Attraction , Crush or Love ???~ RagLak~ chapter 4 on Page 8

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MAHIRA KHAN

@Mrs.KimTaeHyung

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Posted: 9 years ago

Prologue

Have you ever wondered , how does it feel when your first ever crush in life or your crush at first sight says the 'He' loves you? And that too in text message or in 'WhatsApp'.

Isn't it weird???

Its Raglak. Suggest me the Name of this SS.

It's a small story which will be less than 10 shots.

Love
Mahira

Chapter 1 - My FiRsT MeEt

Chapter 2 - My CrAzY TaLkS

Chapter 3 - My FiRsT CoNvErSaTiOn

Chapter 4 - MeEt HiM AgAiN

Edited by princess1222 - 9 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 9 years ago

I like the plot...
a swasan fan will want swasan nd raglak fan will want raglak...I just post it in two version...rl nd ss

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting :)

Since we're talking about Crush turning in to Love, I guess this would do good for RagLak. (I wouldn't mind SwaSan) but this one has RagLak feel in it.

Waiting for you to continue.

Love,

Sakura

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MAHIRA KHAN

@Mrs.KimTaeHyung

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you for your lovely comment.

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-Claptrap-

@-Claptrap-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

RagLak plzzz...

I wont mind if its SwaSan...but plzz RagLak...😳

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Could you make it somewhat parallel b/w both couples?! Just saying bcuz both fandoms would like an SS on their couple na?😊

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MAHIRA KHAN

@Mrs.KimTaeHyung

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you guys for your lovely comments . I will make this as Raglak and I'm gonna paste same story with Swasan in the lead role in other post .

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MAHIRA KHAN

@Mrs.KimTaeHyung

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 1 - My FiRsT MeEt

Ragini's POV

Scene 1 - My Home

It was my friend's sister's marriage tomorrow. The marriage was at night. Seriously night marriage???? I was 102% sure that my Dad will not allow me. But still I asked my dad and I knew the answer would be no. But to my surprise Dad allowed me. Let me pinch myself and make sure that I was not dreaming. Aah!!! It pained. That means I am not dreaming. I started dancing. My Dad gave me -Am - I - Gone - Mad - look . I stopped dancing and hugged my Dad and kissed on his cheek. I thanked him and ran to call my friend to say that I am coming tomorrow for marriage. I was so happy for going to a 'Night Marriage'. It's my first outing with my friends at night. I couldn't resit my happiness. Due to this happiness, I couldn't sleep properly.

Scene 2 - Next day

Today is Sunday and my friend's sister's marriage. I was so happy that I didnt see the time which was at 6 am. And when I saw , I was like -OMG!!! Its 6 and I woke up so early. I was shocked at myself for getting up so early. Otherwise my sweet Mom should wake me up for my college. It may be becuse of my anxiousness that I woke up so early .

Scene 3 - Night..

It was night and I was ready to go for the marriage. I dressed up in Karachi style of salwar. My dress was simple with heavy embroidery in my shawl which made my dress look 'grand' .

I came down and bid goodbye to all and ran near the car so that I won't reach late.

Scene 4 - Marriage hall...

I reached the marriage hall. It was beautifully decorated . I saw my friends and we even clicked selfies together. We enjoyed a lot.

Suddenly it statrted raining. Rain!! Huh!! . I hate rain. I got my driver's call saying that he won't be able to come as his daughter has got high fever. I said him to take her hospital and take care of her . He was tensed for me because it's late , the clock set at perfect 11 pm. I said him , I will be okay and will take a taxi or auto to home. He thanked me and kept the phone.

I saw my friend Uttara calling her brother 'Laksh' to pick her up. But her brother declined her. I got so angry , so I called him and scolded him. I didn't even say my name. No!! Actually I forgot to say my name . I was busy scolding him. I was angry because she alone has to go to her home at this hour. He softly asked me to give my phone to her. I did as he said. He said something and cut the call immediately. I asked my friend what happened , to which she replied that her bro is coming to pick her up.

Later , after 30 min her bro came and picked her in his Mercedes Car. I was about to go to catch taxi but my friend called me . She asked me to come with her and her bro can drop her home. First I said no but later she forced me to come with her. So I went with her.

I saw him for the first time. He was in his night dress. His hair messed up. He looked like he got up from his sleep and came. He was so handsome that I couldn't take off my eyes from him.

I wanted to talk to him but I didn't knew what to speak. When I was about to say something , he spoke in between . Wow!!! His voice is!! Huh!!! I can't explain you. It was that awesome like!!! Can't explain!!! So leave it!!! Awww!! So cute his voice is. He was saying something. Ahaa!! I heard , he was saying that he was sleeping after a tiring day and you ( Uttara) called me to pick her.

I don't know why but I felt like asking him sorry. After gathering much courage I spoke

I - I am sorry for disturbing your sleep and scolding you without knowing the reason.

He - it's okay. Don't ask sorry. It was by mistak na... So it's okay.

Awww!!! He was so sweet and his words !! His words convey his respect to a girl and me. Me!!! I was so happy. That I did not realise what I said next

I - So save my number so that u remember me next time when I scold you.

Seriously!!! Did I just say next time that to a boy.

He laughed at this and saved my number as Ragini in his i-Phone 6s. My name looked soo nice in his phone.

He drop me first and then went to his home.
He was such a gentleman. I was continuously thinking about HIM.
My Laksh or My Lucky.

What did I just think??? My Lucky !!! Oh no Ragini!!! You are gone mad.

I slept thinking about him and a small smile appeared while I think about him.

To be continued...

Love ,
Mahira

Edited by princess1222 - 9 years ago