SwaSan FF - The Thunderbird update pg 15 - Page 3

Love it...

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

RP is not dead its the only thing I can tell you😆 glad you likes the twist and back story, I was worried if I spent too much space on DP-Shekhar but it was necessary. Your hope, we will see😛 RagYa are set in stone no matter how much crap they pull.

That Tara nickname just happnd. I like it too.

Thanks for reading Nita.

Wow this is really interesting I have personal fascination for dp as villain once upon a time when this show has just started I had hoped that dp will be an interesting villain of the show the day when laksh mentioned about sanskar for the first time my hope had increased sanskar entry and him thinking dp killed kavita more increased my hope but then my hope was crushed brutally by illogical tracks which don't make any sense this story can fullfill my hope of seeing dp as villain and sanskar as an angry vengeful a tormented soul who is seeking justice for the injustice happened with him . If the person watching TV is sanskar the characters are turning out to be just like I had once dreamt them to be in the initial days of the show . I think sanskar will not be dark he can be witty rude arrogant but not exactly what dark means. The burn scar in his hand (assuming the person watching TV is sanskar) gave me a feeling of some brutal extreme level of injustice which he had to go through maybe because of kavita fiasco Adarsh Pari's dialogue too gave me a feeling that dp is extremely dominating which again pointed towards dp as a pshyco spine chilling villain . so as I was saying if sanskar is a dark character he should have not only been present at the function but also be the new mastermind of centaur the adulterate medicine business his family is running but he is not only absent from the function but also away from family and wants to ruin them. so he can be really rude and arrogant but he will be really good at heart which swara will realise slowly

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Res!!

Riya!!! And Leki!! I am so excited to read this! Thank you Leki for the PM!! I'll unres once I read after work and can write my 2 cents worth! Have a fever ridden brain too so that you have to give discount for when I blab!

Unres:

🤗 What a start! Of Thunderbirds and Centaurs and other such fascinations all woven into a very gritty and modern, yet compelling modern day setting! Lovely! Riya- I always knew that if you wrote something it would be fabulous- could easily tell from our DK exchanges and this concept by Leki and execution by you promise so much, I am very excited.

I love how you have crafted this world of a pharmaceutical giant but effectively one of suspect means to achieve his ends. This Durga Prasad is so commanding and oh wow- Shekhar as a fist using henchman 😲- I like it that he has a role like that!

I am just loving the layers I see here. Starting from the fate of the honest but doomed Avik Das to the way the truth behind the Centaur empire is hinted at, the later interplay between all the "children" and then the man at the end with the burnt hand 👏. I can sense a lot peeling back to come to reveal a lot more interesting facets and twists along the way.

Also, coming to the main thing that will always keep me gripped to the story- Sanskaar Maheshwari- I will ignore the comments about it being Gul-esque 😆 as I don't think you will go that way too much but a dark and dangerous Sanskaar I am all for!! 😃 Already this has the hallmark to allow much scope there and I cannot wait for threads to start being drawn in on later chapters to see where they intersect and where things are going to start to tear!

Oh and the employee Swaraj Bose- Sharmistha's first husband I assume and Swara's father? I see my very dear Lakshya ji here fancies himself a stud? 😆😆 I wonder where that inspiration came from?! 😉 So RagYa are from Day 1 fixed- me loveee that!!! 😆. Debar-Bhabhi crap cannot be stomached by some of us! Ragini is so impressed by Roadside Romeo- it made me chuckle 😆. Also liked the mini glimpses to the rest, particularly Swara 😃 And do I spot Leki's role here in giving Adarsh and Pari a relatively "meaty" part? 😆 With finesse too (which I knew I could expect from you!) you've built up the Kolkata scene so well.

Overall- LOVED the start and am very eager to read more! I'm sorry if this is all scrambled and hope it makes sense! Blame the fever and headaches and endless plate spinning multi tasking ongoing at present!

Lots of love to you both,

Shru xoxo

Originally posted by: DivineDarkness

Perks of staying away from twitter 😉 I was upset and this is how my bitiyaa cheered me up😳😳 Aww my kids☺️

Gulish!! I swear yar I din't give her any Gulish idea.. infact this female knows I hate those... 😡

Ah you know my true love 4 AdRi how will I sideline them in my own idea 😆 Just wait for RP😈😎

That name Swaraj Bose was such a give away should have comeup with something else🤢 Riii😆

This story is TBH Ri's I just had some minor role in it.. ie, if something goes wrong ask her not me😈

Super promising start ...love it ! 😃

Read tne first update and i want more

Originally posted by: MusicMyLife.

Res I'm one lazy reader 😳
can't promise when I'm gonna unres 😊

wow ri!! the concept sounds interesting & i really liked the way u wrote the introduction & also swara's entry tht was cute!! looking forward to the nxt part :))