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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res.

Unres dear..

Shreetha.. 🤗 .. how are you.???

Okay this was something superb.. I loved each and every scenes..

From the beginning... I loved the way how kavity addressed Sanskaar as Swara husband... I was grinning while reading..😃

Then that sisters word war... I know how it'll feel when you doesn't have any clue about what they are talking..

Then shopping shopkeeper did the same he assumed them as a couple... Lol... I'm happy... I hope Sanskaar bought that payal for Swara secretly...

Then he taking photo of her... Without her knowledge.. that was cool...

Update soon.

With love...

Kam..


Hey Kam..🤗
I hope you are fine now...???
I an good dear.!! Thank you.!!

I am glad you liked the update.. Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment.!!
Well you have to wait to know about the payal and also Kavita.😉
Will try to update soon buddy ..thank you.

Take care dear..!!!

Love,
Shreetha..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Sakshi..🤗 Will wait..😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tithi1812

Res 😛 Omg..omg..omg.. U update it.. Finally..

I wait for dis story everyday..😆


Aww... I am sorry for making you wait Tithi..😔
Will try to update soon.!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update...SwaSan...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Read all parts in a go loved it
Can u pm when you next update
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey just read all your chapters in one go... pretty awesome so far.'... update soon... and american sanskar wow...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Shreetha😊
So I was stalking the forum like I always do whenever I have some leisure & suddenly stumbled upon this story...The prologue was enough to get me intrigued & by the time I was done with the first chapter,I was completely hooked to it😳...

The concept is totally refreshing...I'm in love with this American version of Sanskaar❤️...Though you've mentioned him as a rebel since childhood who've never visited India or learnt separately about Indian culture,his every action & every word clearly speaks of his roots which are firmly anchored to his native soil😊-that's why he agrees to let his mother choose his wife & even comes to India for a month,isn't he a sweetheart?...
Then came Swara,our Royal Bengal tigress😆...she was irritated with her mother fussing over her NRI friend's son & hence started giving major cold shoulder to Sanskaar😆...She was not wrong though...Sharmishtha was really going overboard with everything...Anybody possessing a sense of self-respect would have reacted like that if she was constantly pushed out of her comfort zone by her own mother in order to impress some stranger😊...However,it's not only difficult but also impossible to resist the charm of Sanskaar Maheshwari😛...So the inevitable happened...Those creeps harassing Swara & Uttara😡🤢...Sanskaar beat them black & blue..And finally the ice broke...Swara began to see Sanskaar for the wonderful human being that he was😳 Our sunny boy toh was already smitten by Swara❤️...loved how he was getting irritated with the frequent "Kavita" talks😆...

The SwaSan scene in Sanskaar's room,following the encounter with those goons,at night,was magical...loved that "Main tumse pyaar karta hoon"❤️...Sanskaar's reaction when AP explained to him the meaning of that line😉...He definitely realised that he had unknowingly blurted out his heart-felt wish...Then while playing the game,he asked Swara about her boyfriends & was relieved to hear she had none🤣...Swara though was busy focussing all her attention on that "Beautiful" uttered by Sanskaar☺️...These two😆...

We have two SwaSan shippers in this story till now-Uttara & that shopkeeper who thought Sanskaar was Swara's husband😳...Uttara's a cutie-pie & I love her more because she didn't accompany SwaSan on that day...That zip scene was☺️...This time Swara couldn't control & asked for his compliment😉 & she did get what she wanted😳...

Kavita seems to be..ummm🤔...nice...please let her be like this even after she meets Sanskaar😳

I simply can't wait to read further but will patiently wait for whenever you update😳...Please make it quicker if possible😃...
Lots of love🤗
Mishti

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Posted: 8 years ago
hey... please update soon... have been waiting for days for an update.. since its awesome so far...can yoy write a chapter where sanskar is maybe sick and swara takes care of him... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hola Peeps.. I am sorry friends I was unable to reply to each and every comment but I read them all and thank you so much for the love and support.. And also I am sorry for the delay.. Here is the next chapter.. Please let me know your take on it and please ignore mistakes..


Chapter 9:


As Sanskaar and Swara arrived back to the Gadodia's residence, they were just in time for dinner. Dinner was a joyful affair with everyone involved in excited chatter. Sanskaar, for a brief moment, felt like he was sitting with his own dear ones and not a group of strangers that he viewed them as before... Slowly he was realizing that he was getting attached to this family more than he would like for himself to be...

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Uttara: I feel bad that I ditched out on you guys at last minute... I want to make it up... Why don't we watch a movie?

Swara: Uttara, a movie at this hour?

Uttara: Yes, why not? What do you think Sanskaar Bhaiya?

Sanskaar: I think it's a great idea... I'm not tired yet anyways...

Uttara smiles at his response and encouragingly leads him to the living room where Swara follows them after caving in.

Sanskaar: What movie are you putting in Uttara?

Uttara: Scrooge...


Scrooge, an old Christmas classic, was about a coldhearted, selfish man who didn't believe in Christmas. Sanskaar grins at her selection. Count on Uttara to be in the Christmas mood. Swara, on the other hand, is terribly confused. Within thirty minutes into the movie, however, the very person who suggested the whole idea falls asleep. Sanskaar and Swara, though, don't notice this until afterwards as they are absorbed in a conversation of their own...


Swara: Sanskaar?

Sanskaar: Hmmm?

He replies while keeping his gaze on the movie.

Swara: Why do Christians celebrate Christmas?


Sanskaar tears his eyes off of the screen on hearing this and looks over to Swara's innocent, curious expression. He smiles lightly at her in a fond manner.


Sanskaar: Well,... Christmas is supposed to be in honor of Jesus' birth, so it's an important holiday... His birth is said to have fulfilled the prophecies of the Old Testament that predicted the coming of a messiah... at least that's what many Christians believe...

Swara: Do you believe in that?

Sanskaar places his arm onto the edge of the couch behind Swara and turns his body to face her completely...

Sanskaar: I do... Jesus was a savior and believed as a prophet... also to be the son of God by his virgin birth... he was a healer and teacher... he preached compassion and forgiveness, did many remarkable works and performed miracles... and by this he brought hope to the people, who at the time were being forced to believe in damnation...His death brought salvation and reconciliation with God for our sins... He is an honorable and holy man to commemorate Swara...

Swara: You make him sound very wonderful... (smiling softly)

Sanskaar: He is...

Swara: Would you tell me more about him?


With a grin forming at the corners of his mouth, Sanskaar starts off with the accounts of Jesus' birth leading to his magnificent legacy... Swara listened intently to his velvety voice as he spoke excitedly. His excitement brought a faint smile to her lips... It didn't matter if they both believed in different religions... all that did was that they had faith...

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Sanskaar affectionately runs his fingers through her hair and gazes at her with adornment... He had noticed her eyes begin to droop before and when he had advised that she go on to sleep, she flatly refused to him and insisted that she wanted to listen to him some more... Sleep, however, overcame her in the end.

He wished he could freeze this moment forever...here with Swara so close and resting peacefully against his shoulder. She seems so frail and delicate in her sleep that he felt the need to hold and protect her...


He knew, however, that he needed to get her to bed. He wakes Uttara first, who is rattled out of her sleep and drowsily wishes him goodnight before retreating to her room. Turning to Swara, Sanskaar softly prods her awake as well...


Sanskaar: Swara... Swara... Wake up... It's late... You should go to bed...Swara?


He sees her stir a little but fall back into the abyss of her sleep. Sighing, he gathers her into his arms and lifts her up from the couch as he has no other choice. He takes her to her room where he gingerly lays her onto her bed before tucking her in under the duvet. After a second thought, he tenderly kisses her on her forehead and grins as he sees a content smile grow on her lips...Silently he makes his way out...

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Thank you,
Shreetha..



PS: I know its a small chapter.. I am sorry.. I will update the next chapter very soon..


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Posted: 8 years ago
Reserved!

Unresed!
Shreetha?? This was way too short!! I want another chapter now itself!! I want to read more on this story!!
SwaSan moments were damn adorable<3 Sanskaar lifting her up and kissing her forehead...beautiful moments!! Loved this chapter and I want another one NOW!!
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