears Sound Of Her Payal. Swara Slowly Coming Downstairs,She Is Wearing That White&Red Saree, Mesmerized Sanskaar Says So Here Comes Angel Of My Life And Extends His Hand Towards Swara. Swara Also Smiles &Holds Sanskaar's Hand.

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Sanskaar Takes Swara To That Beach Were They Went For Their 1st Date, This Time Sanskaar Decorated Whole Area With Swara's Favourite Flowers.
SwaSan Spend Whole Day On That Beach . Suddenly Swara Despair's From There,Panicked Sanskaar Searches For Her,He Shouts Her Name . Sanskaar Than Hears Tune Of Violin,And Sees Swara Sitting On A Chair Playing Violin.
Swara Starts Singing:::Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Main jeeti hoon mere paas
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Mera hasna pagal jaisa
Mera rona badal jaisa
Sab lagta hain mujhe khaas
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Rehte ho honthon pe, zikr ban ke
Dil mein ho tum hi, fikr ban ke
Tumse hi toh mila pyaar saara
Kya mujhme hai mera, sab tumhara
Mera hasna pagal jaisa
Mera rona badal jaisa
Sab lagta hain mujhe khaas
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho
Aati hai saans mein saans
Jab tum hote ho
Jab tum hote ho

Sanskaar Smiles,Goes Near Swara And Records This Moment Of Swara Singing For Him In His Phone, Than Both Of Them Dance On Waltz Dance Form. While Dancing Swara Rests Her Head On Sanskaar's Shoulder. Same As Their 1st Date Both Of Them Sat Beside Sea Shore And Watch Sunset Together. While Going Back Towards Car Both Of Them Receives Call In Their Respective Phones. Sanskaar Talks To Jeweller Says I Am Waiting Were Is That Parcel,Suddenly A Boy Tabs On His Shoulder &Handed Over That Box To Sanskaar. Sanskaar Opens That Box, Takes Out Replica Of Swara's Old Mangalsutra, He Smiles Says To Himself Swara I Will Fulfil My Promise,I Will Tie This Mangalsutra On Your Neck.
On Other Hand Swara Had Forgotten To Bring Her Pregnancy Report With Her, But She Asked Caretaker Nancy To Bring That Report And The Phone Call On Swara's Phone Was From Nancy. Nancy Says To Swara She Has Reached But Is Hiding On Other Side Of The Highway As If Sanskaar Sees Her Swara's Surprise Will Get Spoiled,That's Why She Is Hiding. Swara Says To Nancy You Stay There I Am Coming There To Collect The Reports.
Before Sanskaar Comes Back Swara Quickly Crosses Road To Collect Report.
Sanskaar Is Happily Coming Towards His Car With Gift Box,But He Sees Swara Standing On The Other Side Of Highway With An White Envelope In Her Hand.
Swara Signs Sanskaar To Stay There She Is Coming By Crossing Road And Before Sanskaar Could Even Answer Yes Or No Swara In Excitement Starts Walking For Crossing Road. Swara Was Continuously Looking At Sanskaar And Thinking What Will Be His Reaction When He Will See Her Gift. Suddenly One Truck Comes And Hits Swara,
Sanskaar Shocked With Shaking Body Runs Towards Swara, Swara Was Still Smiling And Still Holding That Report Tightly, Sanskaar Comes To That Place Were Swara Is Lying Almost Lifeless, But Trying To Show Sanskaar That Envelope, Just Before Dying Swara Holds Sanskaar's Hand And Says I Love You Sanskaar.While Sanskaar Tries To Hold Swara's Hand It Falls On The Road Lifeless.

Ten Years Later A Man In Simple Dhooti Kurta Giving Water To Plants In Garden Were Lots Of Small Kids Are Playing. That Man Is Sanskaar After Swara's Death He Dedicated His Life To Social Work And Swara's Memories.
Sanskaar Transfered His Property In Name Of "Dream Of Swara" Orphanage Trust. Sanskaar Is Now Staying In That Orphanage With Kids.Suddenly All Kids Runs Towards Sanskaar And Hugs Him, He Smiles Watching Them.

Location::::::Sanskaar's Room's Balcony
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Sanskaar Is Sitting In A Chair And Rain Drops Falls On His Face. Sanskaar Feels Someone Touched His Hand And Sees Its Swara In White&Red Saree, While Sanskaar Is Still Sitting On Chair But Imagining Himself Dancing With Swara In Rain.
Sanskaar Smiles And Says To Himself That I Know God Has Snatched You From Me But You Are Still Alive And Will Be Always Alive In Me, In My Heart, In My Soul. I Love You Swara, While Saying This Tear Drops Falls From Sanskaar's Eyes And He Gives A Pain Full Smile While Looking Towards The Sky.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very well written fari 👏 and this is so painfully beautiful as i had tears in my eyes while reading 😭 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dude, what is wrong with you folks today!! All SwaSan OSs are related to death!
I am NOT commenting now Fari!😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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What is this yaar
Why everyone writing stories where either swasa is dieing or sanskar is dieing😭
Plz don't
Write some intense romantic happy stories😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Trisha_magnet

What is this yaar

Why everyone writing stories where either swasa is dieing or sanskar is dieing😭
Plz don't
Write some intense romantic happy stories😭


I know right!!
I am not able to study, because I end up crying!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully written...a heartwrenching os...😭
But i know its not necessary dat evry story has happy ending.
U r awesm writer...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome.. beautifully written..
all stories are not have happy ending.. some have painful ending also...
loved the concept and all
after reading this i end with 😭
nicely written👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ..
That was so much painful OS .. I am crying 😭
Beautifully written one ..very emotional

Thank you ..

Khushi
Edited by StarySKY - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fariii..dear...
Amazing job...since 2 days im crying...in one story sansku died n gave his heart away n now in your swara.died...oh..sniff.sniff..why ???crying..

But it was different..n i enjoyed reading it...cried alot too...but nicely written...made me emotional..thanks...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Very very emotional story...

Thank You😳

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