~SwaSan Story ~ A Bound Relation ~ Updated Epilogue - 10/04~ - Page 27

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Posted: 8 years ago
Indeed a great update dear..love ur ff so much!! Everything is so well discribed..yayay finally swasan r now in a single room..will love to see their nok-jhok & close encounter..do update soon..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great update...loved the cliff hanger at the end...
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey shreetha when are you going to update?
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Everyone.. I know I am late but what to do the news of SR going off air depressed me a lot and I am sick. Please forgive me. I don't know if anyone still interested to read this story. Please let me know if I should continue or not. So here is the next part. Hope you like it.



Chapter 12:


Sanskaar awoke by the sound of his alarm clock and to the sight of seeing the left side of the bed empty, where Swara had fallen asleep on last night. Without speaking another word to each other, both had gone to their own sides of the bed and silently laid down, making sure to build enough space between them. Except that hadn't worked all too great later on into the night when both had unknowingly gotten closer, only a couple of inches away from another. Swara's hair repeatedly falling onto or getting into Sanskaar's face irritated him throughout the night and caused him to switch around plenty of times and also create space back in between.


He tiredly runs a hand through his hair, ruffling it up, and then slides his hand down to the back of his neck, rubbing it. Not bothering to wonder where his wife could possibly be, Sanskaar throws the comforter off of him and gets up from bed. He tugs on his shirt, adjusting it. Sleeping with his shirt on, especially when it was so hot, was extremely uncomfortable for Sanskaar, who due to his anger and because of his wife didn't changed into his night wear. He would definitely find it hard to adjust to this new change.



Sanskaar walks on over towards the bathroom, wanting to quickly get ready and go off to the office, where he was sure a mountain of work was awaiting for him. Just as he approaches the bathroom, it's door flies open and he is momentarily taken aback by Swara's sudden appearance before him. She is wearing a dark blue saree with fine silver works and embroidery, her sindoor and mangulsutra in tact, and wearing only a pair of earrings and her wedding bangles. She also bares a look of slight shock on seeing him in front of her.


Both, silently, move to the left, thinking of passing one another, but only end up getting in each other's way. On instinct, they both move automatically to the right, again blocking one another. They do this once more, moving to the left, both equally getting flustered and Sanskaar a bit more annoyed. He stops her by raising a hand and then moving himself aside, giving her a passage way of getting through. Swara flashes him a thankful look and walks past him. Sanskaar, ignoring her, goes into the bathroom and slams the door behind him. Swara shakes, a tad startled by the unexpected action of his.


Swara quickly mutters a prayer to herself, feeling frightened, for she did not know how she will be able to survive living with the very man who is set out to ruin her life...

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Swara, like usual, helps Shambu set the table, and greets everyone at the table. Laksh smiles sweetly at her like he always does every morning. Dadi gives her blessings as does Sujatha. Uttara hugs her sister before sitting down in her seat. Samar and Neetha secretly smile at her when Ragini isn't looking. Ragini gives her the regular glare she always flashes at her at Breakfast. Swara, as usual, ignores it. As Swara finally takes her seat, Sujatha notices the head chair empty, which belongs to Sanskaar.


Sujatha: Arre, where is Sanskaar?---Swara?

Swara: Ji, woh---- Mr. Maheshwari---

Swara stops midway in her sentence as she sees Sujatha give her a look. Realizing the meaning for it, she corrects herself hesitantly.

Swara: He must be still getting ready, Maa. (quietly)

Sujatha smiles as she sees Swara finally starting to avoid calling her Sanskaar Mr. Maheshwari.

Laksh: No, he had left quiet awhile ago. Just before Breakfast started.


Both Sujatha and Swara look at Laksh across from the table, who chews his toast carelessly. Swara didn't see nor hear him leave for the office, and she was awake before him.


Sujatha: How could he just leave without informing anyone?

Laksh: Something's come up so he had to go to the office early. Don't worry, he said he'll have something to eat.


That was what he always said, but Swara knew that he never did. He is always so busy and caught up with work that he always forgets to stop and just eat. She begins to worry.


Sujatha: Laksh, make sure that he does, alright? I know that boy, he always forgets.

Laksh: (reassuring smile) I will, Maa...I should be going on myself. I will see you all in the evening.

Grabbing his bag and coat, Laksh gives his farewells and smiles an encouraging smile over to Swara, who smiles pleasantly back at him.

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Sanskaar sits down in his chair, tiredly, and sighs outwardly to himself. He leans his elbow onto his desk and rests his forehead into the palm of his hand. He hears his stomach growl and realizes how hungry he is. He should have grabbed something to eat on the way out to the office. Hearing his cabin door open, Sanskaar looks up to see his P.A. walk towards him with a polite smile on her lips and holds a small tiffin in her hands.


Sanskaar: Anisha, what's this?


Anisha: Sir, this is for you. It's brunch since you skipped breakfast.


Sanskaar: (eyeing it) Where did it come from?


Anisha: Your Mother had sent it, Sir.

Sanskaar, feeling pleased and grateful towards his Maa, smiles a light smile and indicates for her to place it on his desk.

Sanskaar: Thanks. Now go on and get me the shares for the Goa project.


Anisha: Yes, Sir.

She leaves and shuts the door behind her. Sanskaar, not wasting another second, opens the tiffin and digs into the delicious food. Repeatedly he thanks his Maa as he eats...

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Swara: Have you given it to him?


She speaks quietly into the phone and looks around the living room, making sure if anyone is around. "Yes, Ma'am, I have", Anisha replies back. Swara sighs and holds the phone closer to her.


Swara: Anisha, please don't call me Ma'am. I was your friend before I got married to Mr. Maheshwari and I still am.


Anisha:... You're right. I'm sorry Swara, for being so formal. It's just that you're Mr. Maheshwari's wife now...so...


Swara: Yeah, I can understand...How's the office?


Anisha: The office is busy and hectic like always...and terribly boring without you. I wish you could come back.


Swara: You know Maa isn't feeling well...I can't come back.


And with the new project of building the new Casino on top of her home was a huge factor from preventing Swara ever coming back to the office again. But of course Swara wasn't going to tell her that. Anisha's a nice woman and friend, but definitely not a person who Swara can tell her problems to.


Swara:...Um, did you tell Mr. Maheshwari that Maa had made the food?


Anisha: Yes, I did...which I don't quite understand why...How come you are giving his mother the credit for something you made?


Swara: No reason.

Anisha: Surely there has to be, otherwise you wouldn't tell me to say it was hiis mother who cooked the food.


Swara:...Anisha, I-I have to go, Maa has called for me. I'll just leave you to go back to your work. It was nice talking to you again.


Anisha: Swara--


Swara: Bye.

Anisha shakes her head as she hears the line disconnect and places her desk phone back onto it's receiver. She pulls a red file from out of the cabinet file and gets out of her seat, going back over to her boss's cabin...


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After awhile, hearing raised voices, curiously Swara and Uttara come out of the guest room and walk out towards the living room where the commotion is occurring. Usually whenever they have time, the two sisters go into the guest room and try to spend time with one another.


They see each and everyone, minus Laksh who stands away from everyone with his arms crossed, hug and congratulate Sanskaar, who smiles broadly at everyone. Finally Sujatha takes his face into her palms and she kisses him affectionately on his forehead.

Sujatha: May your success continue on, Sanskaar...


Sanskaar: Thank you, Maa.


Ragini, the only one who notices Swara and Uttara's presence, smirks and says in a teasing voice, "Oh, Bhabhi! Uttara! Wouldn't you two like to hear the good news that Bhaiya has to share?" Sanskaar turns around on this and stares at Swara with mischief looking eyes. Swara sees a small box containing sweets in his hands. She and Uttara stare at everyone, confused.


Swara: (innocently) What news?


Ragini: The project that involves----


Sanskaar: (intervenes) Ragini, if you don't mind, I would personally like to tell my wife.


Ragini hushes up, but continues to smirk to herself. Sanskaar walks towards both Uttara and Swara, wearing a devilish smile on his lips and his eyes gleaming dangerously at them. Swara becomes to grow apprehensive by this and looks past him over at Laksh, who wears a sympathetic look on his face. As Sanskaar approaches he looks at her intensely. Swara stares at him, worried, confused, and slightly frightened. She and Uttara both exchange quick looks.


Sanskaar:...You will be happy to know that I have managed to buy the land in Kolkatta and will soon construct a Casino there, which I am sure will be very profitable towards the company.


Everything inside of Swara seems to freeze and not function anymore. The color from Swara's face drains away and she stares at him with awe. Tears begin to sparkle in her eyes. Uttara throws her sister a puzzled look. But Swara keeps her eyes focused on her husband who continues to smirk down at her. He opens the box of sweets and pulls out a ladoo. Bringing the sweet towards her mouth, Sanskaar says in a biting tone, "Have a sweet for the joyous occasion, Darling."


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Thank you,
Shreetha..



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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Shreetha,
Firstly, please do not stop writing - the show going off air is depressing, but to think of it, the serial did start sinking a long time ago, maybe we should send it off.

Secondly, our OTP lives in this forum in your and others writings, so please do not stop, you will contribute to SwaSan no longer being alive - they are in our stories, hearts and memories.

Now to update - lovely as usual, though the ending, given the cliff hanger gives me a small hope, that the land for the casino is not Swara's home or even if it is, somehow Sanskaar would not build the casino there.

Do update soon. And take care of your health.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi shreetha,
Get well soon dear, don't even think to discontinue this story.i love it so much. I keep on waiting for ur updates. Well now a days checking the forum again n again for ur updates only.

Coming to the update.
Liked it a lot as usual fantastic and interguing.
The way u write is so beautiful. I just lose myself for 5-7 minutes in ur story. I always need time to recollect myself from ur updates. I just love ur work. Do continue writing pls.

Loads of love
Harshita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey shree...
Dont even try to be depressed...every good things end..i want my last days in forum reading good work...i know it sadning but now we cant stop it...but can be happy..i want swaragini to have an awesome farewell...will miss u guys...it has become my second home...

Coming to update as usual its amaziing...but i want u to speed up story..as show is ending..forum too...want now sanky to realize how wrong he is...i want swara to be fearless...n swasan together...even want ragini's change of heart...n anything u provide..you are goid writer..update soon..

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update and please do continue with the story...
As you and all other have put swasan live not only on screen but in our hearts...

Loved the update and the cliff hanger even more..

Update soon and take care of yourself...

Raz
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Posted: 8 years ago
At this moment I want to slap sanskaar
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey guys.. I am back..
Thank you so much for your warm wishes. I am still not well but feeling much better after reading all your comments. Thank you once again.
And I am sorry as I am not giving reply individually. I cant sit in front of PC and cant type from my mobile. I hope you all understand.

Love,
Shreetha..

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