ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ - Page 53

For chap 29
Hi Shru loads of luv n best wishes for new year n I am little late for comment as u know its the busiest time of the year due to Diwali n yes loads of wishes to u n ur dear ones for all the festivals coming soon n new year.

This chap was much awaited dear n you again gave complete justice to story and characters n I am loving the entire sequence of swasan now specially how they are getting attracted for each other. You know very well how much I love the way you write n again u won my heart because when u narrate a story n when there are very less actions going on then when u need to tell what emotions characters are feeling then there is test for writer that how one does that and he or she is successful only if readers relate n feel the same what u write n my dear Shru u do that always n again did it in this chap

... always looking forward to ur updates
love
Kawal

Originally posted by: PRINCESS_ALISHA

shru

happy Diwali dear

oh m missing those days when we used to interact so much

lovely update shru. 😳

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res for part 9, will try to unres soon. 😳
Unresed Shru dear. 😃
I loved this update so much!! 👏 I loved the attraction SwaSan have for each other. 😳 And also loved the way Sanskar took care of her. 😉 But he still thinks her to be Ragini!! 😭 🤢 Oh god! how much shocked and hurt Swara was when he suddenly left her alone after their 'oh so close' moment. 😕 Also liked Akanksha and Kaka. 😃 When will Sanskar know the truth?? 😕 Eagerly waiting for the next part. Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Thank you so much Alisha! Yes, those days were amazing- all the fun we all had discussing on the AT and in posts and FFs- that charm seems sort of gone I guess but always nice to see old friends made then:) Hope you are well? Thanks for reading and liking xoxo

how are you love😳 will never forget those memories😳& will always cherish them😳

Originally posted by: PRINCESS_ALISHA

how are you love😳 will never forget those memories😳& will always cherish them😳

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Hey Aheli! xx</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">How are you? Thanks so much for reading and liking Chapter 9😳. So glad you love the developing attraction, which I want to show growing despite Sanskaar's best but pointless efforts😉. Ah yes, he still thinks she's Ragini. As to when the truth will out- that will come in good time. For now, if he knew there would be no heart vs mind battle😉. I like Akanksha and Kaka too- these two need some sensible help😆. I am crazy busy at the moment so having no time to write the next part despite knowing what it needs to cover. I'll be back as soon as I can manage and lots of love as ever for your support xoxo</font>

Hii Shru! 😃 I'm good, just bit stressed coz my mid semester is going on... 😳 How r u?? 😳 And yes I can understand that u must be busy with works, so don't take much pressure to update. Update when u get time. Will wait patiently for it. 😃 Love u siso!! 🤗 Take care. 😃

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hii Shru! 😃 I'm good, just bit stressed coz my mid semester is going on... 😳 How r u?? 😳 And yes I can understand that u must be busy with works, so don't take much pressure to update. Update when u get time. Will wait patiently for it. 😃 Love u siso!! 🤗 Take care. 😃

Originally posted by: lucky.m

Res 🤗 shru

Yet to unres for 8😕

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">You take care too little sis and all the very best for your exams- lots of wishes and prayers for you.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">With much love,</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Shru x</font>

Thank u Shru siso for the wishes and the prayers. Love u. 🤗

Originally posted by: maaneetfan

Hiii Shru!!!

Tas! 🤗 So so good to see you! How have you been? Hope all well? And with the family too?

M back after so many months...feels like ages!! Had missed out the last few chapters of Dark knight and this one completely!!

Aww- don't worry Tas- I am so behind on so much myself.

And now in a day im done reading all the 8 chapters and its actually fun reading everything at a go since i see here its been taking you time to post each chapter due to ur several commitments...

Hope you enjoyed the end of DK? And thank you so much for catching up with 8 chapters of EI too- wow! You must have had to read a lot! But I am grateful!

After having just finished reading DK 2 days ago, EI is a totally different genre and set up and a lovely fresh concept! I love the fast track nature of this ff and also how its full of action...ur descriptions are always so detailed i feel im watching a movie or reading a book cosily tucked in bed...and this one is a fast paced racer!!

Yes, I wanted something very different from DK and also wanted to experiment with this type of modern feel romance. Glad you find it fast paced as I wanted that effect:)

8 chapters done and the mistaken identities not cleared yet...in fact I think that's the main usp of this ff...he thinks she is ragini gadodia and despite himself will fall deeply in love with her coz of their continued interaction and no seeming rescual in sight by her so called father!

You know me- I like to take my time in developing things. And exactly- if the MU was all clear, Sanskaar falling for Swara takes a whole different tack and I don't want that just as yet 😉.

Oh man!!! I sure HATE this Shekhar gadodia...no words for what a horrible jerk he is...cant doubt why the maheshwaris kicked him out in the first place tho how the poor sweet Sharmishtha could fall for such a creep i can't understand...love is truly blind i guess...else she would never have wanted her daughter to fall in the hands of such a man after her death if she knew his true colors!!!

Shekhar is a creep par excellence 😆. Shomi never really lived with him I guess- and as for her wanting her daughter to know her father might have been her deepest wish but sighhh- only that she has never voiced that .

So Shekhar must be knowing by now that its not Ragini who is in sanskaar's custody but will he know its swara and wont he wonder why sanskaar thought it was Ragini sply since he knows how precise and sharp sanskaar is??

I will stay silent on all of this as I am typing this very tired and I don't want to let any cats out of the bag 😆😉.

I love how u built the 'blocks' of this story in the initial chapter making it so easy and thrilling to follow in the subsequent chapters...im really regretting being away from this forum since so long and missing out such a superb piece of fiction

Awww- thanks Tas- so missed you and I hope you will get the chance to catch the rest. I have done until 9 but need to work on 10 like yesterday but current schedule doesn't allow .

Unlike DK and ur other fictional works this one is predominantly SwaSan and their interaction tho I guess in DK too it was so in the initial haveli parts...sorry cant stop the constant comparison with dk having finished reading it so recently

Yes, this is a different feel as such. And I am trying to keep most of the focus on SwaSan- it is less of a sweeping period drama type than DK:) There are plenty other characters but I just don't want to embroil too much into their back stories etc. Ah totally fine- some "feels" like DK coming through is no bad thing I guess as I know how much you loved DK:) 😳😊

Coming back to this...at least the villian is just one...the awful SG...and the other maheshwris are completely out of picture except laksh...do u plan to bring them in at some juncture?

I will bring other characters in for sure but more the way you see in (sort of) M&B and other type romances, with very defined roles hopefully not digressing too much from SwaSan 😃

Now i cant wait for ur next update having read all 8 at a go...so u need to post really soon tho i know u r inundated with commitments

Thank you again sweetheart. I hope you like 9 and I know what to write in 10, just need a spare weekend to get on with it- hoping for next weekend!

Take care dear
Lots of love
Tas