Swasan SS: Love v/s Obsession[Chapter-10 updated] - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

Awesome update
quite emotional
swara was pregnant??omg



thank you😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Shocking and short chapter Nidhi..!!
But definitely beautifully written..loved it!
Update soon, bacha!


thank you so much di😳

will upsate soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
__Chapter 10__

"Thankfully the bullet missed Mrs Maheshwari so she doesn't have bullet in her body and I assure you Sahil will not be a threat anymore to you we have arrested him and have the proof which will not allow him to be free" the inspector said truthfully to Sanskaar who was relived a little knowing that Sahil wasn't a threat anymore to his love

"Thank you so much inspector" Sanskaar replied shaking his hands with inspector

"It was our duty! Take care" the inspector said and left from there. Sanskaar exhaled in relief and was now waiting for the doctor to come out and explain Swara's situation to him

"Mr Maheshwari I would like to talk to you in my cabin" The doctor said coming outside the operation theatre, he started walking towards his cabin, Sanskaar for once looked at Swara from the door and a tear rolled down his cheek

"Sanskaar doctor aapko bula rahe hai aapko jana chaiye hum hain na yaahan pe" Ragini said making his trance to break. He nodded his head in acknowledgement and followed the doctor without any word.

*

Sanskaar's POV

I was going to be a father. We were going to be parents. What went wrong? What was the wrong deed I have done to get a punishment like this? if you don't like me so much hurt me as much you want why to hurt Swara and what wrong did our child do who wasn't even fully developed? I hope the doctor doesn't give me any worse news. I just want my Swara to be safe and sound.

"Take a seat Mr Maheshwari" the doctor said and I nodded back, I didn't have the energy to speak

"Your wife is absolutely fine she became unconscious due to the pressure she went through the entire night and I think she hasn't eaten anything" the doctor said and I realised that I was holding my breath

"Doctor she doesn't have any other complications, right?" I asked in a vulnerable tone

"That I have to check after she get her conscious" he replied and I nodded again and I got up to leave his cabin

"Thank you so much doctor" I said and left for the door

"Tell her about the miscarriage soon Mr Maheshwari! The earlier you tell her it will be good" The doctor said and I again nodded my head not knowing what to say

How can I tell her about the miscarriage? I am not able to settle the news how the hell I will tell her? she will be broken. No I will not tell her! let this news be with me not even my family should know about it. That will be better! No one will know and Swara will be happy. Let the news stay within me.

You can't do that Sanskaar, you have to tell her the truth

I Can't and I don't have the strength to see her broken state.

Its better you tell her the news other than finding that from someone else

If I am not gonna tell anybody who will tell her? no one.

The baby was also her part Sanskaar and you can't lie to her the whole life!

I ran my hand through my hair frustrated. She will break down! How will I see her hurt face? I was walking through the corridor when a body pushed me and I was ready to shout upon the being.

"The hell can't you see and walk?" I shouted on her, her face was covered with her shawl and something was unstable about her

"I am sorry" she said and ran again, was she psychotic? Let it be! I started to walk again but I could feel something vibrating against my body. Oh! My phone. Laksh?

"Haan lucky"

"Swara ko hosh aagaya tujhe puch rahi hai jaldi aa" he said and ended the call

You have to be strong Sanskaar. You can't be broken in front of her. she needs you now.

I entered the room where she was lying in that pale blue gown of the hospital looking weak but beautiful as always, an automatic smile appeared on my face seeing her. she was talking to Laksh and Ragini.

"Laksh mujhe Swara se akele meine baat karni hai" I said gaining the attention

"Acha thike hai hum bahaar hai" Laksh said patting my back and Ragini cupped Swara's face and they both left the room.

"Sanskaar tum thike ho?" Swara asked as soon as they were out

"You had a misscariage" her eyes widened, and at that time I realized what I have blurted out.

Edited by __nidhi__ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res Nidhi dear. 😊
Unresed. 😃
OMG! It was such a heart breaking chapter! 😭 My poor SwaSan. 😭 Now that Swara also came to know about her miscarriage, what will be her reaction? 😕 😭 And the person with whom Sanskar got bumped, hope she's not any important character? 😕 Can't my SwaSan so broken. 😭 Update soon dear. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
it was an emotional update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome...
So saddd...
Swara had a miscarriage...
Its really sad...
Love
Moumita
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Nidhi,

Discovered the story just now. Will read a bit later. Please PM me.

-Dyuti

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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow beautiful update and very emotional...The care and concern of sanskaar inner confusion has been portrayed beautifully...loved the way he was fighting his inner demons..sad to hear they lost the child...
Wonder how swara will take this shock...look forward to read more as this cliff hanger is a killer itself. ...

Wonder how he will fight to make his angle better...

Waiting raz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh god...poor swasan..

Who was the mysterious girl??
She has to do something with swasan
..

Thanks
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Nidhi, at last came to read your story.It's beautiful 😊 Hope Swasan can come out of their grief of losing their unborn child.

Love,
Dyuti

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