Swasan ff ** destined to be together ** note on pg 15 - Page 2

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Asad08 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome awesome concept really like it
Plz pm the next part to me if possible
And continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you for liking it
If you want a PM please buddy me i will be more than happy to do that

Chapter 3

Instead of using Mr. Maheshwari I will be giving him name karan since its easier to spell 😆

Swara is doing really well at her internship. she has been able to get in new clients for the company and have met the old clients who are happy with her work. she has done a few audits under her supervisor, inventory for their clients, gotten letter ruling*, and have delayed the tax payment of the corps they work with. The owner of the company is also happy with her work. he doesnt operate from USA but would like to meet this intern who has done a lot in just a short period of time.

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Sanskar has been been spending some quality time with his family and girlfriend. he is enjoying his time away from the lime light without any tours. he is spending his time as a normal person not a celebrity. even though he has a separate home for himself most of the time that he is home he spends the time with his family.

Recently Sanskar and Victoria were together at a beach alone when his family also came there that they didnt know about. Victoria was wearing a bikini which karan was not so pleased with. he doesnt like victoria to begin with and seeing her like that made him not like her even more.

that day once again sparked the conversation of Sanskar marrying Victoria.since then sanskar has been forcing his mom to talk to his father, but words seem to go to deaf ears and karan doesnt budge at all. Sanskar has even threatened them that he will leave home never come back to mahashwari mansion but that doesnt seem to help either since karan knows that he loves his family dearly and will never go away from family.

one day after the argument he leaves and goes to victoria

Victoria: so what happened today it seems like you had another unsuccessful argument

Sanskar: yes

Victoria: i told you he doesnt like me i dont know what is it with me that he doesnt like me

Sanskar: dont worry i will get him to agree

Victoria: why cant we just marry. we are both happy your other family is happy he will have to accept me after our marriage

Sanskar: no i dont want to marry without his consent

Victoria: do that quick otherwise forget me i am tired of waiting

Sanskar: plz dont say that try and understand i am trying my best to get him to agree if you start saying like this i will not be able to do anything. i cant live without you plz dont ever say that u will leave me

Victoria: OK but please do it soon

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Swara is offered the job for doing really good job at the internship which gets her really happy

she comes home and shares the good new with them but instead of getting a congrats and they are happy for her which gets her happy that her family is happy in her happiness

Swara's happiness is short lives when she is given news from her father that they have gotten a good marriage alliance for her and they have already accepted it

Swara is really upset that her parents have fixed marriage alliance without asking her. she has tried to talk to her parent that she still has to complete her studies and all but there was nothing that could change their decision and they want to get her married as soon as possible

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at the office Swara is asked to go in the owner's cabin. he is specifically there to meet her.

Swara goes to the office and gets knocks on the door and she hears a thick male voice asking her to come in

Swara: hello sir

Boss: hello Swara i have heard a lot about you i am really impressed with your work. its really nice having an intern like you at my company.
plz dont call me sir i want this place to feel like home not a work place so dont call me sir i am karan Maheshawri and you can call me by my name

Swara: but you are my boss and older than me how can i call you by your name its disrespectful

Karan: ok if you dont want to call me by name name call me uncle but you cant call me sir though

Swara: ok i will call you uncle

Karan: ok beta can i ask you something

Swara: yes uncle why not

Karan: are you indian

Swara: yes
with that they spoke for a while about india before they had to leave for work

Karan left the office and was thinking about Swara: she is the kind of girl i always wanted for my son. simple, who respects other and know the culture. she is so innocent and also beautiful. i would definitely want her to marry Sanskar if i can get them to agree

he was feeling bad a while bad thinking about how he had to leave whole family in the middle of an argument once again on Sanskar and Victoria's marriage telling them he has to go away for couple weeks for business. now he is actually relieved meeting Swara thinking he had to meet a girl that he would like for his son.

Let me know how is it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome!!!!!! Eager to see how sanskaar and swara will meet and will they like each other or not
And seriously swara's family is so weird and they don't care about her feelings 😡
Thanks for the pm and continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Nice update
Eagerly waiting for swasan meeting. ...
Pls update as soon as possible. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi. Dear.

Another awesome chapter.. Soo Swara going get married is that proposal of Sanskaar or someone else..

Karan had meet his dream daughter in law..

Waiting for next..

With love...

Kam..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
interesting concept. sanskar is in love with Vic. and they both wants to get married. swara's marriage has been fixed too. and Karan wants swara as his daughter in law.I don't know how and when swasan will meet. I read 2 parts together and liked both. 😊 will wait for the next one.
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Hi. Dear.

Another awesome chapter.. Soo Swara going get married is that proposal of Sanskaar or someone else..

Karan had meet his dream daughter in law..

Waiting for next..

With love...

Kam..



Someone else for now 😊 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow loved part 2 and 3 update soon...
Please make swansan meet soon...

Raz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

thank you for liking it so far

i do have a question for you though do you like the ff the way i write i mean a few other fan fics that i have read they use more dialogs do you want me to use more dialog or is it good the way it is? plz let me know

Chapter 4

Karan has been going to the office every day to see how Swara is. he found her very good and even though she is not strong socially she strong minded if there is something wrong she will go against it and find solution for it. he is fully convinced that Swara is perfect girl for his son.

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Aditya is the guy that Swara's parents have chosen for Swara to get married to. abhay is his father who is Swara's father Tej's best friend.

Tej: yes of course she will be your daughter in law only no matter how much she denies.

Abhay: what if she takes some other step what is going to happen then

Tej: no she will not do anything she doesn't have guts to do anything like that. we haven't given her so much freedom that she even knows anything more than work, school and home. where is she going to go when she leaves us that's why she socially so weak because we never let her.

Abhay: Tej you are just good at cheap stuff right. you picked up this girl from pile of a garbage and now you will use her to get everything for you

Tej: of course what did we got her so old for. payed for everything of hers for so long. we have to get fruit of it.

Abhay: of course that's why you want her married to my son so you keep half her salary when she starts working when you didn't even pay a penny for her education.

Tej: well I got her the job where she making money to go to school otherwise she wouldn't even have been able to go to school

while they are having their chat here about past and future of Swara they are unaware of fact that Swara had actually come home and listened to everything they just said. Swara is broken down by everything she just heard but in corner of her heart she knows that if they hadn't gotten her from there she probably wouldn't even have been alive today. She also knows that she has no other place to go so she will have to bear with them for now, so she decides that she is going to play along with them until the right time comes for her to leave them.

even though both families are deciding to get Swara and Aditya married Aditya actually likes another girl. He even tried to convince his family to not get him married to Swara but they aren't listening to him either. Aditya leaves the house and gets married to girl he likes and bring her home. Aditya's family is really angry on his move and in anger blurt out to Aditya the dark truth about themselves that they sell girl and they would have done same to Swara. They have already gotten a hefty amount from people for her. Aditya is really hurt by the truth of his family and calls police to get them arrested.

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Swara is happy knowing the truth so at least know she has one less thing to worry about before she goes back to school.

Swara is officially an employee of the company and has access to more info about company. One day at the end of her shift she is going through the financial stamen of the company and finds something weird but can't spot it so she decides to have a closer look at it once she gets back the next day. Next day she comes in and takes a look at it again and finds that company has only 125 employees and rest are independent contractors but from company account salary is being paid to 130 employees. She brings it to the attention of manager who promises her that he will bring it to the attention of executives of company. Swara trusts him and leaves it where it is.

Sanskar even though he doesn't want to do anything at the time as he is unable to get his father to agree to marriage he is bound to contract and has to go on world tour and his first stop is USA. One day he is going to his place of concert he loses his way to his place and doesn't have a GPS and his phone is also dead and can't find his way back. he decides to stop and ask someone for help. He has stopped at an entrance of a college as it seems to him. The first car that comes toward him he waves to car to stop which it does. Car driver gets out of car to see what's wrong. Sanskar tells her everything and asks her to give him direction to get back. she gently replies that she's not from the area and doesn't know direction but has a GPS and can help him. As she's going to car to get GPS sanskar is thinking to himself that every girl "throws" herself at him when they see him but this girl seems like doesn't even seem know me. She comes back give him directions and is about to leave when Sanskar stops her

Sanskar: by the way I am Sanskar

Driver: Hi, I am Swara

Sanskar: Hi it's nice to meet you

Swara: nice to meet you too I am getting little late for my class will you plz excuse me

Sanskar: sure thank you for your help

Swara: you are welcome

Swara leaves and Sanskar is looking at her thinking she's kind of the girl that his father wants for him but brushes off his thoughts
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice update dear
So swasan first meeting ..
Waiting for next update. .
Ur writing style is nice dear...no need of any change ..when swasan comes u can add more dialogues for them

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