ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ - Page 55

Originally posted by: dilwali

First of all welcome back my dear n loads of love to u

Its always a pleasure to read what u write n u dont know it was very hard to wait for update but I did nt want to pressurise you in any way n had full trust u will write again n thanks a lot for this

About chap 7
It was entirely about emotions of Sanskar. What kind of turmoil he is facing right now n how helpless he feels I was feeling so sad for him but he is a brave person he will fight all odds n save his bro n Swara too n this poor girl how much she will suffer n now she does nt remember anything poor soul n what do I say about Shekhar he is heartless really. I am anxious now what will Sanskar do ? will he go ahead with swap.plan to save Laksh or agree to Shekhar abt the contract n what will he do with Swara n how her identity will be revealed to him. Its very interesting now n I will desperately wait for next updates
Take care n do write next updates acc to ur comfort
loads of luv n Gbu n TC

Originally posted by: Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Res 🤗🤗

Lovely read Shru. Read through it first thing in the morning...what a lovely start to Sunday.

Will be back for a proper un res soonest I can Shru. Probably tomorrow. But in meantime...it was electrifying. 😊 As intense and forceful as your writing always is. Hasn't lost a jot owing the hiatus at all, you need to have no worries on that score. 🤗🤗

Lots of Love

Viji

Un Res below, Shru dear...late I know, but very heartfelt all the same. 😉 🤗

Again, such an electrifying chapter from you. Owing to the time difference, I almost invariably get to read your updates early on a Saturday/ Sunday morning. 😉 And what a crackjack start to a weekend day it always is! Intense, dramatic, forceful as ever!

I loved the way you sketched that undeniable, irrevocable connect between SwaSan here---two people who barely even know each other, really. But who have felt that powerful spark between them, from their very first meeting.

For Sanskaar, even though he is in the grips of a giant misunderstanding, all the supposed "proof" he has got, indicating that Swara is as deceptive, conniving as her father is-----he is still completely unable to be indifferent to her pain. He couldn't but feel such enormous distress at the way Swara was almost fighting for her life, her body battling to recover from those injuries. No wonder the nurses in the hospital were worried----they must have been walking on eggshells around the imperious, autocratic Mr Maheshwari---breathing fire and glaring with forbidding eyes, warning them that they better take good care of the patient...or else!!

As an counterpoint to this obvious concern and involvement from Sanskaar (though he would have so loved to pretend to be cold and indifferent!----But Mr Maheshwari, you have fallen hard, real hard, without yet knowing how deeply! 😉) was the poignant way you portrayed Swara's pain. Her unconscious/ semi conscious mind in the grips of a nightmare that she was drowning, suffocating and just about to give up...but she returned, back to the voice which she sensed was calling her back, urging her to hold on, to stay...In a sense, one could say that she held on only for Sanskaar...😳

And return she does...and I found it so moving as well as electric, the way she looks at Sanskaar and immediately says words to the effect that he is the person who saved her from drowning (her nightmare/ semi conscious hallucination)...though of course, she doesn't remember anything about who he is, not even who she herself is...😕😭

Poor Swara---all the ostensible 'evidence' will now paint her as a deceiver in Sanskaar's eyes. The Gadodia family ring, the lease deed which Ragini had signed, even that message on the tissue which Lakshya scrawled, to be handed over to Ragini by Swara. Sanskaar's reaction when he saw that tissue---My God, it was so heartrending. He has fallen so deeply for Swara, though he would perhaps (at this stage) not want to accept how deeply his heart is involved. But on a logical plane, he would think that she is as deceitful and conniving as his previous unpleasant experience (with Kavita I presume?), which had put him completely off the idea of love?

The conversation between Sanskaar and the kidnapping mastermind/ kingpin 😉 was absolutely from the pages of a thriller novel! So well executed, taut and gripping! Voice modification through a scrambling software of some kind----which is why I am more than fairly sure now that it is not Shekar Gadodia (though Sanskaar thinks it is. 😉) Sanskaar was so cold, composed and menacing even though that dratted caller was blackmailing him, crowing that he held all the chips, having abducted Lakshya. Sanskaar's counter gambit---of letting "Shekar" know that he had his daughter----the silence from the other end, the pause of hesitation----of course, it could be interpreted that it was Shekar unable to believe that Sanskaar actually had Swara in his custody, worried that the fact of his paternity would now come to light. But I don't think so, somehow. 😉 Sahil...Sahil...😡 🤢

I loved the way Sanskaar immediately made up his mind to take Swara away from the hospital, to keep her someplace safe, as soon as he discovered she had amnesia, and couldn't recollect a thing of who she was. His concern for her safety and well being was all too genuine----and it was not just to find out where his brother was being held, or to use her as a bargaining chip, either. He was concerned for her. 😉😳

A little disjointed, but I really liked the way he was reluctant to think of Swara as "Ragini Gadodia"----though he believes she is Ragini. 😆 He so wants to think of her just as Swara...remember her guileless, innocent smile and her frank, candid gaze from those marvelous eyes which had him in thrall...Mr Maheshwari is well on the way to being completely in love; hook, line and sinker! 😳 ☺️

Now I am wondering where Sanskaar would secret Swara away to. Dr Shalini would definitely give in to the plans----she can sense that Sanskaar truly does have Swara's best interests at heart, I think. Plus, she knows that Sanskaar, for all his rough edges and combative demeanor, is a very good man. So some time in seclusion for the Golden pair...for Swara to fall completely in love with Sanskaar; and for Sanskaar to be quite unable to quell his own emotions. His mind is going to lose big in this heart versus mind struggle-----or I think it would be better to say that his heart would win big. 😉 But I think there will be a lot of pain there-----I think at some stage, Sanskaar would steel himself to use "Ragini" as a bargaining chip, to get Lucky back. He might not even plan to really carry that plan through, might be just a ploy to throw the kidnapper off balance. But Swara might overhear and think he's been feigning all his concern and affection for her?

Yikes----I am guessing far too ahead now (and mis-guessing, I am sure)! 😆 😉

Waiting eagerly for #8, dear. You did say it would be up this weekend? I will be among the first to Res, I assure you. 😛😉 Though I fear I would definitely not be among the first to un res, but I know you understand. 🤗🤗


Love ya loads

-----Viji

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Shru

Can't ask for better start to morning ...it had me on edge of my bed ..😉it was totally gripping ..my fav parts ..the first para describing swaras condition ...it was totally outstanding how sanskaar's touch alone calmed her down ,next sanskaars fight within himself👏👏 the struggle of being torn coupled with mysterious man ..still no trace of laksh ,swara with amnesia .sanskaar has the ring ...it just gets more and more intriguing ...swara is gonna stay with sanskaar ..whoa ..too many prospects and ideas going on in my mind ...he tending her, the pull...OK I will stop right here 😆

Dreaming in morning ..I might just get back to sleep 😳

Feels so good to have u back and EI ..love being tangled in your words ..⭐️ 👏 .I want next weekend now like right now

Love

Lucky

PS: shal ..I have a feeling shes gonna play an important role ..😲

Dear Shru,

Hey Shruti! So I am on, with my unres thingy! Here you go..chapter...okay I hate to admit...unresing chapter 4!!

Swara plays piano? Yayyy!! I too am a keyboard player. I love to play piano. Feels great!😃 Swara being followed by goons...gives such SwaSanlicious feels! Okay, I am lunatic anyways!

Sex on wheels?😆 Smart one hu! And Laksh ka kya hoga.!! Ye chhora na sudhrega! Sanskaar gawking at Swara😳 Me likes it! Woah, that possessiveness and protectiveness that he feels for her, I just love it!

Those men were like spooky creatures following around or haunting you, wherever you go! I was getting those creepy chills, and if that is what you intended then congrats!! You succeeded:))

The way you described Sanskaar's car, you had me greedy! Normally I am just greedy for food like a true Taurean😳, but the way you described the car, all I wanted was to steal it and Sanskaar Maheshwari away for myself! I am a car fanatic! I love cars and just everything about them, and the way you described it, I wish I were a relative of Sanskaar, except his sister ofcourse😃

Woahh! The way you wrote the entire description of Sanskaar Maheshwari, I had those feelings of Prince Sanskaar of DK, The royal power that he radiated from his being! It was so like Prince Sanskaar. Or maybe I have the DK fever on me, cause I was just reading it, you know! But I loved it so much..!! Brilliantly written!

SwaSan convo was too good! Sanskaar cares for her so much, and absolutely doesn't want to let her go. Even the same case with Swara. I just love the way you are depicting their emotions of turmoil and attraction towards each other! The way he said 'Please' to allow her to drop her at the cafe was so damn adorable! I imagined VK saying pleased like that, and instantly wished to have a scene like that. He would have looked so cute!! And I repeat, I want the CAR!!

Okay, the gear scene was very very short, like a sentence or two, but enough to make me go all 'woahh, just fab'. It was intimate and a treat to read. Knight in Shining...armour hu? Some lines are like the punch lines, they make you go all Aww!! Amazing ones Shru! Just a friendly conversation! Me loved it<3<3

That touch, that sensation when they shook their hands! Just beautiful..!! Soulmates..my SwaSan! And I am angry that I couldn't get the coffee date. The way you described Swara's YES, I was sure I am in for a treat..but I am angry I didn't get it, and I am too late to demand for one now!😆 So waiting for more chapters, and development in the story!

Shruuu jaaan...

AUTHOR'S NOTE: 13/11/2016:

Shru we understand and we can wait patiently.. So please don't worry about it..

Hey Shru!! Don't worry, just enjoy your much-needed break...😊. Waise bhi sabar ka phal toh meetha hota hai na😉 Happy journey😃