Pyar vs zidd! Kiski hogi jeet Swasan ss - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Nice concept waiting for next update n plzz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3
Swara- mom sanskar
Sanskar- mein idhar hoon Swara
Swara turns around and sees sanskar with open arms. She ran and hugs him tightly. Saahil sees this with shocked face.
Sanskar- Tum theek hona Swara
Swara- tumhare hote hue mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta tumhare pyar ne mujhe zinda rakha warna mein to
Sanskar- tumhe kuch nahi hota Swara. Ab tum aa gayi hona tumhara pati tumhe kuch nahi hone dega
Saahil- pati
Swara- oh god mein to bhul gayi introduce karana sanskar inse milo ye Saahil inhone meri jaan bachai aur saahil ye mere pati sanskar.
Both of them shake their hands.
Sanskar- thank you so much for saving my Swara
Saahil-it's ok I have to go ek important kaam hai
Saahil drives to his home and breaks things and starts shouting- nahi esa nahi ho sakta mein Swara se pyar karta hoon mein use har haal mein paaunga.
Precap- swara reunites with the family.some light moment between Swara and sanskar with raglak romance.
Edited by Nivijo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome update
Swasan meeting 😳
Sahil 😡
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Chapter 4
Everyone gets seated in the house. Sharmishtha and dadi bring tea for everyone. After having tea mm people start to leave.
Dp- acha Shekar ji hum nikalte hain sanskar laksh tum dono swaragini ke sath yahi ruk jao.
Sanlak- ji.
Swara goes and hugs her mother and cries
Swara- I am sorry ma meine aap Sabko kitni takleef di.
Sharmishtha- Shona mat ro koi baat nahi acha chal apne room mein jaake fresh hoja. Ragini tum bhi jao
Swaragini- ji maa
Swara's room
Sanskar- Swara tumhe pata nahi mein kitna dar gaya tha. Mujhe laga ki mein bhi tumhare sath aa jaun.
Swara- mujhe kuch nahi hota humne zindagi bhar sath rehna ka waada kia hai sanskar aur
She puts her hands over his neck and pulls him closer and says Swara sanskar maheshwari apna waada nahi todti mr Maheshwari samjhe.
Sanskar- samajh gaya.
Ragini's room
Ragini- dekhiye na laksh sab kuch theek ho gaya hai. Sab log kitne khush hain.
Laksh pulls her closer to him and says- haan Ragini Swara ke wapis aane se bhai ke jaan me jaan aayi hai.
He slowly kisses her and she blushes
Ragini- laksh hume chodiye koi dekh lega
Laksh- haan Dekhne do mein kisi se nahi darta
Ragini- dadi maa aap
Laksh- wo dadi ma
Laksh turns around and sees no one. Ragini starts laughing.
Laksh- mein tumhe nahi chodunga
Ragini- pehle pakadiye to sahi phir chodne ki baat kariye
Both of them run around the room. Laksh catches her and says- ab bach ke kaha jaogi janeman
Both of them get intimate.
Precap- swasan and raglak return to mm sujata does not let them inside. Small moment of swasan.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Guys I am planing to discontinue the story because I am disappointed with such low comments. I feel no one is liking my story so I'm discontinuing it.😭
Edited by Nivijo - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Hey plz continue it..
Its so sweet
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Plzz continue it, Nivi 🥱
Love,
Swara
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Baccha continue it..🤗its awesome...
Tani di😉

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