Swasan TS jhoot nahi sach

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Hi guysss
It's me again.. Ganga...
I hve written another story Swasan Raglak...
I know last wala ka ending shocking aur painfull tha...
Par issswale ka kaisa hoya????
Read it... U'll know...
I'll give a storyline cozzz i'hve made some changes..

The characters are all ETF(police) officers.

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Sanskar-Laksh R brothers
( sons of Annapurna & Sujata
They are ACPs in ETF
Married)



SwaRagini R sisters
(daughters of Shekar & Sharmista
Research specialist & Technical specialist
Married)




Adarsh Mehta
(ACP
Chief & Leader of the team
Married to Parineeta)


Parineeta Adarsh Mehta
(ETF officer
Forensic specialist
Married to Adarsh)


Uttara Singh
(ETF officer
Newly joined
Assistant forensic specialist
Doesnt know abt Swasan & Raglak's marriage)



Kavita
(ETF officer
Newly joined
Media specialist
Has a big crush on Sanskar
Has joined the team for him but
Doesnt know abt Swasan & Raglak's marriage)

Adarsh, Parineeta,Uttara & Kavita work with swasan-raglak and they are collegues & friends

Uttara & Kavita had jst joined ETF and only know tht SwaraRagini R married but dont who are their husbands as they SwaRagini doesnt want any1 to say tht they maintain personal relationships while workking.

In offfice SwaRagini & Sanskar-Laksh maintain a strictly proffesional relation.

The story now..

HAPPY READING GUYSS...


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Part1

2 years...

Already 2 years sinece tht God Damned Day...

Thank God thoses women found her tht day and took her to the hospital

in her Blind luv for Laksh Ragini had broken all limits by pushing Swara in the river and tricking Laksh to marry her.
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Swara and I had to fake our marriage to take things into control..
to rectify ragini's mistake... It did take time par Ragini realised her fault and accepted her misdeeds infrnt if the family..

On Swara's saying the family gave Ragini a chance to show her love, care & dedication for our family... Knowing Ragini's truth Laksh ka toh duniya hi hilll gaya...


Par swara ke samjhane se he atleast decided to give his &Ragini's realtion a chance...


But tht day made us realise her real value in our life... or should I say made ME realised her real value in MY life... By then she was only Miss Swara Gadodia... But today she's Mrs Swara Gawdodia Sanskar Maheswari... Dont know why she wanted to keep her full name both married and unmarried surnames... Mrs SGSM ..
Thts wht we call her at work...Aur choti behan bhi kuch kaaam nahi... Mrs RGLM ... Aka Mrs Ragini Gadodia Laksh Maheswari...
Ye dono behane bhi naaa.Ek trailer toh dusri puri movie... Acha hi hua ki gharwalon ne dono behano ko kaam karne se mana nahi kiya... Warna mErA aur Lucky ka kya hota...


Anyway maine usske liye aapna pyaar realise kiya hamari jhoote drama ke beech... Swara ne bhi aapna pyaar samjha mere liye... Aur time waste kiye bina i told her abt my love
Vo itne asani se maan gayi...


aur hamari Shaadi... God .. must hve been the most best and happiest day of my life...Asali Shaadi... Simple tha with the only guests being our families... Swara uss bridal dress main kitni khoobsurat lagrahi thi... Hayyy itna ki pheron ke waqt main ussko itna ghur raha tha ki meri dhoti main hi aag lagi... Laksh ne dekha aur time par buja bhi diya... Sab kitna pareshaan ho gaye the... and U know wht..!! muhjko toh pata bhi nahi tha ki dhoti main aag lag gayi... They wanted to call off the marriage thinking abt all abshagun things... but kitna papar bellna para sabko patane main...




Today...

normal day in ETF headquaters...

All are present...[Swasan, Raglak,Adarsh,Parineeta,Uttara,Kavita]
Kavita has a crush on Sanskar and Swara knows abt it... and trusts Sanskar completely so doesnot say anything abt her marriage to Kavita...

all doing paperwrk.. the phone rings...

Adarsh: team we hve a case... do underworld gangs ke bich kuch zyada hi jagra ho gaya hai...!! they are firing in public places...!!!! we need to stop them frm hurting the common people... Got it everyone???


All: yess sir...


All get their weapons and all others necessary things and leave in two SUVs.. 1 has Adarsh-Parineeta,Uttara... 2nd has Swasan, Raglak & Kavita...

Though out the way Kavita is blabbering abt something or the other... no one is paying attention to her... After sme time they arrived at th shootoutplace... Bahot saare log gayal ho chuke the..!! they were all firing and killing the goons of both teams... Swara was able to fire and tht was enough 4 Sanskar not to worry abt her... Most of the goons were already dead... Only 3 were left... Thnkss to their bad luck and Kavita's careless attitute she was caught by one goon... the whole teams focussed on saving Kavita frm the bad boy... Unaware tht they were doing this to distract SansLak to kill them... Two goons were approching SansLak frm the back and pointing guns towards Them to shoot ... SwaRagini saw Tht and ran to prevent their bots frm the shot...

Seeing Swara falling Sanskar went mad and shot the 3 goons dead... Even Ragini was touched and had fainted.


They rushed the SUV to the hospital...and there SwaRagini's treatment started... A nurse came with the forms asking 4 a family member to sign them...

Sak: Aree .. ab ye form sign koun karega??? ..Dono ko toh chot laga hai.. Aur Behoss bhi hai...

Adarsh:Toh kya hua??? Sanskar Laksh tum dono sign karo aur...



They took , filled and signed the form before Adarsh could complete,,, Kavita were thinking hard why SansLak had signed the form...

After the treatment is over.. the doc comes out..and sees their worried faces

Ragini ko already hoss aagaya tha and was told abt Swara...And behan ka kya aasoonon main nikal raha tha
and Laksh was trying to control her... Seeing Laksh's concern for Her Uttara and Kavita understood who Laksh was to her...

Doc: Dnt worry Officers... Mrs Maheswari theek hai... goli bass unko chu kar nikal gaya... kuch meds hai vo time par de dena unko .. sab theek ho jaye ga... (the doc said looking at Sanskar)



All thnkked god 4 saving Swara... Kavita & Uttara in total shock abt wht the doc jst said... MRS MAHESWARI..???? ye kaise ho sakta hai???? Sanskar aur Swara married..???? Uttara who knew abt Kavita's crush 4 Sanskar felt vry bad 4 her...


Kavita's POV

Ye nahi ho sakta..!!! Sanskar sirf mera hai..!!!!! vo sirf mera hai..!!!!!!!! Swara tum ussko muhjse nahi chin paogi... Sanskar ko mere pass aana hi hoga... I WILL hve him... BY HOOK or CROOK... Samjhi tum...


and she left frm there...


The rest spent the remaining day with Swara in the hospital... Uttara was told abt Raglak & Swasan's story and marriage... they were damn laughing hearing abt Swasan's marriage incident .. Uttara called Kavita to enquire abt her and she said tht she's okii but wants to stay alone for sme time...


Days passed like tht with every1 having fun and Kavita too...

With a smile on her face she had perfectly faked tht she had accepted Swasan's marriage but inside her plan to seperate dem was already ready..!!!


One day...

Swara was alone going to shopping.. she wanted to surprise Sanskar... But on the way her SUV broke down...



Swara: Noo yaar.. ye sab aaj hi hona tha... main Sanskae ke liye gift lene wali thi aur bhagwan jii aapne hi mujhko ye gift de diya... and she kicked the tyre and got hurt herself..

bechari ab theek se chal bhi nahi parahi thi...


A boy who saw her came and offered to help her..

Boy: Hi.. i'm anshul.. I saw tht ur car broke down... and U hve got urself hurt too... aapko dekh kar lagta nahi ki aap gari chal paogi.. so do u want a lift???


Swara[ naa chahate hue bhi ] : seems like yess I will need it.. and i'm Mrs Swara Gawdodia Sanskar Maheswari .. Can u jst drop me at ETF headquaters.. plzz



The boy brought Swara to ETF headuaters on his bike... Sanskar saw them coming... and fumed as he saw Anshul helping Swara to get down his bike... he rushed and asked wht happened... Swara told him and said Anshul helped her...

Sanskar thnked him and carried riya in his arms inside to his cabin...


Sanskar: tum mujhko phone nahi kar sakti thi kya??? usse help kyun liya???


Swara: Woo .. mujhe laga ki aa busy hoge issi liye.!!!


Sanskar: thik hai par nxt time sirf aur sirf mujhko bolna.. u know naa i'm vry possesive abt U...


Swara: jee... pakka promise...


After some days. Swasan were in a hotel 4 sme case and Anshul was there too... He came and greeted them... He completely ignored Sanskar and kept talking 2 Swara.. Sanskar was having a bad time controling his temper.. so was Swara.. she thought'' YE FEVICOL KI TARAH KYUN CHIPKA HUA HAI YE..???''

To avoid any further complication Swara said tht she need 2 go to the washroom and ran frm there...Knowing her intentions Sanskar too left after doing the investigation quickly...And they returned to ETF office...


As dayss passed Anshul was nearly ever where where Swara used to go.. Swara did not tell Sanskar abt this cozz she didnt anted to stress him as there already was a very hectic and complicated case..

Kavita who noticed this started to poison Sanskar's mind abt Swara and Anshul having an affaire...

Sanskar did not believe her and so Kavita tricked Sanskar to come with him where Swara was ...[Swara was with Shree who forced her to come with them to make special arrangements as Laksh wanted to propose Ragini finally accepting his love for her..in a restaurent]

Seeing Swara making soo much of preps Kavita instigated Sanskar even more.. telling him tht she was doing all this 4 Anshul...

Sanskar decided to call Swara... He called him...Swara picked up..


Sanskar: kahan ho Swara???

Swara: vo main..!! haan Sharmila Auntie[Uttara's mom] ne mujhko ghar par bulaga hai .oh main bass vahin hoo... kyun...


Sanskar: Ooo .. Theek hai.. main tumko lene aa jaun kya??

Swara; Nahi nahi... i'll manage... dnt worry...[ in mind: sory Sanskar Laksh ne kasam diya hai varna main jhoot nahi boti aapse] and hanged


fOR SWARA'S BAD LUCK aNSHUL WAS RIGHT BEHIND HER WHOM SHE DIDNOT NOTICE


Sanskar left frm there with a killer look and

Kavita had an evil smrik there thinking'' ab tera kya ho kaalia..!! nahi nnahi Kallia nahi nahi Swara...!!! and she let out an evil laugh...

Sanskar was vry angry...Angry and went straight hme and tried to control himself...

he waited for Swara 2 return.. Swara returned late and as she entered Sanskar showered her with of questions... and directly asked her abt anshul...


Like this their coversation turned into a mahabharat battle...Swara was hard trying to explain but Kavita had soo much poisoned Sanskar that he didnt listen to her.. All this was being watched by 2 persons...


1st: Wow..!!!! Aapne toh kaamal kar diya ...ye dono toh ab paaka seperate ho jayenge...

2nd:Haan vo toh hai... Tu khush hai naa..???

1st: haan bhaiya .. main bahot bahot bahot hi khush hoon... Finally ab Sanskar mera ho jayega...

2nd: Tumari khushi main hi meri khushi hai Kavita...


thy recalled how they had planned all this to seperate swasan ... by making Sanskar believe Swara's having an affaire...


Kavita: Sach main Anshul bhaiya Swara ek number ki gadhi hai... Aapna pura routine muhje bata diya... And it simplified our lives in tracking her down...

Ans: haan .. vo toh hai...abhi chalo yahan se .. agar dono main se koyi bahar aagaya toh ham pakke jayenge.'
and they left...

Nxt morning..

Swasan were in bad mood and every1 saw tht...

Kavita continued to poison Sanskar's mind and Swara was now damn angry tht Kavita was going too near to Sanskar as he as giving Kavita more importance...

Days passed like tht with Swasan behaving like two stubborn kids in office... aur ghar par toh poucho hi mat...

One day..

there was sme investigation to do so Adarsh, on Raglak's saying, sent Swasan together to give them smetime and also to keep Kavita away frm them...

but the investigation turned all wrong.. that man had drugs and a gun with him and was threatening to shoot if he was not allowed to leave...

Sanskar tried to stop him so the latter shot him...

But once again was saved by Swara... But this time Swara was shot near her neck... Sanskar was damn angry 4 having allowed Swara to come with him... and reached the hospital which was 25 mins away in jst 10 mins breaking all road codes...

the entire team was informed abt this and they also rushed to the hospital... Swara was in the OT...


after smetime the OT's light went off and the doc came out...

Sanskar: Swara kaisi hai doc????

doc: well... I hve 1 gud and 1 bad news 4 u people... which one you guyss want first??

Sanskar:anyone doc.. plzz jaldi boley naa...


Doc: buri nws ye hai ki... Swarajee bach toh gayi par vo coma main chali gayi hai.. the bullet had touched the neck so bahot risk bhi tha... [ every1 except Kavita were totall shocked and sad with this...and Ragini ka toh roo roo kar bura haal already tha ki this news fell like a bomb on her] par gud news ye hai ki Mr Maheswari aap papa bane wale ho...


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Sanskar: Kya..?? Main... Main papa bane wala hoon...!!!! Par iss news se jo sabse zyaada khush hui hogi o toh coma main hai..!!!!




Laksh: Doc... Swara comma se itne time uth jayegi???




Doc: pakka toh nahi bol sakthi hoon par this I cannot say... par aap log fikaar mat kijiyen Mrs Maheswari and unke hone wale baby ka ham log theek se dyan rakhenge...




saying this the doc leaves to complete sme formalities...


Sanskar and the Others did not know how to react to these 2 news..!!!1 wheather to be sad ki Swara coma main hai ya to celebrate her pregnancy news...⭐️⭐️


Kavita ke pairo ke niche se tho zammen hi khisak gayi Swara ke pregnancy ke bare main sunkar... But after sme mins reflection she decided to use this against Swara it self...


Kav: Swara itni girr sakti hai maine ye kabhi socha bhi nahi tha... Vo maa bane wali hai aur vo bhi kissi aur ke bache ki...



everyone got angry at Kavita for dis accusation😡😡😡



Ragini: Kavita..!!!!!!!! tumari himmat kaise huyi?? Hamare Swara ke bare main aisa bolne ki..???? Lagam do aapne muuh ko...


Kav: bura laga par yehi sach hai... poucho Sanskar se... Sanskar tumne khud dekha tha naa ki Swara Anshl se milne ke liye tumse jhoot bol rahi thi naa...

here all were to control their anger...


Sanskar: [ not being able to listen more] sach khana tumne Kavita... koi insaan itna kaise girr sakti hai???? Gussa aaraha hai mujhe aapne aap par ki maine iss ladki par bharosa kiya... tum sach theek bol rahi ho...


Kavita ke maan main toh laddhoo phut rahe hai ye sab sun kar...


Sanskar: tum jaisi khatiya ladki main aaj se pehle kabhi nahi dekha hai...!!!!!!!!!!tumhari himmat kaise hui muhje aur Swara ko dur karne ki kosish karne main...!!!! tumko sach main laga ki I will believe U and not MY WIFE...!!! plzz give me a break... Swara ne mujhe pehle hi sab bata diya tha... uss raat jab tum mujhko restaurent le gayi thi aur jab main ghar lauta tab Laksh ne mujhe call karke sab bata diya tha abt Swara helping him to propose Ragini...!! Ussne muhje aur tumko dekh liya tha restaurent ke bahar... then I planned with Swara to fake tht fight uss raat ko... cozz maine tumko aur anshul ko pehle hi bahar dekh liya tha... Mujhe aur Swara ko fight karte dekh bahot acha laga naa tumko... par ham dono ne tumari aur anshul ki saari baateyen bhi sun liya tha... Sharam nahi aati tumko .. u used ur brother 2 seperate me frm my wife...!!!! Shame on u Miss Kavita...Main Swara ko aapne se dur nahi jaane dene wala ...SAMJHI TUM


FLASHBACK

Sanskar enters in the house... and remembers his and Swara's phone conversation..abt Swara lieing 2 him.. On top of tht Tht Anshul was there..!!!!!!!!!!! NO... Swara will never cheat him offcourse...He knew tht..toh phir ussne jhoot kyun bola???At tht time his phone started ringing.. without looking who it was he picked..

Caller.: Bhai... Laksh bol raha hoon.. plzz Yaar Ragini ko mat batana ki main ussko propose karne wala hoon.. plzz I want to surprise her.. Issi liye toh main Swara ko aapne saath restaurent layahoon 4 Her to help me... plzz Bhai.. maine Tumko aur Kavita ko restaurent ke bahar dekh liya tha... Pata nahi kyun Kavita ne tumko mere surprise ke bare main bata diya i wanted it to be a surprise for Ragini and the family...


Sanskar: [ he was shocked with this...and his cop mind started assembling all the pieces of the shattered puzzle infront of him...abt Kavita] Acha.. ye baat tumare aur Swara ko chor kar issko pata hai??


Laksh: Well aur sirf Uttara aur Kavita ko..!! maine Dono ko bola hai ki Ragini ke mind ko divert kar ke uss ko yahan restaurent main lane ko... kyun sirr???

Sanskar: kuch nahi bass aise hi.. Lucky gud luck... Aaj hi propose kar lena Adarsh sir ki tarah 6 mahine mat laga lena okiii...[he said by now he had processed everything happening with him and Swara]


Sanskar to himself... so I was right.. meri Swara aisa kabhi nahi kar sakti..!!!! toh phir Kavita ne aisa kyun kiya??? pata lagana parega.. he informed Swara abt all wht Kavita did and Laksh's call through messages.. and they planned to act to fight to know why Kavita was doing tht,... so when Swara returned they acted like fighting with each other as Sanskar had already seen Kavita and anshul standing near a window...


then they had also listen to Kav-anshul's talks and came to know tht they were siblings and wanted to separate Swasan...

they decided to cont the drama so tht Kavita doesnot anything more dramatic to complicate their lives further more...

Kavita was shocked on hearing tht and angry abt the failure of her plan ...and the rest had a '' i'm goona kill you 4 this''look


and Laksh directly gave her a ''Get out else i'll literally kick you out of here ''look...


Kavita said: nahi Sanskar tum sirf mere ho sirf mere ... aur isske liye Swara aur usske bache ko maarna hoga... I'll kill them...both of them...

and entered Swara's room where she was lying and Kavita picked a pair of scissors and rushed to stab Swara..Shocked.. but Ragini , Laksh & Sanskar were quick enough to stop her and protect Swara and the baby's life...


Adarsh & Parineeta arrested Kavita under attempt to murder and conspiracy charges and anshul too was arrested 4 conspiracy against ETF officers charges...They were all determined to get her sentensed 4 trying to seperate Swasan and try to hurt her and the baby too... Parineeta and Uttara were also disgusted with Kavita... Laksh went to bring something to drink 4 Ragini & Sanskar knowing tht they had no intention to move away frm Swara so soon...


Sanskar & Ragini only were in the room... they looked at the monitor where they could see Swara and the baby's heart beat...

Sanskar placed his hand on Swara's stomach and said

Sanskar: Hi baby..!!1 this is ur Dad.. pata hai i'm soo happy ki tum hamari zindagi main aane wale ya wali ho... par baby dekho naa aapki mama aapke Papa se gussa ho gayi hai... Plzz bolo naa ussko ki vo jaldi se uth jaye...


Sanskar could not stop his tears now and started crying...Ragini tried to calm him par koyi faida nahi... Suddenly Rags noticed a movement in Swara's hand.. She was not too sure abt wht she saw so she rubbed her eyes and.. WHT THE HELL..!!! Swara did move her hand..Shocked she informed Sanskar and rushed to tell this to the docters...Ragini litterally dragged tht docters to Swara's room...

After examination the doc said tht Swara was no more in coma and tht was a miracle which just happened...and tht maybe their prayers worked more better than meds.. and Raglak , Adarsh-Parineeta hugged eachother... bechari Uttara ko koyi nahi mila toh ussne Sanskat ko hi hug kar diya... After realising wht they have just done all splitted immediately... the too couples were heavily blushing...


after someime Swara was fully awaken and told abt Kavita's doings... she was angry at her 4 this.. but when she heard the news of her pregnancy , usska gussa toh jaise bolo ki choomantar ho gaya...thinking abt her baby... no no no their baby who's growing inside her...

After recovering fully, Swara was brought home..Treated as a princess by everyone...

6 MONTHS...

How fast they jst flew away... no one realised...
Soo many things had changed... now Raglak were now happy married & in luv wuth eachother...


Today its Swara's godbaraai... all were vry happy ...
All enjoyed the ceremony and dancing singing...


The ceremony was nearly over when Swara started having labour pains...
Still in the functions dresses they all rushed Swara to the hospital who was litteraly YELLING out of all the voice...



Tht day she gave birth to a sweet little cute baby girl...
After Swara and the baby was tranfered to the ward .. All the team approache the craddle in which the baby was..

Sanskar: hay kitni swt hai...nose aur cheek Swara ki tarah hai par eyes ar lips mere jaise naa..!!!

Laksh:Nahi Bhai...!!! nose Swara aur cheek Ragini ki tarah hai par eyes par lips aapne Chachu ki tarah hai..!!! mere jaise tere jaise nahi... Samjha...


While Sanskar-Laksh were busy discussing abt whom the baby looked like..
Uttara took advantage of it and held tht baby in their arms... only to be disturbed by Adarsh-Parineeta who were also waiting 4 take the baby...



All of a sudden Ragini,who was sitting by Swara's side, fainted & the docs were immediately called...Laksh and the rest were really worried ..

The doc exaimned here and said..

Doc: Mr Maheshwari ab sirf ek laddhoo se kaam nahi chale gaya... ab toh do ladhoo chahiye muhjhe...!!!


They were not understanding wht the doc meant..

Doc: Aree aap abhi bhi samjhe nahi... Aaj toh aap sirf Mausha[looking at Sanskar's look] ya chachu bane ho.. Par 8 mahino main aap bhi papa banoge...!!!!!!!!! Congatutionss Mr Maheswari... Mrs Maheshwari is expecting...



All were just too happy with tht news... Kitna lucky day tha.. Swara ki godbharrai , phir delivery aur ab Ragini ki pregnancy news...
They all thought abt the happiness present in their lives and were looking forward to even more happiness,...

All thought tht the arrival of Swasan's baby has been soo aupsious 4 them so...
The little angel was named Pari Sanskar Maheswari...
The angel who brought gud news in their lives ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




THE END
Edited by SanaHolic - 9 years ago
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soo thts it..
hpe you guys will like it...
do reply me back saying how it is...

thoses who hve nt written my first story plzz do read
here is the link

Edited by SanaHolic - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...
Dam!! Kavita and Anshul...
Bichare Swasan..

Dont tell me sanskar will again misunderstand swara and about the baby??

continue soon..
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Nice
Waiting for your next update
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing. ...
Please continue soon. ...
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thnku soo much for the lovely response...
i hve posted the nxt part..
do chek it...



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