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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 4


"What does she think of herself? 6 months? Really!!!" - Laksh was fastly coming from the stairs talking to himself. When Laksh was coming down Swara barged in "Ragini ka kuch pata chala?" she asked worriedly.

"I can handle things Swara, I don't need your help.. So please!" - that was so harsh and Swara didn't expect this.

He just went out to make preparations for his journey to return. Sanskaar who had witnessed Laksh & Swara's conversation moved towards Swara.

"Swara don't take him wrong, he's so much hurt.. That's why.." Sanskaar tried to explain while Swara had tears on her eyes. "It's ok Sanskaar I can understand" - saying this she left the place.

After a couple of hours Laksh returned. He didn't ate anything since last night .. And he was literally so tried so he decided to have some juice. He searched for Uttara but couldn't find her. So he decided to take it by himself.


In kitchen Parineeta was struggling with her cooking works. No one was present there to help her. "Achcha hota agar Ragini yahan hoti toh.. Woh saare kaam karleti.." Pari was feeling helpless.

Laksh who was coming towards kitchen listened to his babhi's words and thought .. "There's still someone who is missing Ragini.." But his expressions changed when he listened to her words.

"Waise achcha hua ki Ragini yahan se chali gayi.. Varna mujhe toh yehi darr laga reheta tha ki kahin woh ghar walon ko sach na bolde ki mene ussko abortion pills diye.."

"Ab toh meri sachchai kabhi bahar nahi aayegi.." - Pari was enjoying her victory over Ragini while Laksh was shocked listening this.

He just walked away from there. "Bhabhi tried to kill our baby..and Ragini didn't say anything about this to me..." - Now Laksh had mixed emotions sad,angry,unprotective and insecure.
He had no idea how to react, so many questions were going on in his mind and he wanted answers. He just came out of his house and started his car. He rised the accelerator and went out when Sanskaar's car just came in. He had no idea where Laksh was going.

It was in the evening when everyone were having their tea. "Laksh kahan hai?" - DP asked in a bold voice.

"Nahi pata ji.. Subah se dikhai nahi diya.." - while AP was answering Sanskaar tried to handle the situation. Bade papa I have sent him to Delhi to get information about Sharma's deal.. He must be traveling. Everyone got somewhat satisfied by Sanskaar's answer so didn't enquire much. The day went off smoothly.


It was 9 AM Ragini was walking in the streets of Banaras with a bag full of vegetables. It was a new place for her so her steps were too slow. While she was walking a car passed through her way. Before she could blink her eyes she felt a pull and she was now inside the car. When she tried move she got to knew it was non other than Laksh. As soon as she saw Laksh she couldn't control herself from hugging him and he tightened the grip even more. He had so many questions but couldn't control himself.Both had tears in their eyes.



After sometime the car stopped in a park. Both Ragini and Laksh came out from the car.

"Laksh kaise hain aap? Ghar pe sab kaise hain? Sab theek haina wahan Laksh.." - Ragini was asking something but Laksh remained silent.

"Laksh hum aap hi pooch rahe hain? Aur aap yahan kaise.. Humne bola na .." While Ragini was talking, "Bas karo Ragini.." Laksh shouted.

What do you think you've done a great job by leaving the house? Why didn't you tell the truth to Swara? And what kind of message was that? Have you lost your senses? - Laksh was fuming in anger.

"Laksh I tried to tell the truth to Swara but before I could say anything Maa called me and the function started.. And I had no other option than leaving the house Laksh.."

Laksh - Then why didn't you let me tell the truth and support you Ragini?
Ragini - I said na Laksh, I didn't wanted them to think that their own son has betrayed them. So I didn't let you tell the truth Laksh. I'm sorry Laksh.

That's all you wanted to say or is there something left? - Laksh puzzled.

Something else? Nothing like that Laksh! - Ragini had no idea about what Laksh was speaking.

Laksh - Mmm.. Tell me who am I to you?
Ragini - Kya Laksh .. You're my husband.
Laksh - If I'm your husband then who am I to your baby if you're pregnant?
Ragini - Kya Laksh.. Kuch bhi .. You're the father.. But why are you asking all this?
Laksh - So if somebody tries to kill our baby then?
Now it was clear to Ragini that Laksh got to know about the abortion pills but she tries to hide it.
"Laksh what are you talking about ..I'm not getting you.. " it was enough for Laksh. He was already in so much pain and he couldn't digest the fact that she's hiding the truth even now.
"Why are you doing this Ragini? Don't you believe in me? Do you think I'll not be there for you? Do you still think I'm faking my love? Do you still think that I'll betray you? Don't you love me now Ragini? - Ragini was shocked by Laksh's questions but it was visible that how much hurt he's.. His eyes were filled with tears. His words were getting choked. So much was going through his mind.. His helplessness that he couldn't stop his wife from leaving the house. His feeling that his wife is not safe in his house.. His insecurity.. Everything was going on around.

In a fraction of second Ragini was in Laksh's arms tightly holding him. She became speechless.. There were only tears which were there. She was so much hurt by those questions and she also understood that she has hurted Laksh.

She broke the hug and somehow managed to speak. "I'm sorry Laksh, I didn't know that you were so hurt.. I didn't tell the truth because Pari bhabhi blackmailed me that if I tell the truth of abortion then she'll disclose my fake pregnancy. I was helpless Laksh.. But I know I have hurt you.. I have hurt you so much.. Punish me now.." - It was uncontrollable for her.

Laksh who saw her couldn't hold his anger, he cupped her face and.. "Why are you crying, you did nothing.. You didn't hurt me intentionally na?"
Ragini - "But then too I hurted you na.. Punish me now.."
Laksh - Acha baba theek hai.. I'll punish you.. Now just stop crying.. Ragini's eyes got big listening to Laksh's words.

"Haww.. Laksh you'll punish me.. So mean haan..." Ragini said in a cute way.

What? Abhi toh punishment punishment bolrahi thi ab achanak se mean kahan se hogaya mein..? Waise I don't mind being mean.. Do you want to know your punishment? - Laksh winked on her.

Ragini was eagerly looking at Laksh, he pointed his finger towards his cheek and winked at her again.

Ragini understood and made a NO face in a cute way.

Now this is the punishment I'm giving you for leaving me alone for hours and hours... Think twice.. I'm not gonna talk to you if you don't fulfill your punishment - saying this Laksh started moving from there fastly leaving Ragini standing behind.

Ragini fastly ran towards him and pressed her lips on his cheeks.. They both tangled their hands having a cute eye lock with smiling faces.




Guys I have no idea right now about what will I write next 😕
Do tell me if I should continue or not 😆
Do you like this chapter as ending?
Edited by -Claptrap- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Such a beautiful update

You portrayed the emotions of Laksh beautifully...

Loved it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww loved it poorvi 😳
Laksh is so desperate for ragini

And the kiss 😳

Don't you dare discontinue it

Waiting for the next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Lovely update poorvi
Awwwhh bless laskh
Can't wait for the next part
Thanks for the pm x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww another sweet update it's good he found her, I'm glad he didn't anyone he is going to meet her

Can't wait for the next part keep rocking
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Laksh's emotions were protrayed very well 👏 Love it
Don't dare to end this FF 😡 I'm waiting for your next chapter 😛

RagYa scene was great 😳 I hope we get something like this
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful update..Loved Laksh's concern for Ragini.
Keep it up Poorvi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Super !!
Glad the truth is out to Laksh now..
Such a cute scene at end

No poorvi don't end pls

Atleast you got to complete 50 chapters Lol

You write well sis.. continue writing ;)
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Amazing chapter..
Emotions, anger, romance, feelings, guilt, Planning n plotting..all filled in one chapter. .amazing!!!!

N ye kya question hai k should I continue or not???
Of course u should buddhhu..
I'm waiting..

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