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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Waiting for long time dear.
But what a awesome update.
Like the kavita part in this.


Hi dear,
I am sorry for the deay. Will update soon.
Tank you so much.

Love,
Shreetha..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Pinky.

Very nice... Update soon...


I will update soon.
Thank you.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tithi1812

Nothing to say.. I guess.. U know I love ur story and I loved this update as usual.. I thought swara told everything yo shomi.. Thank God she din't.. 😆 she feeling guilty and avoiding Sanskar for a while.. Love it.. 😳 but what I like d most here is.. Kavita's character.. She is so cool and positive person.. She has observed Sanskar throughout d lunch..and she knw that Sanskar already fall for swara 😳 I love hw Sanskar said he don't need any blessings.. He wants to take Swara away from here.. Determination 😉

Now.. Eagerly waiting for d story to unfold.. How Sanskar convince swara..hw they got married.. but u knw sumtimes while reading I felt.. Actually swara is d person for whom they chose Sanskar.. It's all their plan.. 😉 my poor swasan heart 😆
Don't knw hw can I bear d pain.. One more part only 😭😭😭 but was laughing like mad throughout reading.. My cheeks r paining due to blushing ☺️ I love this story and love u too dear.. 🤗 u really made my day.. I dance whenever I read update of this story 😆


Hi Tithi..🤗
Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment buddy. I am blushing now.☺️
I am happy to know that you love this story.
Yes, Kavitha is different just like the story.
I am sorry but Sanskaar came to India for Kavitha only but something unexpected(not for us) happened as you know.
Yeah I know and I love you too honey.
Hope you like the last part aswell.
Thank you.

Love,
Shreetha..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Res shreetha

Unres..

Babes...😃 you nailed it..amazing update.👏..i liked swara convo with her mom..when she was about to say about her n sanky alliance.sanky came..nshe cancelled...but her move was brave..liked it.😉...kavi n sanky..convo was a treat...one of those few times when i liked her..well in almost every story she is villain..😃enjoyed their blunt n straight forward answers...waiting for swasan moments cum confession...
😳
Talia


Hi Talia..🤗
Thank you so much honey. I am happy that you liked it.
Kavitha is positive here. You may get confession in this last update. Hope you like it.
Thank you.

Love,
Shreetha..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Everyone.. I am very sorry for the delay and thank you so much for reading this story and commenting in-spite of your busy schedule. That means a lot to me. Here is the much awaited last part of this story. I hope you like it. Please share your views and ignore mistakes.


Last Chapter:


A couple of days later Christmas Eve evening finally arrived with the promise of wonders for tomorrow. Sharmishta had planned on spending the evening with her friend's son but was preoccupied with the sudden news of her and her husband's close friend's accident. They rushed immediately to the hospital after receiving the reassurance from Kavitha, Sanskaar, Swara, and Uttara that they will be fine on their own. They opted on the idea of just staying put at home and relaxing. Sanskaar gets the fireplace running from the insistence of Kavitha that it was getting rather chilly and soon enough the warmth of the fire begins to sweep throughout the room. The shrilling of the telephone from the kitchen causes Kavitha to stand up, tearing her gaze off of the television, and excuse herself to attend the call. Sanskaar watches as she stealthily slips her cell phone into her pocket after closing it. She winks at him before leaving and he hides his growing smile... A few seconds later she beckons for Uttara to join her, claiming that she needs her for something. Swara watches Uttara leave her alone with Sanskaar in apprehension.



Swara: (nervously) Um... I think I will go and check on what Didi needs... I'll be right back...


Sanskaar: Swara, wait...

He requests as he takes a hold of her lower arm into his hand. Sanskaar stands up beside her and looks slightly nervous himself. Swara looks on at him curiously.

Swara: Yes?

Sanskaar: ... I... I actually wanted to give you your Christmas present personally... I don't think I can wait till tomorrow... (giving her a small smile)

Swara: You got me a present? (softly)

Sanskaar nods his head. His heart skips a beat as she sits herself back down in her place near the fireplace and smiles the same old sweet smile that had first made him smitten by her.

Swara: Alright... I'll wait...

Sanskaar lowers down beside her and reaches into his pocket, withdrawing out a small red velvet pouch. He takes her hand and gingerly places the pouch into her palm.

Sanskaar: Open it... (encouragingly)


Swara does so by tugging on the strings and turning the pouch over which seconds later she gasps at the sight of her present sliding out onto her hand. She gazes at it for quite some time until she looks back up at a smiling Sanskaar...


Swara: Sanskaar... how...why...

Sanskaar: I knew you really liked them despite how many times you tried telling me you didn't... I went back to the store and got them for you...

Swara: But Sanskaar... you didn't have to...

Sanskaar: (earnestly) I wanted to...


Swara stares into his eyes for a moment before switching them down onto her silver payals that she took a great interest to at the jewelry store two weeks back and feels a surface of emotions arise in her by this gesture of his.

Sanskaar: (watching her curiously) You like them... don't you?

Swara: (breathes, smiles) I love them... Thank you... (sincerely)

Sanskaar looks relieved as well as happy by the way he beams at her. He startles her as he reaches out and cups her cheek with his hand...staring at her intently with his piercing eyes.

Sanskaar: ... I wanted to give you something special for your first Christmas... something that you would always remember me by...


Her hands slightly trembling from their close proximity, Swara drops one of the payals from her hand which makes a cluttering noise as it hits the floor... It draws Sanskaar's attention to it who looks down and picks it back up.

Sanskaar: May I?


Tongue-tied and not knowing what else to do, Swara dumbly nods and silently watches as Sanskaar begins to tie the anklet around her extended ankle... he ties the other one as well and admires the view of the payals he bought for her on her tiny feet...


Sanskaar: They look great on you...

Swara: (softly murmurs) Thank you...


Sanskaar's lips crack into a wide smile and his eyes meet hers once more. For a long minute neither of them speak as they are caught in the spellbinding moment until Sanskaar smiles even further at her...

Sanskaar: Swara... do you realize that right at this precise moment we are sitting under a mistletoe?

Swara: (innocently) What's a mistletoe?

Sanskaar: (grinning) It's a certain plant that people hang around during Christmas... the history behind it is that if a couple are under a mistletoe, they have to share a kiss...

Sanskaar watches in amusement as Swara quickly looks up to the ceiling and spots the plant high up above their heads. She looks back at him and blushes hot red.

Swara: Who would hang that up there?

Sanskaar: ...Uttara would...

Swara: Why would she do something like that?

Sanskaar: (smiling) Because I asked her to...

Swara: (honestly confused) Why would you do that?

Sanskaar: ...So I can do this...


He lightly begins in tracing the features of her face with his fingers as his eyes soften and stay fixed on her... Swara's pulse races fast and she feels her breathing shake as nerves tighten in her chest... Her heart thumps hard just when Sanskaar's face inches closer to hers, their noses brushing, and tilting his head slightly to the side... It is when she can feel his own breath fan her face that she snaps out of it and turns her face the other way, making Sanskaar miss her lips by a second...


Swara: Sanskaar... this is wrong...

Sanskaar: (exasperated) How is this wrong, Swara?

Swara: (close to tears) You are here for Kavitha Didi... your wedding will be fixed with her... Both Maa and Annapurna Aunty approve of your match with Di... Please---don't do this to me... I can't do what you want me to do... I can't cheat everyone like this...

Sanskaar: Swara... Look at me...

He takes her face into his hands, steering her over to meet his gaze. His insides sink on seeing tears brimming in her warm honey doe eyes. He tenderly wipes one away that manages to escape...

Sanskaar: I get to decide who I belong to or not... I don't want anything to do with your sister when... (trailing off)

Swara: ...(whispers) When?


Sanskaar gazes deeply into her eyes as he confesses, "Main tumse pyaar kartha hoon." Swara's heart skips a beat and her whole insides tingle from his words... She looks at him with transfixed awe... He gathers her close and stares down at her...

Sanskaar: Swara... I love you... and that is the truth... (emotion deep in his voice)

Overwhelmed with surfacing emotions, Swara feels like she might just choke right then and there...Glistening water spills from Swara's eyes as she succumbs into her tears and professes her own truth to him as well...

Swara: Oh Sanskaar... I-I ... I love you too...


Sanskaar breaks out into a satisfied smile as he has longed to hear those three words from her mouth the moment he laid his eyes on her and takes her lips in his into a gentle, yet passionate kiss. His fingers make their way into her silky hair and he sighs in content as he holds her close against him...



After what seems like a century to them, Sanskaar slowly caresses her bottom lip before drawing back and resting his forehead against hers, nuzzling their noses together...


Swara: (shyly) ...So what happens now?

Sanskaar: (grinning) Now, my love, no one can keep me from you... You are mine and only mine...

Swara turns pink and bites softly on her lower lip. Sanskaar sees this and inwardly groans before removing her lip from her teeth's captive and kissing her some more...

It isn't until they hear Kavitha's intruding cough some minutes later that they break apart.

Kavitha: Excuse me for interrupting in your lip-locking... But I'm kind of getting tired of standing around in the kitchen... Do you mind if I can come back now, Sanskaar?

Swara blushes from embarrassment on being caught by both of her sisters who stand in the living room doorway and hides her face in Sanskaar's chest as he pulls her into his arms.

Sanskaar: (sighs) You couldn't let me enjoy for some more time, could you Kavitha?

Kavitha: Of course not... Now seeing that soon I will become your sister-in-law, it has become my permanent duty to become an annoying pest in your life. (throwing him a smile)

Sanskaar growls at her. Kavitha turns her attention over to her younger sister and winks at her.

Kavitha: Looks like your American ajnabee managed to steal your heart after all, Swara... I guess I have to start looking for my maid of honor's dress now, huh?... (teasingly)

Uttara: Aww Di, how come you get to be maid of honor?

Kavitha: Because I'm oldest Uttara...

Uttara: That's still not fair though Di... I'm just as much as close as you are to Deeds...

Sanskaar and Swara both share a look at this and grin... the thought of marriage exciting them both and sending their insides in frenzy...

Sanskaar: (whispers only for her to hear) Mrs. Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari... it has a nice ring to it, don't you think?

Swara merely flushes red as an answer...

*********


The next week flew by so fast that Sanskaar and Swara could hardly digest the fact that it was now Sanskaar's last day in India... The very thought devastated Swara who couldn't stand to bear being away from him for the next three months.

Swara: Do you have to go?

She asked him once during the middle of his packing. He smiled lightly at her and ran his fingers through her long black tresses...

Sanskaar: You know I do... I've got to go to London for some time to set up our hotel chains over there... Dad's been counting on me for this project for a long time.

Swara: But three months? (her face falling)

Sanskaar: I'll call you every single day... We'll pull through this Swara... and in no time, I'll be back to take you with me... Promise.



He sealed it with a loving kiss on her forehead. And now here they are driving to the airport to get Sanskaar checked in before his flight's time. Swara sighs as she stares gloomily out of the car window, ignoring the excited chatter coming from her family. She is well aware of Sanskaar glancing back to her time to time but was in no mood to speak or let alone look at him at the moment. She would only give into her tears that were threatening to fall any second...


They file into the airport and within some time arrive and loiter around Sanskaar's gateway, treasuring their last moments with him to the fullest. Sanskaar badly wanted to be by Swara's side and soothe her but with the family constantly around him, it was proving to be impossible. Swara stays behind and only watches Sanskaar with silent eyes who replies politely to everyone's chatters. It isn't until the announcement of Sanskaar's flight over the intercom that breaks into the middle of their frenzy talks...


"Business class of Flight 180 US Airlines to New York City please begin to board the plane... I repeat, business class of flight 180 US Airlines, please board the plane."


Swara's heart sinks as she sees Sanskaar being engulfed in everyone's arms and wishes them warmly with a promise of returning soon. Her face becomes downcast as he finally approaches her and stares down at her from his gallant height. She is forced to look up as his fingers take a hold of her chin and lift it upwards... causing her eyes to meet directly with his own.


Sanskaar: Swara...


Hearing her name coming so sensually and passionately from his lips is enough to make her break her steel exterior and give into her emotions... Hot tears suddenly make their way down her flushed cheeks... Before Sanskaar can even make a gesture to wipe them away, Sharmishta interrupts...


Sharmishta: Oh Swara darling, calm down now. Sanskaar will be back soon before you know it. It is only a matter of a couple of months... (soothingly)

Sharmishta tears her gaze away from her daughter and instead settles it onto Sanskaar who is troubled by seeing tears in Swara's eyes...


Sharmishta: Sanskaar beta... (adding on shyly) You haven't told us your answer yet... to the proposal I mean... I know we haven't directly spoken about it... but even still I am asking... You do approve of my daughter, don't you? (hopefully)

Sanskaar turns to look at Sharmishta and smiles lightly at her...

Sanskaar: Sharmishta Aunty... The proposal still stands from my side... not for Kavitha though...

Taking Swara's hands into his own, Sanskaar keeps his eyes intact with Sharmishta's whose wide eyes stare at the scene in front of her with disbelief...

Sanskaar: (finishing off) But for Swara instead... I want to marry Swara and only her...

Swara's face turns a dark shade of pink as she avoids looking at her mother's bewildered expression. Sharmishta begins to stammer...

Sharmishta: B-b-but... How can this... your mother and I specifically wanted you and Ka----


She is cut short however as her husband lays a hand on her shoulder, telling her to say no more without using any words. He gives her a quick, silencing look before turning his attention over to Sanskaar who stares back at him with anticipation. Shekar grins fondly at the young man standing across from him...


Shekar: What could make us anymore happier than having our Swara marrying a nice man like yourself?... We accept your proposal, beta...


Sanskaar grins himself from relief and turns to meet Swara's eyes who shines radiantly back at him, bearing the same look as his. He surprises everyone as he takes Swara into his arms and lifts her off from her feet, twirling her around in excitement. Nonetheless they stare at them with approval, even Sharmishta, who can't help but smile a little at the sight of her daughter glowing brightly in Sanskaar's arms. She now understood the reason behind Swara's reluctance in the idea of Sanskaar's marriage to her elder sister... The mad girl was in love with him herself... The very girl who resented the American stranger from the beginning had unknowingly managed to give her heart away to her Ajnabee...



***********


Thank you,
Shreetha..


PS: I am sorry. No Epilogue.



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Posted: 9 years ago
I loved the last chapter darling!
It was so so so beautiful<3<3 Just ammazing!!
I am so sad that this story ended mannn!! And What the hell?? No Epilogue??
NO NO NO!! I won't settle without an epilogue!!
I need one thats it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Shreetha,
A beautiful ending to a beautiful story. A story that would stay in our hearts despite no further words being penned down.

I loved it, from beginning to the end, each moment each conversation was lovely. A story that truly reflects the Christmas spirit.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shreee...
Darling...wonderful update..i was delighted n flushed while reading it...that kiss was dreamy...loved kavi..uttara ..sanky plan to give surprise proposal to swara...loved it...climax was awe worthy..in love dear.literally...but i want epilogue..i dont care how long it take..but i want epilogue...plzzz dear..pretty plzzz.

Will wait for other story from u ...

Love
Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey shreetha darling.. this is just fantastic. I loved it.. I knew that payal will be his gift to her.. that kiss and his plan I loved it. Then his sister in law's are great.. but mine.. never mind..
I want an epilogue.. I'll join Sakshi..

Love you a loads..

Kam.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Gosh it was beautiful & wonderful journey!
Shreetha, I WANT an epilogue, please!
Res: I will try to unres sooner!

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