Ragya ss- Mere dilki malkin part21 up PG 47 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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U increased my curiosity ...
Awesome yaar...
Waiting!!
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Too good yaar thanks for pm am waiting for update ;-) ;-)
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Thanks for reading and I will update tomorrow
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hi everyone sorry for late update and thanks a ton for reading this ss -

Part -2

Ragini comes out of the washroom wearing her new modern saari, on seeing her laksh's jaw fell

L-Oho! Wese iss pink sari mein gulab ki tarha dikhti ho tum

R- bachke rahiyega iss gulab mein bahut saare kante h... Aapko lagjayenge aur gehra ghav denge (with a sarcastic smile) Buri h muhobat, muhobat buri h, Kahe ja raahe h kiye ja rahe h ...(n leaves)

Laksh too quickly freshen's up and goes down and saw ragini sitting on Dp's chair

R- Papji! Ab hum iss ghar ki malkin h to hiss kursi par khana bhi hum hi khayenge h na

DP- hmmm (and he starts moving and laksh's blood boils)

L- rukiye Papa

Laksh goes to the chair on which Ragini is sitting and turns it so that R faces him and keeps his hand on the handles, bending so as to look directly into her eyes...

l- Ragini!! Utho..

r- nahi uthenge, Hum iss ghar ki Malkin h

L (standing straight)- Tumhare paas 2 option h A) uth Jao aur B) uth jao

R-AAp kon hote h humein 2 option dene wale hum malkin h iss ghar ki samjhe

L- Kyun! Tumne bhi toh koi option nahi choda h mere liye koi option nahi choda ... Tum mujhe Divorce nahi doogi yahi kaha thaa na tumne so mein toh tumhe phir bhi option de raha hoon sharafat se uthjao

R- Nahi uthenge

L( takes a deep breath)- I knew it Option b.

Laksh pics ragini up in his arms

R- Kya kar rahe h chodiye humein

L- tumhine option B choose kiya h, I cannot help it

He makes her sit on a chair near his own chair

L- papa bethiye..

Laksh tries to sit but Ragini stops him.

R- Laksh rukiye

L- kya hua

R- aaj se ghar mein sabko khana aap paroseinge

L- Aur tum kon hoti ho yeh kehne wali

R- Malkin , Iss ghar ki SAMJHE

L- Toh theek aaaj se mein tumhara main naukar so, pls Malkin ji aapki har demand yanha rakhiyega

He picks up a knife and places it on her neck. Looking directly into her eyes.

L- Maa papa pe baat nahi jaani chahiye

R-Door door door hataiye ! Papaji dekhiye inhe keh deejiye

Dp- laksh yeh kya battamizi h ...

L- Sorrry Papa! Well , no issues kahana serve kar raha hoon tumhe

( laksh removes the knife and starts serving ragini when he notices her shivering in fear and she folds her arms to wrap around herself, as if supporting herself...)

Laksh fills a glass of water and passes it to Ragini

L- lo peelo

Ragini immediately gets up on hearing his voice and fear and tension due to the torture given by laksh was still clearly shown on her face.. seeing her like this Laksh's heart pains .. he is himself confused y but still it does

R- nahi!! (gets up with a jerk) humein kuch nahi chahiye...(fumbles) hum.. hum.. jarahe h ..ap.. apne kamre mein

Laksh holds her hand tightly and pulls her back making her sit back now ragini is sweating..

L- Biwi!! (pulls her hand ) AAo betho (makes her sit) malkin jee bina khana khaye toh mein aapko nahi jane doonga aur aap hi ne mana kiya na ki aap ko divorce nahi chahiye, abhi hi toh papers bhi jala diye aur phir kya puri life mujse darti rahoge , yehlo paani peelo ( makes her drink)

Ragini now calms down and he resumes serving her ..

Da- Aree wah je h toh mahre ko chahiye tha Mahri poti thaat se bethe aur Damadji use parosein

L- ohoohoohoo ! Ragini baby dekho dadi aayi h, tumhari, Dadi most welcome Aaiye apna tahreef ka tokra layiye..

( show her a place near ragini)

L- birajiye na

(Dadi takes her place and laksh serves everyone)

Ap- kaki sa! Pata hota ki aap aarahi h toh kuch khana aur banwalete

Da- aree koi na kal banwalena

L- kyun aapke teeye ki baithak h ..

R- laksh! Kya battamizzi h yeh

Laksh takes a piece of chapatti dips it in dal and feeds Ragini

L- Tit for Tat! Tumhe toh bahut aache se pata hoga na

Dp- laksh1 yeh konsa tareeka h ragini aur kaki sa baat karne kya

K- papa inse poochiye kyun aayi h yanha.. dadi aaj k liye humari mehman h, toh theek h ek kaam karte h dinner k baad aap mein aur ladoo Ice cream khate hue aapko Baadi drop kardeinge

R- dadi kahein nahi Ja rahi h

L- aap sab khana mat rookiye kyunki mein aur Ragini aaj bahut saari baatein karne wale h.. aur tum bhi khaoo ruko mat (feeds ragini ), Tumhari dai ko mein zada der bardasht nahi kar sakta!

Well so, Mrs. Maheshwari2 option h aapke paas A) aapni dadi ko baizzat ghar bhejdein

B) aapni dadi ko baizzat ghar bhejdein

Par iss bar 2nd option mein ek call jodhpur dad ji k paas jayega..

On hearing this ragini who was eating peacefully started coughing ..

Laksh immediately made her drink water..

L- feeling better.. Well option A or B

R- a, dadi maa aap yanhan aaye humein bahut aacha laga ab aap jayiye hum apna dhyan rahlenge aur phir maa, Chahiji, Bhahbhi aur sab log h na yahan toh aap chinta mat kijiye,.

Da- Par ladoo yaa logon par mahre ko ab ratti bhar bhi bharosa na h

L- koi ni swara h na meri Bhabhi cum saali aur aapki beloved and trustrd poti kal use bhej dijiyega who kya h bahi is too sad without her Kahan bhi nahi khaya usne . Aur wese bhi aapki CID poti ko ek maya mission mil jaayega- " mission bhen bachao , pati pataao"

R- laksh ! chup ho jayeye..

l- ji malkin! Wese apka ho gaya kahana wana..

R- haan

L- Toh chalein

Da- theek h par mahri poti..

L- ka bahut pyaar se dular se dhyan rahkeinge aur aapko video call karke roz pure din raaat ki jhalak bhi dikhayenge

Dadi, ragini and laksh start walking out when Laksh turns

L- shivam bhaiya!(servant) mera aur bahi ka khana uske roon mein ghante mein lagadena mein uske saath hi khaunga...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Superb update 👏
Lakshya's conditions 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
awesome start yar
im loving this laksh
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#27
wow just loved the update,😳😳
continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
sooo cool nd funny
while reading I really enjoyed alot
superb can't wait fr nxt one
update soon nd thanks fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hey Harshita!!
Just read both the parts and I just loved it. So cool and funny. Loved Laksh.😊
Laksh's options r so funny.😆
Loved it. Plzz cont soon with ur next part. And thanks for the PM.😃
- Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Thank u so much for reading and appreciating my story love you all

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