Swasan ff ** destined to be together ** note on pg 15 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Sadia dear,
Awesome update.
Sanskar has agreed to marry Swara to make her look bad and Victoria an angel, like that would be even possible.
Torture ahead for Swara, I guess. He will make her life hell before falling for her and wanting her.
Should I brace myself for upcoming updates?


Not really I am not planning on making anybody look bad neither Swara nor sanskar unless anyone wants me to
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Last three updates were amazing and so gripping...
Yes please add some negatively to help increase the swansan romance...want to see how sanskaar reacts to swara being appreciated by some else and wise versa...

Sound like the future chapters will be a treat to read...

Please pm me the next update...

Raz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Thank you for your comments and liking it

I had originally planned on making it really negative but reading you comments and couple messages I am not going to make it so negative for now with Victoria I am going to end her part but I'll bring in something else negative that maybe more tolerable than making either sanskar or Swara look bad.

Chapter 7

Swara agreed for marriage really quick but know she's thinking she might've been too quick to make her decision due to sanskar's behavior towards her. They have bumped into each other a few times and she tried talking to him but he doesn't talk to her. She feels there's something wrong. She feels restless day and night as if something really bad is going to happen to her or the family than consider her part of their family now. Everyone is happy with Swara in sanskar's family except sanskar himself and that's what matters the most. Swara wanted to go talk to sanskar but has been holding back because he doesn't want to hurt anyone but today she decides to go talk to sanskar and see what's wrong. If she has done anything wrong or worst thing of he's not happy with marriage?

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Victoria and sanskar at sanskar's house

Sanskar: Victoria I told you didn't I that don't come here if someone sees you here it'll be a problem plz try to understand
As he's talking to Victoria Swara comes there and hears them talking and stops herself from going on and listens

Victoria: I know baby but what can I do I can't resist I love you. You will get married to that girl in a few days anyways then we won't be able to meet so I want us to spend a little time together.

Sanskar: I love you too Victoria and what I am doing is just to get you. I am marrying Swara so I could get married to you after making her fall in papa's eyes

Swara is broken down by what she just heard and leaves from there quickly and no one notices her.

Sanskar: ok Victoria plz leave now I don't want anyone to come in and see you here than everyone is going to suspect.

Victoria: but sanskar

Sanskar: plz Victoria leave it's really hard for me to go through this marriage and if someone sees you with me everything will be ruined.

Victoria: ok I'll leave now but promise you'll come to meet me soon

Sanskar: ok plz go bye

Victoria: ok bye

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Swara is heart broken and shattered. Swara is thinking while crying

For the first time I had thought that I got true family love and real happiness in my life but why do I forget that my fate and luck aren't that good. I can't get happiness in my life. My fate has been bad since I was born that someone left me in garbage. How could I even think that I will get live in my life happiness in my life how could I? There is no happiness written in my fate no love nothing.

But she again, after crying her heat out for a while,picks herself up thinking everything will be ok and goes to meet Sanskar and whole family.

Swara starts talking to Karan while everyone is there including sanskar and Victoria

Swara: uncle you have called me your daughter right so for the first time if your daughter asks you for something will you do that for me?

Karan: what is it beta you are getting me worried why did you call us all here.

Swara: uncle plz promise me that you will not deny what I ask for

Karan: ask me for anything I will not deny your request I promise.

Swara: so then uncle get both sanskar and Victoria married
Everyone is shocked hearing this including sanskar and Victoria
Swara: uncle they really love each other I don't want to be the one who will separate two people who
love each other. I can't live happy with not only sanskar but anyone knowing that I was the reason two lovers got separated. I can't build my own happiness knowing that I have broken someone else's heart to get this snatched someone else's rights.

Karan: no Swara you are not snatching anyone's right sanskar had agreed to marry you himself with his own wish no one forced him.

Swara: I know uncle but first love isn't easy to forget and I can't live my life with man who has someone else in his heart

Karan: but how is it possible we have already started all preparations. More importantly I don't approve of this girl( pointing to Victoria) for my son.

Swara: uncle plz you had just promised me that you'll do what I ask for you can't back out of it either. Both of them love each other and they'll live happy together.

Sanskar taking the opportunity jumps in : papa if she's saying that she doesn't want to marry me then why force her to.

Karan: you stay quiet sanskar did you say anything to her

Sanskar: papa why would I say anything to her?

Swara: no uncle he hasn't said anything to me it's my own decision. I have decided that I am not going to marry him
All of the family member seem to get the point and they don't mind what Swara is saying and back her too.
Karan: ok as you all wish I give you approval of marriage but know one thing that I am not happy with Sanskar and Victoria marriage.

Sanskar is really happy and surprised too that Swara got his father to agree on a little while when they weren't able to get him to agree in a long time. He also is thinking now that if what he thought about her was actually true but then thinks that this might me another trick ok her to get him so he has to still be very careful of her. He gets out of his thought when his family congratulates him.

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Sanskar decides to go to her Swara's house and see what's going on in her mind

Sanskar: hi Swara I just wanted to say thanks to you that's why I came here

Swara: no need for it

Sanskar: how did you do this Swara I mean what is it that father likes you soo much and listens to you what kind of magic you've done on him

Swara: I haven't done any magic on him. He likes me because I am not two faced person something in front and something else in the back.

Sanskar: what do you mean?

Swara: you asked me a question and I answered it.

Sanskar: say clearly what you want to say.

Swara: in clear words I am not a person who agrees to marry a girl on face and goes behind her back and makes a plan to make her fall in the eye of people so he could marry his girlfriend.

Sanskar( surprised shocked): what are you talking about?

Swara: you Mr Sanskar Maheshwari I haven't seen such a low guy like you. If you had anything you should've said it once to me I would have said no for marriage but no you want to stab in the back right? You are a hero a superstar in everyone's eyes but you've become a zero in my eye. I always thought that you are a nice guy but you are so cheap.

Sanskar: that's it Swara don't cross your limits

Swara: oh I am crossing my limits so than what you were doing was that in limits? No Mr Mageshwari that was way out of limits. You were trying to play with a girl's emotions her life her everything.

Sanskar instead of feeling guilty of what he did in anger leaves from there and decides to get himself into marriage preparations so he doesn't have to think about Swara.
One the other hand Swara decides to get herself into work so she doesn't have time to think about anything else

Marriage preps are on at sanskar's house eveything is going smoothly and marriage is in 5 days. All the media is everywhere and mist coverage at this time is given to this weeding the most anticipated wedding if the year



How was it?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Nice update
So. Swara made a smart decision. ..
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nice update really liked it!!!
Thanks for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
awesome chapter. loved swara's decision. oh sanskar hope he starts seeing things straight soon. loved it. will wait for the next. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Hi.. Sadia..

Such an awesome update.. I lived Swara here.. Her boldness.. I just mesmerised in her character... Who wants to marry a man who has two faces.. Wonderful update..

With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice..
Read all the part at once..
loved it..

Nice concept..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Read all parts in a one go..
Superb concept..
Very well written
Awesome updates..
Story is going good
Update soon
Pls pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Awsum..loved it..continue soon b write lil more bigger plzz

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