SwaSan/RagYa FF - Yeh Lamha Kahan Tha Mera

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Swaragini FF - Yeh Lamha Kahan Tha Mera

I'm back with another FF, This time I'll try writing a story on both the couples.Hope you all enjoy it.

~ Main CHARACTERS~

Swara Bose

Ragini Gadodia

Sanskar Maheshwari

Laksh Maheshwari

~ INDEX PAGE~

Chapter 1 - Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 2

Chapter 3 - Page 3

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Chapter 1

1st August 2016 - In a Flight to Mumbai from USA

"Finally I'm going back to India! My beloved country, I have so much memories attached with that place" she says happily smiling and looking at the photograph of her family

In the photograph there was her Dada and Dadi sitting in the middle with her dad standing besides them but there was a girl right in the middle between Dada Dadi in beautiful white kurta and that was no other but her

"Dadi, you gifted me this white dress on my birthday which I last celebrated in India, and today's I'm coming back here in this gift of yours only" she replies

There was another photograph, it was of her and her best friend Swara whom she loved more than herself. She gets emotional looking at all these pictures. She was no other than our Ragini

It was soon time to go off the flight, she gets down the flight, goes in search for her luggage and waits outside to get a cab and return home. She waited for a long time but all the cabs were coming full

Just then a girl taps on her back asking her help for direction. "Excuse me can you tell me the direction to this place" asked the girl showing the address on a piece of paper

She was wearing a beautifully designed dress with accessories matching her dress

Ragini turns back to give her a helping hand with the direction although she herself was not quite sure if she remembers the places around well

She gets a mini shock as she turns to see who it was, without a second glance she hugs her "Swara! you? I missed you so much" she says

"Ragini! I missed you too" Swara replies. "Didn't you even thought of texting or calling me once in all these years? I thought you forgot us .. You didn't even come to meet, didn't you miss us a single bit?" Swara adds hugging her as tightly as she could

"I did I missed you all so much, only I know how difficult was it for me to lived there all alone, all I had with me was these unforgettable memories" Ragini replies, she also askes her what she was doing here

"Actually, after completing my collage I moved to Dehli for some years, but really Ragini I'm feeling so good coming back to my own city after years, and just look at our destiny, we both are returning here after years on the same day" Swara replies

"Shall we go home and surprise everyone?" Ragini askes Swara who was busy on her own thought

Ragini snaps at swara making her come back to her sense

" Where were you lost swara? what are you thinking?

"Nothing Ragini, I was just thinking if it's good for us to go together home? I mean you know both our families and their hatred for each other. I know mom and dida won't have problem and neither will you dad and dada ji but you know your grandmother's hatred for my family " Swara says

"I know Swara, and I wish I knew the reason too, and swara since when did you became this scred? I thought you were very brave" Ragini says

"I was Ragini but I'm not anymore, now I'm scared of the word 'relation' " Swara replies

"Swara, answer my one question truely! Do you still love laksh?

Swara remains slient

"If you don't answer me than I'll think it as a 'yes' " Ragini replies

"Ragini! Let's go home now, we'll talk about this later on" Swara says and gets in to the empty cap, Ragini follows her

Swara and Ragini's house were one house divided into two parts , Basically the right side of the house were Bose family's and left side were Gadodia's

To be Continued ...

Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Anji good start... waiting for heroes entry... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start anjale!!!
Waiting for our prince..
Wait! Were Swara n Laksh in a relationship? N what about Sanskar?
N as it seems it's RagLak n SwaSan ff..
Plz make RagLak meet soon ..n is it again kind of jodi swap? Like SanGini swa lak to RagLak SwaSan? ...

Fast plz..update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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brilliant start👏
lovedd ttt😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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😲 Swara loves Laksh
Omg!!! Looking forward to this 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaay meri Anji ka new FF 🥳
I love the story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome beginning.
Really loved the friendship of Swaragini...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Chapter 2

Continued from 1st August 2016 - Gadodia-Bose Mansion, Mumbai

Swara and Ragini both reached the Gadodia- Bose joint Mansion

They rang the door bell and waited for someone to open

Sharmista first came and opened the door, she was very surprised yet happy seeing Swaragini there after years

"Swara? Ragini?" Sharmista said surprisingly and huged them both. The rest of the family members also came there

"Swara was coming we all knew this but Ragini you never told us that even you were coming! Welcome back Swara and Ragini or should I say Swaragini's " Shekhar said and winked at them

"I thought of giving you all a surprise that's why I didn't told .. I'm sorry" Ragini apologises

"No No beta, I was just joking, you don't have to apologise" Shekhar said

"My ladoo .. You came back?" Dadi runs and hugs her

"Dadi, come on now stop crying I'm back right? See your ladoo is back to you" Ragini said. "I'm sorry Dadi, I left house without telling anyone of you that's because I knew if I told then none of you would have let me leave" She added

"Will you do all the talking here? Both of them just came, atleast let them come in and take rest, do the talking later" Dada ji said

Swara and Ragini both went into their respective room and refreshed their old memories

1st August 2016 - Maheshwari House, Mumbai

The Maheshwari family were in mood of full celebration as their daughter-in-law Parineeta was pregnant, their happiness doubled when Laksh returned home after years

Everyone was very happy that day expect for sujata who was all lost and feeling lonely, quietly she goes back into her own room, Anupoorma who notices this goes to her

"Sujata, what happened? everything is alright?" Anupoorma asks

"No jiji! Nothing is alright, I know your very happy today after all your elder-daughter-in law is pregnant and your son returned home after years but did anyone think about me? For which reason should I be happy? My Sanskar, my one and only son left me and went far away from this world" Sujata said

"Atleast even if laksh wasn't with you, you knew that where ever he was he was happy and alive but my son isn't even in this world" Sujata continued

"Calm down Sujata, Please stop crying .. I understand you .. " Anupporma was saying when Sujata interrupts

"No! No one understands me, what was my son's mistake that his life was taken for this , can you tell me? .. No right? His only mistake was loving a girl of another cast, loving someone isn't a crime or sin that his life was taken for it" Sujata continues

Back in the living room Laksh gets happy but at the same time emotional seeing them all, he talks and meets everyone. They all even had lunch and dinner together that day

The day passed by and soon it became night. Laksh goes back into his room and rearranges and unpacks his things

1st August 2016 - Gadodia-Bose Mansion, Mumbai

Swara and Ragini's bedrooms were allocated on opposite side of each other, after a long day back they left their rooms and went up to the rooftop where did used to always meet before as their secret hideout

"Ragini I'm feel like I back to those old days before, remember how we used to always meet here when we have to talk and share with each other?"

"Of course Swara! How can I forget all these?" Ragini replies

"And remember how during summer time we often used to have sleepover in the rooftop, it used to be so fun" Swara says

"I wish this day never ends and the moment stops here" Ragini adds to it

"Ragini if you don't mind then can we sleep together in my room?" Swara asks Ragini

"Is this even a question to ask?" Ragini tells

"I mean, last time also we planned right but Dadi didn't allowed you" Swara questions her again

"Leave this to me, I'll make her agree, my Dadi isn't so bad afterall

Swara then goes back to her room and waits for Ragini to come there as she went to persuade her Dadi

To be Continued ...

Do suggest a title for this story 😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am first Yaay

amazing update Anji
Swaragini bond is beautiful. They are so close.

Laksh is also back. Waiting for them to meet soon

Update soon na!! 😳
Edited by Senoritaamor - 9 years ago

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