SUR NA SAJE - RAGLAK FF Part 18 updated PG 27 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good going so far! Would love to read more! Please do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Poor Ragini...possibility of something like this in the show is high!!! Good job Priya!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Priya,
Just finished reading all the parts and I am thoroughly hooked - a very plausible storyline and your writing is brilliant. Please do PM me of future updates.

Best,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
So nobody trusted Ragini and she had to leave.
Poor girl must have had a tough time all these years.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone...the third part is here


PART 3

MUMBAI 2016

She finally managed to reach the studio just on time, despite the heavy traffic. Raagini was admired in the industry because of her punctuality and meticulous attitude. She was professional to the core. She had learnt it in the hard way. The once emotional and sentimental Raagini had now almost become a statue of alabaster...sans any human feelings...or at least she projected herself to be so.

She started the last part of the work on her latest album "Swaraagini". The rehearsals started...the music, the chorus...and she drifted...

KOLKATA 2011

He asked her straight in her eyes "Why did you do this?"...her world tore apart. She looked at him and asked "Do you believe that I can do this?"

"It is not about my belief or disbelief...it is about the circumstances...everything is against you...my dear..." He replied exasperated.

"And you...are you against me?"...she asked desperately looking at him.

"See Raagini...my brain has stopped working...I would advise that you please apologise...and thing will calm down in a few days...and..."

"And what?...I will never apologise for anything that I have never committed...If I do then it implies that I have committed the crime"... "Is there nobody in the house who can really trust me?"

"But you do not have an option"...Lakshya replied irritated..."The elders of the house have decided that either you apologise or you leave...and I don't want you to go away"

"Lakshya" she replied slowly... "Its true I have no option"...the pain was evident in her voice "Unfortunately, the person whom I trusted the most, could not trust me when I need it the most...you are right... Indeed, I have no option...Please tell everybody that since I have no option I have decided what to do...by tomorrow morning"

Lakshya felt relieved...he felt that Raagini had ultimately calmed down...she would never leave him.

That very night, when the household had quietened, she packed her bag and left...she didn't know where she would go...but she had to...her parents had already threatened and disowned her at the hospital itself. With her self-respect and a small bag in her hand she embarked upon a new, unknown journey...

MUMBAI 2016

The recording ended...she was hugely applauded. This album would be a blockbuster as was predicted...but she know something was still missing.

Lakshya landed at the Mumbai airport and headed for his hotel. He had not yet planned, how he would meet Raagini...but he had too...too many questions...too many pent up emotions.

He remembered Raagini's interview...he just kept looking at her throughout and couldn't truly recall what she said...but the concluding part of the talk...made him numb

"Madam, what are the plans for your future?"

"Well I hope to do better work, do some amazing songs, win some more awards..." (she smiled)..."and try to spend some quality time with Sargam...my 4 year old daughter"...

To be contd...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww how sweet ragini has a daughter... nice update... make it long...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update
RagLak has a daughter how sweet

waiting for the next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.
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Daughter?

I want to see the next update soon...

Waiting eagerly...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Wow another awesome update oh wow she has a daughter and her and is so cute

So now Laksh wants to meet his daughter

Can't wait to see what happens when they meet

Please post the next part tomorrow thank you
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Great update
Eager to know what happens when they meet after so long.
Waiting for the next part 😊

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