FF-- Kahani Nafrat, Takrrar aur Pyaar Ki (CH-5 ON PG-15)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah
Heart touching update.
The flash back was nice..
Ragini and that child had a soul connection.
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm

thanks... glad u liked it...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana
short yet amazing ..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: sudhi03
superb update😊
waiting for the next

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Nice story dear..pls pm me if possible for the next updates...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Aahana133
Superb part

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Pinkyshrma
nice track !!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik
when will u update your stories
plzzz continue them
waiting... to read them
its quite long time u haven't updated

i know its quite long...

will update soon...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven
wow 👏
i just dont know what to say for this piece 👏
frankly speaking m arsh ariya n swasan fan only 😳
or jab mene ye story ka pm open kiya link par click kiya tab pata chala its ragini's story
tabhi socha tha ki me ye story read nahi karungi 🥱
but fir socha ek bar padhne me kya jata he lets read it once
but when i read the prologue mujhe part 1 padhne ka mann hua or jab part 1 read kiya to part 2
its just wow ek dam boleto rapchik concept he
i totally loved it
too good
ragini ka connection us baby se its simply beautiful
karan ka dard its too much or agar wo badla lena chahta he to idont think ki kuch galat he
kyuki lakshya se gunah hua he bhale anjane me hi heavy rain me is tarah drive karne ko kisne kaha tha
uski ek galti se kisika ghar ujad gaya
ek chota sa bacha bin maa ka reh gaya
kisika pyaar usse chin gaya
ragini ko bohot alag dikhaya he is story me n m loving her character here
continue soonish plzzz
n thanks 4 pm
n m sorry m late i was busy isliye pm bhi open nahi kiya 😳😊
n pm me next time too for this story

glad u liked it...

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CH--3

Scene starts with determination on Karan's face to destroy the Maheshwari Family.

Scene in baadi---

As it was morning Dadi came to Ragini's room to wake her up. She sees her sleeping on the chair.

Dadi- Laddo, wake up...

Ragini opens her eyes & looks at her.

Ragini- Dadi Maa...

Dadi- Why were u sleeping on chair?

Ragini- I dont know, when did i just slept on the chair.

Dadi- Okay now get ready & come for breakfast.

Ragini- Jii Dadi...

Dadi leaves from there. Ragini gets ready & go down. She sits with all.

She was still thinking abt the accident.

Shekher- Ragini...

Ragini- Haa, papa...

Shekher- Is everything fine?

Ragini- Yes... Woh i...

Just then post man knocks on there door.

There was a letter for Ragini. Dadi gave it to her. Ragini opens it.

Shekher- What is that Ragini?

Ragini- Papa woh... Its from XYZ Music Academy of Florida, they wanna me to train in there academy for 3 months. And they have sent me tickets too.

Dadi- What its a good news.. U shld go...

Ragini- But...

Dadi - No buts... U are going that's final...

Ragini- Okay... fine...

She goes to her room for packing.. And next day she left for florida..

Three months later---

It has been 3 months of Pooja's death. Karan totally dissolved himself in business. In these 3 months he has taken out history of each & every family member of Maheshwaris. Not just that, he had bagged some important projects which resulted in huge loss for Maheshwaris. In short he have made sure that Maheshwaris financial condition lays on crutches, so that when he wld play his last card they will be destroyed completly.

Scene in MM--

All were sitting & having breakfast. It was looking all normal but the ladies very well knew that there husbands are tensed because of frequent losses in there business.

Sanskaar- Bade papa, we have got notice from bank they have asked us to repay the loan, otherwise they can seize this bunglow from us.

All gets tensed hearing this & looks at DP. DP just walks up to his room. Annapurna goes behind him.

Scene shifts to Suryavanshi Villa,

Karan was in his room, looking at the file , which has each & every point abt every single person of Maheshwari house & ppl close to them (Gadodia's). His assistant came & gave him the file.He was turning the pages & his assistant was telling him all abt the persons. As he saw last page his eyes falls on a pic. That was of Ragini.

Karan-- Who is she? What is her relation with Maheshwaris?

Assistant- Sir she is daughter of Shekher Gadodia & his first wife. He tells him everything abt Ragini. And sir, from last 3 months she is in florida but her contract has been completed & she gonna return soon.

Karan nods , he asks his assistant to leave. Karan sit on chair. He was still looking at Ragini's pic.

He thinks- " How can someone love anyone like this that she was ready to sacrifice her every relation for just one man, who never loved her." I pity u Laksh Maheshwari... I pity u...

Just then his phone rings.

Man- Sir, Maheshwaris have got bank notice to repay there loan or there bunglow & business will be auctioned.

Karan smriks & says- ohh.. Okay. so what they aare gonna do..

Man- Sir, they are banking on a project near howrah. If they get it then...

Kara (angrily)- No they will not, i will not let them get this project... Never... he cuts the call...

Karan- I will get this project & then will buy there business & bunglow... My Mission Revenge will be accompanished... he burns the file of Maheshwari's... But he did not noticed that Ragini's pic was fallen out of file...

Screen splits on Ragini's pic which was fallen under Karan's chair...

So how is this chapter...